Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar

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cyum321

@cyum321

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#201

Awesome......

jaldi sai dosra update bhi kerdo😳

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Geet Malhotra

@SapphireFlames

Navigator

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

such a beautiful update. romantic, hot, passionate and all. 😊

I wonder who was there beside the bed. Continue soon. 😊

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#203

LOVED IT

waiting eagerly 4 maaneet meeting

past was too good..loved every bit of it..

loved maan wen he took geet away..

geet moving ahead in life was superb

n hw come geet doesnt know vicky?? or vicky doesnt know geet??

dint anu tell geet abt vicky??

maan dint bother to mention abt him as he was too lost in geet😆

well awesome update as usual

plz do continue soon

thanks 4 d update n pm😊

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#204

loved it very much n the song is also one of my favorites but who the hell was the person that came to geet's room

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puth

@puth

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

awesome update sonia....
you do write romantic stuff well dear......i loved the song selection as well.............

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#206

awesome update

loved his surprise for her..soo romantic and sweet

ohh maan 😳

omg who was in her room? it better not have been that Brij!

con't soon

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Good to see geet settling in and vicky is so cute and hmm I think pinky was on about NT and awe loved the flashback their moments together was so sweet and passionate especially liked the fishing part it was so cute and awe I really like that song too and recently its been stuck in my head a lot so it was a nice surprise to see you use it in this update and ooh wonder who was in her room and what's cooking in brijs head anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Loved it..... Awesome yaar... Wats wid d last portion is it tym 4r Hp story in past???? Dey r still finding her toh dats means brij will come to mumbai.....

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#209

That was a beautiful update! Great job done 👏

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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#210

hey Sonia!!!

How are you?

I hope your answer will be awesome😊😊

I plead guilty of not having commented on this lovelyy ff of yours for quite sometime now😭

I apologise for the same!!!!

I love this ff too much and hence came here to leave a comment coz its long due!!!

OMG! the title, which obviously i have read 100s of times by now, makes me scared everytime I read it!!! But, i have faith that the ff will take on a happy turn ultimately!!!

even if you have not planned it, people, your dear readers, specially demanding ones like me will flood you with requests and dhamkis and what not for this😆

Coming to the updates....

ADI, Pinky, Pammi-they are so sweet and supportive!

they truly are the saviours of our damsel in distress.....

She is lucky to have them atleast when luck hasn't favoured her with anything else!!!

surprisingly, even sasha seems to be a positive character here.😆

But, NT as usual is her vampy self!

About your depiction of the past........to say the least it is FLAWLESS!!!

I mean, how can you describe verything so beautifully???

I am certainly not complaining that you have such a gift of writing!!!

Anu is such a sweetheart...arjun too seems good!

the way Maaneet love each other, the way you have described their feelings for each other....MESMERISING!!!

I was sooooo pissed off today, but your pm and update made my day...thanks🤗

OMG!!! The villa/cottage sounds so beautiful....haye, how i wish mujhe bhi koi aisa milta jo maan jaisa hota...Maan jaise care karta...Maan jaise...Oh god...I can go on and on....but,i know nothing of that sort will happen! Maan, or even someone close to maan can never exist😕😭

But, yeah, we can always dream na!!😉

i simply love your writing dear!!

I am pleased by the fact that Anu is actually trying to find her(last update), and that she has unshakable faith in her friend!! Geet, oh, how I wish she replied to Anu's mails

i hope anu succeeds in her efforts soon!

Now, since you told us that Maan is going to visit The HOTEL soon( I will thank NT for that😆), i guess Maan should meet Geet soon enough...don't you build some evil plans of not making them meet abhi😡

I hope that they meet soon! i am waiting eagerly to know what went wrong???

i wanna kill this Brij already😡😡🤬

This guy, scheming against the poor Geet just for a piece of land????

you are making merestless dear...waiting really badly to know the truth...

Please increase the frequency of you updates, if possible!!!

N i will take this opportunity to tell you that i may not comment for sometime(again!!) as I have already told quite some of my other ff writers whon i follow eagerly! i am dead busy with college🤢...tests, assignments, projects, presentations, fests.....and falling grades too

So, please forgive me!

but, yeah, i do come regularly looking for updates and m really happy to find one from you!!!!

Chalo, after all this blabbering, I will put it to an end with another 🤗 for you!

waiting for your updates!

Love

Swati

Edited by princess163 - 14 years ago