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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Awesome update
Loved it loadz
loved whn maan said gol matol mishti
sooo cute
loved when they were staring in the rain
loved geets answer back to sasha
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
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that gol matol mishty thing suits a chubby geet but she is so cute that it suits her well😳
thanks dear😊
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Originally posted by: shining_moon


😆😆...yeah yeah I know that...thats a forbidden word for u😆
will update tomorrow😛



omigosh!!!!!!!!!!!!
u updating today!... me cant wait!...
pls update sooonnn...:)))))))


BTW heya anu, arzoo... hw u both have been/... :))))
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaanEET_FAN



omigosh!!!!!!!!!!!!
u updating today!... me cant wait!...
pls update sooonnn...:)))))))


BTW heya anu, arzoo... hw u both have been/... :))))


hey priya
I m good😛
will be updating in an hour or may be less😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: siroilily

Awesome update. 👏 starting hug n geet's questioning to maan was just superb n 'ni muiye' song was so apt.Her dancing in rain whle maan watchng her in trance ishh! 😳 loved it loved it loved it ⭐️ it was mindblowing...Btw ye vicky ne again kyun kaha😕 pls update soon


thanks dear😳😳

vicky was refering to rahul's incidence that he doesn't want anyone to harm geet in anyway


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: QueenbeePallavi

hey Anupam sorry for the late reply..was busy with the exams... was not a bit well too..but here I am commenting on one on one!!...lovd the part specially geet unknowingly falling so badly for her childhood buddie and best friend..and maan that beautiful soul is already so much in love with our dear little princess!!!😍bechara yash and vicky..so much troubling their minds for knowing whats's wrong with their barbie and getting into checking herself out..hahaha..she's so innocent yaar!!! ❤️lovely update do keep it up and update sooner!!!👍🏼


its ok...😊
hope ur exams went well
thanks for the lovely comment😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yayy an update...can't wait😍
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chapter-14





Geet got up and stretched her hands yawning like a small kid and wished her babaji a sweet good morning...!!...she sat there on her bed for a while contemplating on the same weird dream she had last night again...!!




Hey babaji...why am I having this absurd dream always...??...everytime I feel like someone was really there in my room very close to me...!!




She sighed rubbing her eye and went to the washroom for her morning routine...!!...later she took her mattress and went to the balcony for her yoga and this time purposely a bit early to spent more time with maan but to her utter dismay he was not present there...!!




Ab ye maan kahan reh gaya...??...she frustratedly dropped her mat on the floor




When I don't want him around he is always there to irritate me and now when I...she left the sentence in the mid and thought for a while...Geet why do you want to be with him...??...from the past three-four days you are stalking him like a despo...her hand automatically went to her wide open mouth to cover it gasping at her thoughts...!!





Oh god...am I suffering from some obssessive compulsive disorder...??...her eyes popped out




She instantly jerked her hand down...no no its not possible...!!...geet tu bhi na jhalli hogayi hai bilkul...ye sab bekar ki baatein chor and get down to work...!!




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Geet hurriedly descended the stairs...!!




Geet how many times have I told you not...



Not to run on the stairs...geet completed her line...I know dearest mama but I am getting late...!!




Then why do you take so much time in getting ready...??...rano chided her




Oh rano let my princess have her breakfast first she is getting late, you can chide her later...a voice came from the dining table and geet looked toward the direction...!!




PAPAJI...!!




Geet jumped in excitement seeing her papaji and ran to him...mohinder crushed his daughter in his arms while geet felt so nice being in her father's hug after so long...how much she missed it during her turbulent days...!!




How are you princess...??...he asked lovingly caressing her hair




I am fine papaji missed you a lot but when did you returned...??




Last night but you were asleep by then so I didn't disturbed you...and I missed you too dear...he felt his eyes getting watery remembering the dreadful time she had to face in his absence...!!




They broke the hug and settled on their respective chairs while rano with the help of servants served the breakfast...!!





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Maan have you submitted the participants list to shukla sir...??




Yes sam infact as our school is the host this time sir is going to be very selective...the participants have to qualify in their games before the real sports meet start...!!




So all set for defending the basket ball cup for DPS...she said with a smirk




The cup will not leave DPS till Maan singh khurana is here...he said in full attitude while sam nodded her head in affirmation




Any new recruitment in your team...??




Not really but there are some new applicants from 10th std so there will be a practice match to see their talent...!!




Atleast you can handle all in one match itself...but I have to tolerte every new applicant for the cheer leaders group and its really torturing...!!...most of them are so clumsy...uff...!!



Maan chuckled at her expression...



Bahut hansi aa rahi hai...but remember I am taking all this pain for our basket ball team only...she said as a matter of fact




Yeah yeah...your cheer leaders win the cup right...!!...he sarcastically replied...well for your kind information most of the time they just distract my team mates...!!




Listen...




Hey guys seems like you both are appreciating each other's work well...adi chuckled while sam and maan join him




Btw adi hows the march past practice going on...??




Don't ask buddy...he made the most helpless face on earth on which maan and burst into laughter...!!




Oh adi you are making such a pathetic face as if its the most untolerable punishment...dsam managed to speak between her laughter




Exactly...!!




Come on adi...its not that bad




Kehna aasan hai...!!




Ok guys I guess its time for assembly lets move...sam showed them her watch and they went to the assembly ground





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Vicky what's the plan...??




Right now I want to confirm my doubts...!!




Look buddy I don't think geet is having a boyfriend or something I mean she is a kid...!!




Exactly yash...!!...she's a kid and way too naive to understand a boy's real intention and I just don't want to take any risk...!!...you remember na how easily geet forgave that bas**** rahul and invited him in the party...if maan bhai wouldn't have been there to save her...he left the end to tril of dreading to speak the rest...!!




I am in...!!...I'll not let any other rahul come near her...yash said while vicky appreciated




We'll keep an eye on her activities...vicky suggested




Cool...but make sure geet doesn't get to know about it or else she'll kill us both




Yeah man...I fear for my life too...vicky laughed alongwith yash and went to the assembly ground




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Geet ran to her classroom and dropped her bag on her seat and ran back to the assembly hall...she was just on time and assembly was about to start...!!




She joined her line and glanced at the stage to quench the thirst of her eyes before closing them for the morning prayer...!!




The assembly finished and students started to disperse in their respective classes and line of 10th B and 12th A were moving side by side when geet heard sam's voice beckoning someone in 12th A's line...




Hey you...out of the line...sam asked a girl with short skirt to leave the line who was arguing back in full attitude




Geet was least interested in hearing their argument as her mind was preoccupied with only one person...maan...!!...so she was moving ahead slowly but froze in her tracks when maan's voice entered her ears...!!




What the hell is going on here...??




Maan asked in a stern voice grabbing the attention of sam, geet and the girl...!!




Geet moved to the side letting others enter the classroom while herself craned her neck and tried to see what maan was doing...!!




Maan...this girl is not in proper uniform and instead of giving a good explaination she is arguing back...sam said totally frustrated with the girl while geet checked out the girl who was wearing a very short skirt and was not wearing a tie too...!!




Sam there is no need to argue she has the permission from the principal...maan said with a straight face




Both sam and geet looked at maan in surprise...this was the first time maan was so casual about someone breaking rule...!!




There stare broke with the obnoxious voice of the girl who was arguing with sam...




Thanks maan...she gave a smirk to sam which urged geet strongly to punch her right on the face...!!




But maan...




Maan cut her in the mid...




Sam principal sir has granted her permission for today. She arrived yesterday only so didn't got a chance to shop so now just finish it we have more important works to do...maan said while looking at his watch




Maan how do you know...??




Bcoz dad has introduced us before the assembly...replied the girl with a stupid smirk again




Dad...??




Oh I didn't gave you my intro...well I am Alisha joshi ,Mr. Arun joshi that means your principal's daughter so you better watch it and think twice before messing with me...she said with an attitude




This broke geet's tolerance level and she interrupted...




So what...that doesn't mean you own this school...!!




The trio turned their gaze towards geet who was shooting daggers at while maan frowned at her intervention knowing well it will lead to a useless quarrel...!!




Who are you...??...she scanned geet top to bottom and made a disgusting face




Before geet could retort maan stopped her...




Handa what are doing here...??...go back to your class...!!...he said with a stern voice




Geet was super duper angry at maan now, first he supported that bi*** then she insulted sam di and he didn't stopped her and now was ordering her as if she has committed a crime...!!




She looked at him with a murderous eye...




For your kind information I am a moniter and I am free to be at any place any time I want for the convineance of class...!!




Maan raised his brow at her tone sensing her rage in the answer...




And exactly what convineance are you providing your class by standing here at the door at jumping in an argument that not even concern you...??




She felt like strangling him at that very moment forgetting everything but contrlled herself...




I was going to get the attendence register from the locker room and it does concern me when something is related to my sister...she said with firm determination




Sam came to geet before maan could say anything...




Geet its ok dear...you go to your class its almost time and don't get into useless argument with useless people...she said the last part in her ear not wanting to create another scene...!!





Alisha was watching geet and maan's argument with great interest...she has heard a lot about handas and khuranas from her cousin who studied in DPS. After her dad introduced her to maan to help her in adjusting in the new school she was head over heels for maan and now she wanted to be maan's gf at any cost...!!




Geet looked at sam then gave a deadly look to alisha as if warning her to be in limits and finally gave an icy glare to maan before storming off to the locker room...!!




After geet left alisha turned to maan and gave an over friendly smile...




Thank you so much maan for helping me otherwise I would have wasted my time in tackling that loser...she indicated to geet




Sam was infuriated at this but before she could say anything she heard a stern warning tone...




Alisha first thing I have only allowed you to wear this crap for today and would not tolerate it from tomorrow onwards, secondly sam is the head girl so better you obey her bcoz your principal's daughter status doesn't mean anything as all students are equal in DPS and thirdly and most importantly...he paused and gaze her with a burning rage in his eyes...geet is not a loser so don't even dare call her that...!!





Sam jumped with joy seeing her buddy back in action. For a second she feared he would not oppose this bimbo...and the last part was a bonus to her happiness...!!




Alisha just couldn't believe what she heard...seeing his argument with geet she thought they are at logger heads but the threatening in his voice send shivers down her spine...she simply changed her tone and said...




Ah...sure...I didn't mean that and I will be in proper uniform from tomorrow...she tried to cover up not wanting to make a bad impression of her in maan's mind...!!




Hmm...sam lets go...!!




Sam gave a smirk to alisha and went with maan while alisha curled her hands into a fist in anger and marched towards her classroom...!!




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Geet was boiling at maan's same khurana attitude or mre bcoz of jealousy seeing him supporting some other GIRL...!!




Gadha, ullu da patha...I was a fool to think he has changed back to his sweet maan self but no he is still the same devil head boy...!!




Geet what are you thinking...??




Vicky asked seeing her lost in thoughts from the morning itself...!!




Nothing...just contemplating a plan to murder your devil brother...!!...she said as if talking about cutting vegetables




All looked at her with wide eyes and thought...




Here she goes again...!!




Before vicky could ask further yash jumped with excitement...




Hey vicky look there's the new hot chick I told you about...all turned back to find a girl sitting at the corner table with sasha and tasha...!!




Geet's suppressed anger began to surface again as she saw alisha




Wow man...!!...she is awesome...!!




SHUT UP YOU MORONS...!!




Geet shouted at the boys making them literally jump from their seats...




She is aweful and dare you look at her...she warned them...that chudail is not even worth a look...!!



Geet what happened...??...do you know her...??...pari asked while others looked knotted their brows not understanding geet's sudden outburst for a stranger...!!




No I am not fine and I hate that show off chudail...she hissed




But how do you know her...??...as far as I know its her first day in school...nt added trying to get more info from geet




I gave her a piece of mind in the morning while she was arguing with sam di...and then that devil he not only supported that bi*** but also argued with me...she made a baby angry face complaining about him




What maan supported her but why...??




Bcoz that chudail is princi's daughter and he gave her permission for dressing up a/c to her choice for today...!!




She is princi's daughter...!!




But geet I don't think maan bhai supported her for that reason I mean he has never favoured anyone...!!




Oh then am I lying...??




Uh...no ofcourse not...vicky said meekly fearing her rising anger...!!




I think may be maan is attracted towards her...yash said in a low voice




What...??




All shouted in unison




Are you out of your mind...??




Why...??...is he gay...??...come on buddy he is also a guy and when some girl like alisha is there anyone would support her...!!




Geet felt so bad hearing that like her fav candy was being snatched away from her...!!




Maan ka to pata nahi but that alisha is for sure interested in him...nt said




But how are you so sure...??




Geet you are so naive...I have heard she has applied her name for basket ball cheer girls team and here also just see how she is giving flirty smile to maan




They turned to look from alisha to maan and noticed the cheesy smile on alisha's face while maan was not even looking at her...!!




Geet felt better with maan's ignorance but still wanted to chop off that alisha's head




Whatever it is we should not waste our time discussing that bimbo...pari said to calm geet down which actually worked




Yes pari you are right and you...she pointed her finger at vicky...you better stay away from her vaise bhi she is a senior, old citizen you see...I hope your taste is not that bad and if it is I'll make sure to amend it...!!




Vicky gulped at nodded like an obidient child...!!




Geet smiled at her dominance...




Good boy...aur tumhare us devil bhai aur us chudail ko to mai thik karungi...she had an evil smirk on her face...!!





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Sam di...!!




Hey geet...sam smiled at geet




I want to join the cheer girls group...!!




Sam's smile changed to frown hearing the unusual demand from geet...!!




Geet what do you want...??...sam asked again to confirm she heard right




Di I want to join the cheer girls team for the school basket ball tournament...she gave a wide smile




Baby are you alright...??...sam checked her forehead while geet rolled her eyes




Uff di...I am fine...and please let me join na...!!





But you never liked it and moreover there are many applicants this time so I can't take you just like that...!!




Don't worry di I am ready to give a selection test and accept me only after you are convinced. Now can you please write my name...!!




Ok...but we have the selection tomorrow will you be to prepare...??




Oh...love you di...geet hugged sam and ran away from there




Sam shaked her head at geet's antics...pagli...!!





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Geet was passing by the basket ball court when her eyes caught something...something which totally hypnotized her and she stopped dead in her tracks...!!




She heart beat paced up suddenly and the strange sensation cropped up again in her whole body...!!




There he was standing in his basket ball vest playing basket ball with his team mates...moving like a leopard dodging each player...!!




His movements were giving prominence to every muscle of his sexy body mesmerizing geet who stood there in trance oblivious to the whole world...!!



The sweat beads lingering on his broad shoulders were creating a sinful temptation in her to grab him in her arms and taste those droplets...a sudden urge was evoking in her heart...!!




She saw his hazel eyes fixed on the basket while he swiftly moved towards it with the ball in his hand...he was so fast that no ne could even match up with him let alone snatching the ball from his steel grip...!!




He took a slight leap and threw the ball towards the basket and...BASKET...!!




He jerked his wet hair shedding the sweat drenching it making the girls around faint literally while boys envy him for eveything he was...!!




Geet kept gawking at his super hot look with her big innocent eyes not knowing the desires erupting within her heart...!!




And as maan turned his eyes caught the doe shaped eyes of hers and their gaze got locked into each other...!!




Maan's eyes sparkled with a mischievious glint and he started moving towards geet with his eyes fixed on her...!!




Geet was totally hypnotized under his charms and didn't even realized he was nearing her slowly while she kept looking at him with an inquisitve gaze...!!




Soon maan reached very close to her and she realized he was just a meter apart...she started moving back automatically as maan moves his legs forward...




The heat radiating from maan's body was passing through her own so close they were...




All she could hear was...'DHAK DHAK'...the wild beats of her heart while every other sound evaporated from their surrounding...!!...he raised his hand and she instantly closed her eyes anticipating his action but instead of touching her his hand found its way behind her a grabbed the towel from the back...!!




She looked back at him shocked out of her wits and went red when he raised his brows questioningly...!!




What happened handa...??...trying to learn basket ball...??




Ahh...I...she gulped not knowing what to reply being caught in the awkward situation...!!




She simply turned around in a jiffy and ran back to her classroom leaving a totally confused maan behind...!!




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so as I promised here is the long update...!!

maanet_09(don't know ur name)...this is spl for u for n the dhak dhak part for arzoo😉...hope I have not disappointed u all😊

thanks for those lovely comments of urs😳😳

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Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wooowww seriously dude...such an awesome update

I already hate that Alisha!!

Cant wait to read about Geet's tryout

And i loved the dhak dhak part and the bit where Maan stood up for Geet...i wanted to jump up like Sam too lol

VIcky and Yash to zaroor pite gaye!!!

Hahahaha

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OMG anupam!! woWWW is da word for ur update😉... m reading it after a very long tym coz i had exams😕 and was busy so now i finally got tym and thought ov reding this ff ov urs which is my favourite😃...
awesome update👍🏼... keep writing and entertaining us😛...

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