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Posted: 14 years ago
poor geet she became cold who cant feel anything sad & emotional part let see how what future geet hold brilliant update pls contttttttttttttt soonnnnnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update.........................poor geet.............................she had a ray of hope in form of sameer but that too was snatched from her......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice... ithink maan is not real killer.. do con..
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Posted: 14 years ago
PLS UPDATE SOOONNNNNN.......YAAR 😭

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HELLO ALL, SORRY FOR THE DELAY, PART IS WRITTEN, AS SOON AS I GET TIME TO PROOF READ IT, I WILL POST IT, MOST LIKELY BY THE END OF TODAY. SORRY BUSY WITH MANY OTHER THINGS. THANKS FOR YOUR PATIENCE.

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Originally posted by: Asha2010

HELLO ALL, SORRY FOR THE DELAY, PART IS WRITTEN, AS SOON AS I GET TIME TO PROOF READ IT, I WILL POST IT, MOST LIKELY BY THE END OF TODAY. SORRY BUSY WITH MANY OTHER THINGS. THANKS FOR YOUR PATIENCE.


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Posted: 14 years ago

Someone had asked this question that Geet family would come to know about her because she is everywhere in the media.

Answer is no, because this is Delhi local channels and Geet family lives in Hosiarpur. Or you can assume it as creative liberty.

Part 37

There was news splashing in the media, "Sameer's father died in the sleep because of heart attack."

Police reached to Sameer's residence for futher investigation and Sameer's dad found dead. The tape was leaked and it was splashing on every local news channel.

Here is the full story which we found through this tape, Police investigation found the tape through the security camera of Sameer's mansion, the poor soul who lost his son was the accidental killer of his own son, and he couldn't bear this sin on his heavy shoulder hence he faced the fatal heart attack and he died in sleep.

Let's look at the tape carefully.

Maan came to Sameer's room, hiding his form from all the security guards who were busy with eating, running around, and other things, Maan was able to get into Sameer's room as nobody doubted on him whoever had seen him, as it was the wedding house, several people were already in the house and Maan successfully entered Sameer's room, Sameer got little surprised by finding Maan in his room,

"Maan, what are you doing here?"Sameer asked. Maan didn't speak anything hence Sameer continued, "Maan you look puzzled and worried. What happened? Just tell me, you are Geet's friend, right, is everything OK with Geet? Is she fine?"

"Sameer, I love Geet, I loved her from the very beginning, from my childhood, I saw her growing from a little kid to a bubbly girl, we played together, I used to scold her like a father, I used to help her like a friend, I used to love her from my heart like a husband, I found every relation in her, and now because it took me long to realize that I should be the one who should have proposed her, I should be the one who should have takne care of her for the lifetime, I should be the one who should have got married to her, I should be the one who should have realized all these things much sooner before you even knew her, I should be the one who should have helped her to get out of her cruel family, I knew everything deep inside my heart but I was blind, I was in the world of over confidence that she belonged to me and one day she would come to me, I was deaf that I couldn't hear her heartbeat when she was crying for help, I was blind that I couldn't notice her pain, her suffering, and I was mute that I couldn't voice to save her, to help her from the brutal people, but now I have to suffer forever for one mistake I made, do I not deserve one chance to live my life again, to get my love again?, may be not, I am not hear to kill you or to warn you, I know that I shouldn't have come here, but I was killing myself inside, and I came here considering you as my brother, as my friend, I don't have anyone to share my feelings with, I don't have anyone who could understand my situation, and I know that you are the only person who could understand me very well, do you know why? Because you love Geet as much as I do, or may be less or more, but we both love Geet to death, because I know that you can surrender your life for Geet, the way I could do, I know that you are the only person on the earth who could understand my pain and suffering because of our love for Geet, the common foundation of feelings we share, hence I chose to talk with you, I want to come out of this pain, I tried many things but nothing worked on me, and now I just want to get the full relief by taking my own life, because I figured out that it was the only way I could relieve myself from the suffering and pain I was going through, I didn't have courage to say all these things to Geet, because she wouldn't be able to tolerate this, I know that Geet deserves much better person in her life than me, and you are that better person, I am glad that she found you, and you could give her those happiness which I might not be able to give her."

Each word came out of Maan's heart like his heart was screaming, each sentence felt like the last sentence from his mouth and tears rolled down to his cheeks like rain drops had touched the ground. The pain he was going through was apparent in his eyes, in his each word, in his sobbing, he opened his heart like an open notebook which was never touched before and when it was touched it was already torn apart. He was holding gun in his jacket.

Sameer was lost in this traquility, he couldn't believe whatever Maan just said, he felt the equal pain for Maan, he couldn't take Geet away from him, his each nerve died with the thought of losing Geet, the one person for whom he could die, the one person for whom he wanted to live, the one person for whom, he wanted to have rebirth to meet her again and again. He was hearing each world carefully like he was Arjuna and Maan was Lord Krishna who was sharing The Geeta knowledge with him.

Maan was unable to control his feelings, the rage he was going through was incurable, he needed help and he knew that Sameer could be the only person who could understand him and who could help him.

Sameer gathered courage to reach out to Maan to help him, to explain him, but Maan was not ready to listen to anything.

"Sameer, no words, no sympathy, no medicine could work on my pain, you don't need to worry about me, I know what I need to do, I thought to wait till your wedding, but I was unable to wait,I didn't have courage to watch my love becoming someone else, at least not, till I am alive, but I am here to surrender myself, surrender whatever I have, surrender whatever I have achieved, I couldn't confront her, hence I came to you, please take these papers of my will, which says that everything is for Geet, and her happiness, so that I can die happily, so that I can answer to God in heaven if I deserve heaven, so that I can achieve satisfaction that at least she will be still part of me at least some ways as she will have her grace on Khurana Construction, my only desire, my only last wish was to be part of her someways, and you could do this for me, I owe you this favor, and I will repay this favor by demanding Geet and your life longer from God when I will meet God, please say yes"

Suddenly there was a spark in Maan's eyes which Sameer had seen for the first time, amidst all the tears and pain Maan was going through; there was some deception in his eyes.

"Look at this loser, he wants to sacrifice everything for his love, if I was him, I would have killed you and I would have won Geet. Yes I am not stupid as Maan, I am Aman, but the funny thing is he doesn't know about my existence, as I am his alter ego, so now you know me, you are the only one who would know about me, keept it a secret, and yes I have suggested him so many times to kill you or to do something about you, to ask Geet for love or to kidnap her, but this loser, never did anything, he never listened to me, I tried hard to empower him, but whenever I was close to my prey, he emerged there and spoiled my whole plan. Let him die, because he is of no use." Aman said with evil smile.

Sameer choked up with emotions, he couldn't breath for few minutes, he had read about alter ego in books but he never knew about its real existence and today he witnessed a reality, a real alter ego, and he couldn't believe that Maan loved Geet to the extent that he transferred himself into the different world, he hadn't seen this strong love before, but he couldn't make up his mind about his actions.

TO BE CONTINUED……………

SEJAL

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Posted: 14 years ago
U ENDED IT IN WRONG TIME..... AWESOME
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh that was short, waiting to know what happened that day
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Posted: 14 years ago
How can he kill his own son and why did he had to do this hope geet see all the recording

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