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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
wooooooooooooooooooooooooh
Congrates for ur own CS
Nice introduction.................................
Love all the characters......😳
Update first part soon
Its sooooooooooooooooo nice CS
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
wow its great
cant wait to read it yaar
update it soon
waiting
good luck😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
hey friends!! thanks a ton for liking my ff character sketch..😃
im very happy to see it n it means alooot to me!!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
hey friends!! im very excited to post my first ff update..😃 hope u all will like it..😊 so without wasting ur time, here comes the update, so read n enjoy..😉

PART-1
ek subha geet bilkul ek chote se cute se bache(baby) ki tarah soi hui thi k achank dadji usay uthaney k liye aye:

dadaji: geet beta! jaldi utho, subha ho gayi..
geet: dadaji abi nahin..
dadaji: beta jaldi utho aj college ka pehla din hai..
geet: dadaji sirf 2 minute na!!
dadaji: beta aise nahin karo, jaldi se utho aur nashta karne aa jao. main driver se keh k car nikalwata hoon or phir main tumhen college chorne jaunga.
geet: (jaldi se uthi) oh babaji! aj mujhe dadaji k sath jana padega.. oh no!!

geet jaldi se uthi aur fresh ho k nashta karne k liye neeche ayi. abi wo nashta karne hi lagi thi k achanak bell baji. servant ne door khola aur wo aur koi nahin geet ki best friend naintara thi. naintara ander ayi aur dadaji aur geet se mili aur nashta karne lagi.. thodi der mein dadaji ki awaz ayi:

dadaji: geet beta jaldi nashta kar lo main tum dono ko college chor aaunga..
geet: (sochte hue:"agar aaj dadaji k sath college gayi to subha subha lecture sunna padega aur abhi mera koi mood nahin hai lecture sunne ka")
(phir boli) dadaji! aap kyun takleef karte hain.. naintara hai na, main us k sath chali jaungi.
dadaji: beta tu aisa kyun bol rahi hai??
geet: nai dadaji! aisi koi baat nahin hai. bas aise hi ap ka time waste hoga.
dadaji: acha theek hai beta. jaisi teri marzi..

phir dadaji wahan se chale gaye..

naintara: geet tu ne aisa kyun kaha dadaji se??
geet: oh naintara!! tu bhi na kuch nahin samajhti.. agar aj hum dadaji k sath jate to wo humein lecture sunate aur mera college k first day lecture sunne ka koi mood nahin hai..
naintara: geet!! tu bhi na bas.. acha jaldi nashta kar phir ready ho ja. main aj college k 1st day late nahin hona chahti..
geet: naintara!! khair to hai na?? aj tujhe itni jaldi kyun hai college jane ki??
naintara: nahin yaar aisi koi baat nahin hai bas im very excited today.. tu excited nahin hai??
geet: excited aur college jane k liye.. no way!! wohi roz teachers k faces dekho..
naintara: zara boys k bare mein to socho..
geet: abhi tak mujhe mere standard ka boy nahin mila.. aur aaj to college k boys ka lucky day hai kyunki woh mujhe dekheinge.. jab main college enter karungi to sab mujhe dekhte reh jaenge.. aur phir us k baad bas main hi main un k khayalon mein hoongi..
naintara: acha ab bas kar. zyada urr matt hawaon mein.. tere es attitude ki waja se aj hum dono college k liye zaroor late ho jayenge..
geet: (gusse mein) tu ne mujhe abhi kya kaha.. attitude??
naintara: acha meri maa mujhse galti ho gayi.. ab ja aur ready ho ja..
geet: thats like a good girl. acha hua k tu ne apni galti maan li warna tujhe to pata hai k main kya karti.. acha ab main ja rahi hoon ready hone k liye.. bas 10 minutes wait karna..
naintara: (sochte hue) ye aur sirf 10 minutes mein ready ho gi.. impossible!! aj to main pakka late hui college se.. ab to bas upar wala hi bachaye mujhe!!

friends, abhi tak bas itna hi.😊 plz do comment n if u like it then plz press the like button n if u dont like it then feel free to criticize.😉
thanks,
hafsah


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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
awesome update di
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
Awesome update dear
loved it
plz update soon
thank for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
HEY HAFSHAH GOOD WORK
NEXT PART JALDI LIKHNA I CAN'T WAIT😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18


Awesom yr

Very nice part
Love it
Amazing[:">] [:">]
Wonderful😳
Fabulous.............👍🏼
Love it sooooooooooooooooooooo much

Can't wait for the next part😃😃
Update soon
😊


Edited by gurtilover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19

⭐️👏Awesome update dear👏⭐️

Edited by zaryaabJuhi1b8 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
owosme update..
loved..it...
update soon...
nd thanx 4 d pm...😊

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