Love You Forever sajan ss updated pg 40 1/18/2012 - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update yaar
loved it a lot
hope sajan jaldi miljayein...aur woh malhotra..no words for him
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey preeti
awesome update
sam n pari scene were so cute
cannot wait for the next part
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOved it...superb...just hope payel b able to tell samrat the truth ..plss cont soon pari ...it was awesome update ...n thnx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update.
so finally payal knw sajan n their children's true identity.
lovely update.
pari is so cute n so attached to sam................he's her father after all!
waiting for next update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
pari is so attached to sam in such a short time
cery nice upadte.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update
eagerly waiting for sajan to meet
do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome.
superb.
fab...
loved it...
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey gr8 update dear....loved it....
waiting 4 nxt update when sam cums to kno abt gunji....love pari n sam's scene...
update soon n sry can't comment long coz m using mobi
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Posted: 14 years ago
When r u updating? Do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry guys for taking forever to update...i was busy with school work and when i was free from that i had some family problems. so i dint have any time to update...bigg sorry again...here is the next update..

the next morning payal got ready and then gathered courage to call samrat. when she calls samrat she asks him to comve over quickly as she has something important to tell him. samrat got tensed on what she wants to tell him. so he quickly got ready and then got karan angad and pari ready and went to payals house. when he got there payal took pari angad and karan to paris room and told them to play there. then went back to samrat

S: payal tumhe mujhse kya zarori baat kar ni thi
P; bhai aj ab ka intizar katam ho jaega
S: tum kis intizar ke baat kar rahi ho mujhe kuch samaj nahi a raha
P; ap abhi sab samaj jae ge

then she took him to gunjans room

P; bhai andar ja ke dekh lo

when samrat went inside he got shocked to see gunjan lieing down. but then he ran to gunjan hugged her tightly.

S: chashmish tum kaha jale gayi thi. maine tumhe bohot miss kiya.
then he kisses her all over her face. but then he realized that gunjan isnt moving or saying anything.

S; chashmish tum kuch ke kyun nahi rahi ho

G...

S: pls chashmish

payal goes to him

P; bhai di na bol sakti hai aur na hil sakti hai
S got shocked; k...ky...ky..kya matlab hai tumhara
P; di ek zinda lash ki tara hai
S: yeh nahi ho sakta
P; yeh sach hai
S: nahi tum mazak kar rahi ho na
P; nahi bhai
S: pls yeh mazak band karo. pls
P; pls bhai samaj ne ki koshish karo ke di ab hil nahi sakhti hai
Samrat started to cry; y...y...ye..yeh kaise huwa
P; pata nahi jab main yaha aiy thi tum di aishe thi
S; par tum yaha chashmish ke saat kya kar rahi ho
P; mujhe to pari ka aur di ka kayal rakhne ko yaha job mili thi. jab mujhe job mili tab mujhe sirf yeh pata tha ke mujhe ek bachi aur uskhi ma ka kayal rakhna hai.
S: matlab pari meri beti hai
P; ha
S: par tum chashmish ko kaise janti ho
P; main di ko coffee shop main mili thi. ek din main waha gayi thi aur kuch ladkhi mujhe cherne lage to tabhi gunjan di ne mujhe bachaya aur fir hum ache dost ban gaye. meri koi di nahi thi isiliye main di ko pucha tha agar main unhe di ke sakti hoon. aur di man gayi
uskhe bad hum 3, 4 bar mile the par fir mujhe apni job ki vaja se move hona para aur fir humari itni baat nahi hoti thi. par fir mujhe 4 mahine pehle malhotra ne job offer ki thi isilye main kyaha bapas a gayi par mujhe nahi pata tha ki mujhe di ka khayal rakh na hai
S; yeh malhotra koun hai
P; ek bohot bura admi hai jab main ushe mili thi tab mujhe nahi pata tha ke voh itne bure hai. ush din bhi malhotra ne mera haat jalaya tha. par maine hunhe jane bhi nahi diya ke main di ko janti hoon
S; chashmish ki yeh halat kaishe huwi
P; malhotra roz di ko ek injection deta hai pata nahi kis cheez ka jab main yaha ay ki bilkul aishe thi
S: tumhe pehle kyun nahi mujhe bataya ke chashmish tumhare saath hai
P; mujhe pata nahi tha ke di apki patni hai. mujhe to kal pata laga tha. aur maine kal isi liye nahi bataya kyun ki mujhe kal laga ke ap shayad ki ke halat ke zimidar ho. par fir kal ke bad mujhe yakin ho gaya ke ap di ke halat ke zimidar nahi ho sakte isilye maine apko aj yaha bulaya
S: par yeh malhotra ke chashmish se kya dushmani hai
P: mujhe bhi nahi pata
S: kher yeh sab bate bad main bhi hate ho jaye ge par abhi tum apne aur pari ka saman pack karo aur main chashmish ka kar ta hoon. .kyun ki aj main tum teno ko apne ghar ke kar ja raha hoon. ab teeno yaha nahi reho ge
P; teek hai main pehle pari ka samran pack kar thi hoon

but when she was going the door bell rang.

P; koun ho sakta hai. kahi malhotra to nahi.
then she quickly goes to the door and looks through the little hole on the door from where she an see whose at the door. and she saw that its malhotra
P; oh no malhotra intni jaldi kaise a gaya.

then she quicky goes to samrat and tells hiim that malhotra his here and to hide. samrat hides in gunjans closets. then payal goes to karan angad and tells them to hide in the closet behind the boxes and not to make any noise and if they do what she says she will give them chocolate. she then quickly takes pari and goes to open the door. when she opens the door. malhotra gets mad
M: inni der kyun lagai darwaza kolhne main
P; voh...voh main...main pari ka diaper change kar rahi thi
M: teek hai teekh hi ab tumhne gunjan ko aj ki diwai di.
P; main bhool gayi pari ko sambhal te sambal te.
M; acha teek hai mujhe voh diwai de do aur andar chale jao.
P; teek hai

after payal gives malhotra the medicine. he goes in gunjans room and gives her the injection like always.. and samrat was watch him do this

M; arre gunjan tumhe kya laga tha ke main chale gaya hoon. main kahi nahi jao ga. apna badla jo tumhare saath hai main pura to karu ga. vaishe bhi tora bohot to main ne tora bohot to badla le liya hai par abhi bohot kuch baki hai. arre yad aya kal tumhara janam din tha na.. tooo bad tum apne birthday nahi celebrate kar saki.

listening to all this was making samrat mad. he just wanted to come out and kill malhotra but samrat controlled his anger because he wanted to why malhotra wants to take revenge from gunjan. samrat also decided that he will ruin malhotra becuase he has tortured his chashmish a lot.

after a while mahlotra left. payal locked the door and made sure that he liet. when she was positive that hes gone she went and got karan angad out and gave them there chocolate she promised. then she went to samrat and told him that he can come out. when he came out he told payal to pack her and paris stuff quickly. samrat was done packing gunjans stuff becuase all he got was gunjans clothes and he just threw them in the suitcase. then he went to payal to see if she was done. when he got there he was karan angad putting paris stuff in a suit case and payal putting her stuff in another. seeing that karan angad were helping her he want ourside and called his house and told the servants to clean two rooms one next to his room and the other next to karan angads. and told them to get find painters so he can get the rooms painted. then he told them to put karan angads baby bed in his room. when he was done telling the servents what to do he went to see if payal was done. when he saw that she isnt. he got a suitcase and got alot of paris important thiings and put them in the suitcase. then said that he will but the rest. and then he got all of payals clothes and put then in the suitcase and closed all the suitcases. then he said we should go now. he doesnt want to stay here any longer.

Samrat and payal took all of the suitcases and put them in the car. then samrat went and picked gunjan up and took her to the care. while payal took pari and told karan angad to come alsoo. and they all left from malhotras house and were going to shergill house away from the misery.

i dont know how it turned out...sorry if its not up to the mark...dont forget to comment

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