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goodgirl5

@goodgirl5

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

lovelyyyyyyyyyy updateeeeeeeeee update soonnnnnnn hafsha and thankuuuuu yar tune urdu me likha mere liyeeeeeee thanks alotttttt

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Jyothi N

@-Jyo-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Sounds interesting Hafsah

Loved CS conti nue soon.....................................

I am really sorry not able to comment regular basis, i comment whenever i am online. All the best.................................

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

nice ff................

well geet being self centric and attitude thoda ajeeb lag raha hain but i think i can imagine dd playing that part..........

waiting for maan intro.............

sent buddy req..............can u pl add me to ur pm list.........

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nazsij

@nazsij

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

i liked it.so pls add me in ur pm list.continue soon.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

intro and part 1
very cool intro.................very nice start.................cont soon and pm me............

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Hafsah Qamar

@c00l_girl

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

hey firends!! thanks aloooot for liking my update!! love u!! 🤗
without wasting your time, here comes another update. hope u like it too. so read n enjoy:

PART-2
At maan's house:
maan k ghar pe to geet k ghar se sab kuch different tha. wahan pe geet uthne ko tayar na thi aur dadaji ko uthana para.😆lekin yahan to maan ko uthane ki zarurat hi nahin pari. maan subha subha jogging k liye park gaya hua tha aur dadi maa tea kay sath newspaper parh rahi thi. jab maan ghar mein enter hua:
maan: good morning dadi maa!!
dadi maa: aray beta! aap aa gaye.. good morning!!
maan: dadi maa breakfast ready hai?? mujhe bohat bhook lagi hai..
dadi maa: (smiling) han beta aap jaaiye, fresh ho jaaiye. main nakul se breakfast lagane ko kehti hoon..
maan: ok dadi maa!
dadi maa: maan bhi na! kabhi kabhi bilkul bachon wali harkat karte hain..
maan fresh ho kay aya aur breakfast karne kay liye beth gaya. breakfast mein parathe baney thay n then:
maan: waise dadi maa breakfast mein kya hai??
dadi maa: beta aj aalu k parathe hain.
maan: dadi maa!! you are great.. i just love you!! aalu kay parathe yummy!
dadi maa: acha beta ab maska lagana band kariye aur breakfast kijiye es se pehle k breakfast thanda ho jaye..
maan: ok dadi maa!!😆
breakfast karne kay baad:
maan: dadi maa! main college k liye ready hone ja raha hoon.
dadi maa: ok beta!
ready hone k baad:
maan: dadi maa!! main colege ja raha hoon, im getting late..
dadi maa: acha beta! dekh k jaaiye ga aur car dhayan se drive kijiye ga.
maan: dadi maa! main ab bacha nahin raha.. i'll take care of myself!
dadi maa: ab apko larte hue der nahin ho rahi.. ab jaaiye..
maan: ok im going.. bye dadi maa!!

ok friends! abi tak bas itna hi.. i know its too short..😔 but i'll try to update the next part longer.. so friends if u like this update then plz press the like button!! n if u dont like it then feel free to criticize.. n do suggest me some ideas if u want to!😃
thanks,
hafsah

Edited by dollie16 - 14 years ago