Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess163

hey Sonia!!!

How are you?
I hope your answer will be awesome😊😊
I plead guilty of not having commented on this lovelyy ff of yours for quite sometime now😭
I apologise for the same!!!!
I love this ff too much and hence came here to leave a comment coz its long due!!!
OMG! the title, which obviously i have read 100s of times by now, makes me scared everytime I read it!!! But, i have faith that the ff will take on a happy turn ultimately!!!
even if you have not planned it, people, your dear readers, specially demanding ones like me will flood you with requests and dhamkis and what not for this😆
Coming to the updates....
ADI, Pinky, Pammi-they are so sweet and supportive!
they truly are the saviours of our damsel in distress.....
She is lucky to have them atleast when luck hasn't favoured her with anything else!!!
surprisingly, even sasha seems to be a positive character here.😆
But, NT as usual is her vampy self!
About your depiction of the past........to say the least it is FLAWLESS!!!
I mean, how can you describe verything so beautifully???
I am certainly not complaining that you have such a gift of writing!!!
Anu is such a sweetheart...arjun too seems good!
the way Maaneet love each other, the way you have described their feelings for each other....MESMERISING!!!
I was sooooo pissed off today, but your pm and update made my day...thanks🤗
OMG!!! The villa/cottage sounds so beautiful....haye, how i wish mujhe bhi koi aisa milta jo maan jaisa hota...Maan jaise care karta...Maan jaise...Oh god...I can go on and on....but,i know nothing of that sort will happen! Maan, or even someone close to maan can never exist😕😭
But, yeah, we can always dream na!!😉
i simply love your writing dear!!
I am pleased by the fact that Anu is actually trying to find her(last update), and that she has unshakable faith in her friend!! Geet, oh, how I wish she replied to Anu's mails
i hope anu succeeds in her efforts soon!
Now, since you told us that Maan is going to visit The HOTEL soon( I will thank NT for that😆), i guess Maan should meet Geet soon enough...don't you build some evil plans of not making them meet abhi😡
I hope that they meet soon! i am waiting eagerly to know what went wrong???
i wanna kill this Brij already😡😡🤬
This guy, scheming against the poor Geet just for a piece of land????
you are making merestless dear...waiting really badly to know the truth...
Please increase the frequency of you updates, if possible!!!
N i will take this opportunity to tell you that i may not comment for sometime(again!!) as I have already told quite some of my other ff writers whon i follow eagerly! i am dead busy with college🤢...tests, assignments, projects, presentations, fests.....and falling grades too
So, please forgive me!
but, yeah, i do come regularly looking for updates and m really happy to find one from you!!!!
Chalo, after all this blabbering, I will put it to an end with another 🤗 for you!
waiting for your updates!
Love
Swati

Hey Swati... long time... how have u been? yup i am as good as always😳
I understand but trust me college days r the best days... enjoy them to the fullest and all the best for your tests and assignments😃
ha ha ha... i m sure ripped apart has kept many away just coz of the khatarnaak title... but trust me... i'll never let u down😃 and i love myself dear and don't have suicidal tendencies to plan a sad ending😆
yea yea Sasha is positive here... jitne negative characters hain utna kafi hain... zyada confusion aur complication nahi ya... and Adi, Pinky and Pammi will keep supporting her like always😳
thanks for the appreciation sweetheart... i m hard core reader... itne saalon ki book reading kahin toh kaam aayegi na😆 glad u r enjoying the description😃 well colonial era cottages had a charm that i have always been fond of... and its always been too classy and beautiful...
yes ya... u should always dream coz thats wht makes life worth living... so dream on sweets u😆... nd don't worry he'll be in Mumbai soon...
thanks a ton dear... love you too😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

loved the update...song selection was too good....

now how was in Geet's room....

Thanks Zaara... glad you enjoyed😃
you'll find that out soon enough

Originally posted by: tellycrazy

Hey Sonia,

I've been following this FF for some time now and had always wanted to comment on how beautifully you write it.but was unable to due to the lack of time😃 You say you are not adept at writing romantic scenes?😛 I say you are a master at it as I saw raw passion and love from both Maan and Geet. 😳😳
I am impressed with the finesse you jump from the flashback to the present. Very few writers could carry out that kind of style comfortably and you are one of them👏 Keep up the good work😃⭐️
I might not be able to comment that often but do add me to your PM list too as it would be a shame To miss out on a story like this.😃😃 Continue soon!

Thanks a ton dear😃
i'm glad that you have liked my writing style and the story.... and i m truly humbled by your words... it feels good to know that i have succeeded in my efforts😳
thanks for appreciating my writings....
would love to hear more from you😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ

Awesome part... loved it

Thanks dear😃
glad you enjoyed

Originally posted by: blueopal

hmm...............wat an FB yaar..............it was soo lovely n enthu too read..............
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb update.........................looking fwd............

Hey pal...
glad you enjoyed
thank you dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25

soniya ...ye kya kiya dear.......maar dalaa☺️
☺️
muahas to you for such a sweetoooooo part....
it was marvellous....👏
haiiiii annu is so sweet ..she blabbered her plans of spending her day with geet to Maan...and she never expected her brother would dash her plans to ground....hate daarji.😡... good for nothing...he behaves as if he is descended from the sun...iska toh kuchch karna padega...😡
and that cottage scene...nonu.....i am in swarglok right now...😍really liked the way you penned it ...it was so captivating n I could imagine the whole scene.. the song you added is one of my favourites song.....😳
me also liking sasha....she is not evil.....😊
and dear zara present ko bhi aagey badao......I want this MU track to end soon.....I have told you this umpteenth times but you are not in a mood to listen.... baby...I am all set with my danda and rotten tomatoes.....so don't you dare ignore my request now..samjhi tum...n what's with this ending...phirse cilffhanger..ab achchi bachchi ki tarah jaldi se next part update kardo.

love
Namita

Namitaaaaa🤗
nah nah sweetie... mera tujhe maarne ka koi iraada nahi tha😆
Anu is too innocent na... Maan took the advantage of the information at hand😉 and dashed her plans cleverly😆... i wouldn't mind deporting men like brij nd daarji to sunAngry
haila... u called me nonu... my mom calls me that to get her way or placate me😆
shoo glad u liked the song sequenceEmbarrassed
arre now since past coming to end... present will take momentum na... but till then i m getting my shield ready😆
didn't i tell u i m in love with cliffhangers😆... me achchi bachchi only dearie... will start penning down the next part shoonnEmbarrassed
thank kuuuuu.... muaaah❤️

Originally posted by: amzu32

awesome update Loved it.....

soo romantic .
who was in her room?????
thanks pm

Thanks dearie....
glad u enjoyed😃
the mystery man will be out soonEmbarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anuvenuch

sonia ,you made my day. after heartwrenching episode of yesterday ,you brought back my smile on my lips .awesome episode.you write so beautifully,full of emotions and luv which i can feel .don't koow about martial status but if you r single i wish to god you shld get maan of ripped apart who will luv you like this. i know you are an amazing girl with lot of emotions and luv ,you deserve maan inyour life . luv you and thankyou for making my day taking me to serene and maaneet dreamworld.

Hey Anu thanks for the blessings and such sweet words sugarbun😳
ha ha... just for the information sake... me not married so the blessings r much requisite😆
its feels great to know that i could do something to uplift your mood and spirit after yesterday's eppy... thanks dearie for appreciating my work... glad u enjoyed the update
Luv you too😳

Originally posted by: janu_2006

Hey

gr8 part..
cont.sooon

Thanks Janu😳
glad you enjoyed... will cont. soon😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

soni...............................☺️☺️

u are such a sweetheart!!!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
moi lubbsss you!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
kya bolu yaar mai sharm se pani pani ho rahi hu!!!☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
lekin agar maine nahi bola to tu mujhe wohi pani me duba dengi!!! and i;m dreaming that my maan will come to save me...!!!!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
okies on behalf on DONS N BEHENS n married lady busy eating parathas!! we give u hugs n hugs n hugs....after the cruel epi last night..this one is like a soothing balme...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
i made REQUEST(sacchi truly..plz bolz!!) to jia that we want JR maaneet in dreams now!!!😭😭😭
yaha to possisible nahi hai...hai kya???😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
okies now about the update....👏👏👏👏👏👏
maan ne anu ko mast ullu babaya!! this was like my smart MSK!!! no jhagda just sneekines!!! me proud of my maan!!! and u sonia...i can imagine ur face when ur bro did this to u!!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
me LIKED arjun in that scene......but u giving hints that all izz not well on that front!! will keep silence till then....tu apne aap ke saath aisa kar sakti hai arjun ko negative bana ke...nahi mai tujhe apne aap ke saath aisa nahi karne dongi!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
and then the song sequence.....song was apt...actions wee wow!!😍😍😍😍😍😍
i was melting just rteading avout it!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
sonia sach me....grt written piece.....its sensuousness was wooowwww!!!😍😍😍😍😍
all the GUNDAS thank you from the bottom of their hearts....and our andolan continues...coz YE DIL MAANGE MORE!!!!!😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
adinky were cute...u can expand there also....also sasha n vicky ...plz plz plz....😳😳😳😳
vicky accha hai...use maan se mat pitwana!!! 😳😳😳😳😳
at the end of it...i'm stillllll ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Ashhuuuu... me lubss uuu too🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
oye tujhe bhi sharam aati hai😲 yeh toh news hai... Eshu... Jia... aaj ki taza khabar... aaj ki taaza khabar... Don Ashu ko bhi sharam aati hai🤣🤣🤣🤣
i'm sho glad ki mera update kisi kaam aaya... to make u feel better... i m more than glad and contended with that😳
tujhe JR Maaneet chahiye... i would love it too... but RA main woh log abhi itna door hain... toh JR kahan se aayega... dreamworld se😆
Sudhar ja😡... Main Anu nahi hoon... nahi toh ek Aashu Ripped apart main introduce karva ke... usse Maan ko rakhi bandhwa doongi... kaise lagegi Aashu gaate hue... Bhaiya mere rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhana😳😆
i wanted to use that song... but was apprehensive ki pata nahi sequence kaisa hoga... its such a relief ki turned out theek thaak😆
and Dil maange more ki bachchi... now time for story to move ahead😆
adinky and Sasha-Vicky... will try in snippets😆
thanks a loads honey😳.... love you... muaaaahhh❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks dearie...
glad u enjoyed😳

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Sonia😊


I haven't been commenting these days but I am totally loving the way you are weaving the story co-ordinating the present and the past. The present evokes strong emotions, one can feel Geet's pain and the past just takes one to a different land!
Amazing!!!👏

Hey Shivangi...
i m glad that you have enjoyed the story so far😃
and the present and the past have managed to invoke the emotions that i had inteded to...
thanks a ton for the lovely comments... will love to hear more from u😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: holyangel

that was wonderful... u wer good at romantic stuff here... ☺️

Thanks Angel...
glad you enjoyed😃

Originally posted by: maan-ki-sanjana

Lovely update dear! Smouldering with passion 😉

Thanks Sanjana
relieved to know that😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cutee987

loved the update......

thanks for pm

continue soon.

Thanks cutie😃
glad u enjoyed
thanks dearie😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
kya kar rahi hai...??I'm feeling booooooooooored??🥱
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