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Posted: 19 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Pooja922

haan vo toh hai hi!! haha...continue for me!

aww pooja i would have ... but i have a writers block ... mera pass story to hai .. but dont know how to start😕

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Simply.confused

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Posted: 19 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: simplyconfused
SAMIA!!! 😡

😕....

haila my doc mad at me

yes natu..... i was just writing the part for it ... dont worry by tonight u i will post it 😉😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: princess1_43

😕....

haila my doc mad at me

yes natu..... i was just writing the part for it ... dont worry by tonight u i will post it 😉😆

yes i am very mad....you haven't continued for eons!!! BUT now i am happy BUT you better continue tonight!!

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Simply.confused

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Posted: 19 years ago

#164

iam so sorry guys😭 lol i didnt know where my story was going so i blanked out ... 😕😕😕

anywayss here is the next part

part 5:

Recap: Kripa is revealed as the small in the flashbak...

we are taken to kripa place... kripa who slept on the marble floor ..... cuz she cried the
whole night rite after she left sahil ....... then we are taken to a painting ... in her
living room .... (note living and kitchen attached .....imagine the seen in salaam namaste - saif and preity apartment type )see a painting with a cursive writing... on it... its written as

follows:

Dard kitna bhi ho
aankh nam na karo
Raat kaali sahi
koi gham na karo
Ak siatra bano jagmagatay raho
Zindagii mein sada muskaratay raho
Baantna hai agar baant lo har khushi
Gham na zahir karo tum kisi per kabhi
Dil ki gahraai mein gham chupatay raho
Zindagii mein sada muskaratay raho
Ashk anmool hain kho na dena kahin
In ki har boond hai motiyoon se haseen
In ko har ankh se tum churatay raho
Zindagii mein sada muskaratay raho
Faaslay kam karo dil milatay raho
Zindagii mein sada muskaratay raho.
gam bhulana chaahu to darta hai yeh dil,
kahi jindagi kho na jaaye,
andhere ko kosna chaahu to darta hai yeh dil,
kahi raushni rooth naa jaaye....

(this poem has alot of meaning... to me specially... cuz its the harsh reality of life... that each and everyone has to deal with but ... u have to go through these times to make ur self a stronger person ... cuz no matter wht a person has gone through ... at that time u will find thats a worst situation one can go through and noone else has ever gone through it ... ... but we need to stop and look around ourself... u see alot of ppl worse then in ur situation .... thats y take everything in life as a gift .. and keep on smiling ... cuz the more times u fall .. the better/successful in life ur .... ok enough from me on my philosophy... )

bak to the story...

all of sudden u hear a phone ring.... and it keeps on ringing .... kripa who was sleeping on the floor wakes up with a startle... and is pretty mad at herself ... for letting her emotions take over her again .... she was a very strong headed girl... but deep down inside she was a small girl with small dreams and hopes ... the moment the word dream and hope flashed through her mind ... she didnt have tears in her eyes but she had the anger in them.... Kripa muttering something to herself .. and picks up the phone .... itsss none other then 😉Sahill..😆

Sahil: uff kripa kitna time laga ti ho tum phone uthanay main
Kripa: Good morning to u too Sahil (now angrY)
Sahil: opps lagta hai koi galat side of the bed utha hai ...
Kripa: Sahil bolo kya kaam hai ... jaldi bolo mujhe kaam per bhi jana hai
Sahil: kripa duffer.... aaj ko kaam waam nhi .. u r coming with me
Kripa: Sahil.. duniya main tumharay ilawa .. sab ko kaam hota hai
Sahil.. darling kripa ... sunday kay din bhi
Kripa bites her tongue and ssays: Aaj sunday hai
Sahil: yes abb kripa bore maat karna.. chalo mera saath
Kripa: sahil mera mood nhi hai
Sahil: Kripa tum apna mood ko ghar per chod kar aana .... aur chalo mera saath .... we will

go to Lakeshore:) (its a beach)
Kripa on hearing then name doesnt even think for a second and says: Chalo chalo
Sahil now was in an awkward position and confused(guys i tell u .. serious tubelights):

Kripa koi hai kya wahan per
Kripa agitated by sahil remark: Sahil tumko chalna tha to bolo mera saar maat kaho....
Sahil: achaaa sorrrry ms not so coool....
Kripa kya kaha tumnay...
Sahil: kuch nhi kuch nhi ...
Kripa: tumko to maain baatongi ... bach ke rehnay...
Sahil: wo to wasia hi rehnay pardhta hai ..koi nayi baat bolo...
Kripa: bye duffer... pick me up at 2
Sahil: kripa now u r the duffer... its 2 rite now...
Kripa: oh shoott i got up soo late... mujhee nhi.. and they words just died out at that point...
Sahil knew wht kripa meant but didnt say anything...
Kripa: sorry sahil... then i will see u at 7
Sahil: shaam ko ... tab tak main kya karoon ...
then u hear a voice calling: Sahil chal yaar kya kar raha hai
A feeling of anxiety runs through kripa head ... she has heard the voice before... who was it

.... ? before kripa had a chance to ask who it was ...
Sahil: Acha theek hai kripa ... i will pick u at 7 ..
Kripa now kinda a sad: Theek Hai Sahil
Sahil: hey krips kya hua ... opps sorry Kripa
Kripa laughed at Sahil childish behaviour
Kripa: Kuch nhi ... now duffer leave me .. mujhe ghar ka kaam karna hai
Sahil: Kaam Kaam aur Kaam.. tumhari aur kya zindagi hai
Kripa: sahil bhut bolna to main nhi aoongi
Sahil:Acha mazak kar raha tha... kya mujhe haq nhi hai
Kripa: NHI ... abb rakho
Sahil: Bye
Kripa: Bye

Kripa puts the phone down .... and walks up to the painting...with the cursive writing .... and reads the poem again .... and then touches the intials at the bottom.. K.R.... after that she has a smile on her face....

Kripa goes and freshens up ... and wear a white turtle neck shirt with a denim jeans ... and ties her hair in a bun ....and starts cleaning up... she was always a neat freak ..... Kripa to tired to move around... flops on the couch and starts flipping through the channels.... and the Rj the was going through his request list and there was a letter -- but the person request for this song ... then all of a sudden there was her favorite song ....

(my favvvvv song).

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin, zindagi, to nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi
Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi

Kaash aisa ho tere qadmo se, chun ke manzil chale aur kahi door kahi - 2
Tum gar saath ho, manzilo ki kami to nahi
Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi

Jee mein aata hai, tere daaman mein, sar jhuka ke ham rote rahe, rote rahe - 2
Teri bhi aankho mein, aansuo ki nami to nahi

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi,
shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin, zindagi, to nahi,
zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi

Tum jo keh do to aaj ki raat, chaand doobega nahi, raat ko rok lo -2
Raat ki baat hai, aur zindagi baaki to nahi

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi,
shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin, zindagi, to nahi,
zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi

Kripa still on the couch and goes bak into her thoughts... ... -Remember her past with Sahil

Kapoor

Sahil kapoor was an orphan .... a very cute simple and intelligent boy ....who always wanted the people around him to smile... he was a real so called "Sweetheart" ... never could see tears in anyone eyes....he never wanted to live for himself but lived for others..... when he was young he was abused by the teachers/the care takers... cuz he used to take the food from the orphanage and used to give it to the ppl outside.. who didnt eat for 4 days .... but he never retaliated thinking that the people who hate u most in the world are the people who love u to dear.....but there was onething no one knew that sahil deep down knew that he wasnt going to survive here for long... the most he had was 6 months to live .... and that was one reason why sahil lived for others ... he devoted all his 20 years of live to give the love,care and support and that he could offer to others.. and never let anyone get attached to him..... he never wanted anyone to cry for him ... but to remember him as Sahil kapoor

(the happy-go-lucky.)

Sahil Kapoor- 24 now........

wht role did kripa play to prolong Sahil life...

wait and watch:)opps Read

take care.. 😳
samia

Edited by princess1_43 - 19 years ago

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Natasha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#165

Samia!!! And you were having writer's block?? Hmmm is mystery guy Angad?? Perhaps?? Or am i just getting my hopes up!! Oh Sahil is a sweetheart i love him!! Hmmmm....poor guy has had a tough life. Did you say what Kripa did (like occupation) in the beginning i forgot?? Well, if she is a doctor she could have cured him and if she isn't i dont know what rolse she played....looks like I will have to wait and watch (oops!) I mean read!!!

(this poem has alot of meaning... to me specially... cuz its the harsh reality of life... that each and everyone has to deal with but ... u have to go through these times to make ur self a stronger person ... cuz no matter wht a person has gone through ... at that time u will find thats a worst situation one can go through and noone else has ever gone through it ... ... but we need to stop and look around ourself... u see alot of ppl worse then in ur situation .... thats y take everything in life as a gift .. and keep on smiling ... cuz the more times u fall .. the better/successful in life ur .... ok enough from me on my philosophy... )

The poem was very well written....and your philosophy was so true. We are all caught up in our life that we dont see people out there are in a worse condition then us!!!

And please do cotinue soon you leave off in such susppence and take forever to continue!!! 😭 BUT i am loving this story!!
-Natasha

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Simply.confused

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Posted: 19 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: simplyconfused
Samia!!! And you were having writer's block?? Hmmm is mystery guy Angad?? Perhaps?? Or am i just getting my hopes up!! Oh Sahil is a sweetheart i love him!! Hmmmm....poor guy has had a tough life. Did you say what Kripa did (like occupation) in the beginning i forgot?? Well, if she is a doctor she could have cured him and if she isn't i dont know what rolse she played....looks like I will have to wait and watch (oops!) I mean read!!!

The poem was very well written....and your philosophy was so true. We are all caught up in our life that we dont see people out there are in a worse condition then us!!!

And please do cotinue soon you leave off in such susppence and take forever to continue!!! 😭 BUT i am loving this story!!
-Natasha

aww natu thank u .😳 i sometimes really wish we werent so selfcentered.. and look around be kinda like the way sahil is ...cuz one doesnt know how long u will stay/live... not being pessimistic.... but atleast we could to spread the love and care..by attempting to just make one smile ... but we just think about ourself and our problems...there are millions of ppl who would love to be in the position we r ...

as far as kripa goes she is a fashion designer... 😉😉 .... not a doctor.....😉 i know sahil is such a sweetheart... 😳 mystery guy ...could be 😉😆 ....dont u just love the fact i leave u guys in a suspense...😈

i am so sorry about earlier🤗.. trust me i wrote the part and then deleted it i didnt know where my story was heading .. ... 😆

i will continue soon...

Edited by princess1_43 - 19 years ago

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Natasha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: princess1_43

aww natu thank u .😳

as far as kripa goes she is a fashion designer... 😉😉 .... not a doctor.....😉 i know sahil is such a sweetheart... 😳 mystery guy ...could be 😉😆 ....dont u just love the fact i leave u guys in a suspense...😈

i am so sorry about earlier🤗.. trust me i wrote the part and then deleted it i didnt know where my story was heading .. ... 😆

i will continue soon...

oh darnit now i am really curious!!! Cuz i highly doubt she saved his life by giving him anew wardrobe!! Arghh....you are the ultimate suspense queen!!!😆 And looks like the sorry machine is after you too!!😉 And dont worry about it that happens to me a lot!!!