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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

love the dialogues between maan and geet, go mol mishti...and the rain dance part...only that he came back to his saru self so soon


well maan just wanted to stop her from crying thats why he mentioned the mishty word..😉...not much change in his character...😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

hey anupam can we get a update on this one peeshh *batting my eyelashes* 😳


I answered this ques of urs in DTBID comment...plzz check it...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Bueatyfully written part but r u planning to take leap any soon. . . .


thanks...

nope...no leap...this story is all about teenage love😳😳...I m thinking of writing a short intro of this to make it more clear...but wen..??...😕...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey Anu,

Loved the update

Maan can't see his Mishti breaking down❤️

Geet & her questions put Maan's feigned ignorance in jeopardy

Liked Maan's "lame" excuses & also like them teasing each other 😉

Gol Matol Mishti 😆

Song was so appropriate to the situation

Maan is sadist (like u)😛, Geet following & he ignoring her😈( I can't believe he did not notice)

Sam should be cupid

Rain dance 😍 & situation arising due to it

Sherni got scared of Sher or that was something else?

Good one Geet, Sasha need taste of her own medicine

Vicky's protective instincts 😆 are boud to create havoc

Continue Soon, Want to see Maaneet's reaction to vicky's behaviour






me sadist...😭😭...I never intended to leave u at cliffhanger in any parts but wen it happens I love u all being impatient...😈...😆😆

nyways thanks yaar...love the way u comment on every scene😳😳😳

sam n cupid...🤔

I had planed rain dance much before I started writing this ff...☺️

the song is my fav😛...glad it suited the situation

love u

anupam

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Oops ye stry toh fully chnage hogayi

Im so missing that fyting Maaneet
Geet became so quite n does idiotic thgs to gain his attention
Maan is controlling himself n for sure he wnt let her win in wat she is thnking
Waiting for old Maaneet to be back
Vicky will paka do sumthg nw


you think story change hogayi...ahaan...then should wait for the next two updates...😉

don't worry u'll get maaneet's fight dose...😆...ye geet ka lovey dovey part sirf is update ke liye tha😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh no geet ka lovely dovey part sirf iss update ke liye tha...
Naheeen yay naheen ho saktaaa. Or wait shell
Fight with him always but one word against him from sum1 else's mouth, n she'll kill them. Daikho atleast do this much for maan n me.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Oh no geet ka lovely dovey part sirf iss update ke liye tha...
Naheeen yay naheen ho saktaaa. Or wait shell
Fight with him always but one word against him from sum1 else's mouth, n she'll kill them. Daikho atleast do this much for maan n me.


dont panic arzoo...u'll get maaneet's dhak dhak part too😉

anything for u😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: salmankhanrulz

the update was beautiful...i jst loved it...its sooo nice geet is falling in love with maan...plz write more on geet staring at him n trying ti impress him


impress maan...😲...arey yaar don't underestimate my geet...there is no need for her to impress him...she is the princess of heart afterall😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
i am usually a silent reader but after reading your 2 ffs i could not help but to let know how much i love thank you you for such a wonderful ff and would tell me when you ae gonna updat sorry if i bothered you
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazmaa

i soo loved the updatte...
it was brillaint and the song was sooo beautiful heard it for the first time today and i am totally in love with it...


u heard it for the first time...😲...but nyways I am glad u liked it😳😳...its one of my fav

thanks for liking the update😛

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