SR FF-Will you always love me?Part 8 updated p30 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
All dese scenes I have imagined after SR white romance episode, but all my dreams got shattered becaz of unethical CVz😡
But, wen i was reading ur FF, i was visualizing dem and was enjoying my imagination.😳
Thanks Zeenie for d beautiful n mesmerizing SR moments😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx u r back..
update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Veena- thanks for your comment. 'Junglee' Abhi seems like a hit.😆
Monty- I know its sad girls have to leave their homes after they get married. But you'll become even more special once you leave.😳
Neet- thanks for your sweet words.😳
Lennie- sid has the biggest heart. thats why he could do what he did even in the show...give up the woman he loves just for her happiness.😊
Bani- thankyou so much for your sweet comment. All the wives are chudails!😆
loveSR and innocenteyez and sonia- thankyou.😊
Harshu-Our Ridhimma will always be Sids Ridhimma😳
Zarqu- Glad you liked the SR scene. Hope you like the next one too!😳
Ovi_Tanni- the Modis were such a cute family. I wish they had a show just on them.
Aish- I love those husbands too!😳😆
Nikki- Sorry. No abandoning ok.😆 And I cant not make SR happy.😳
Pragzie- thankyou sweetie.😳
Norzie- thankyou.😳
DJ- me and you will always make Ridhimma lovable. We cant help it.😆
Fariya, superxuberant, JacobHarry and Prithi -thankyou😊
Anushka-I love weddings so i had to get one in in my FF! I like the word 'feelable' I think we should start our own SR dictionary!😆
Kritzi- my soul sis. This is the SR we always wanted.😳
Mona- 'goosebumpy' cute word!😆 Hope the next update also gives you goosebumps!😳
Annu- thankyou. Will try and update quicker but sometimes I get writers block.😆
Isha- thankyou so much sweetie for your lovely words.
Subia- i thought everyone would feel sorry for the hubbys but it seems everyone loves the chudail wives!😆 Thankyou for liking the update.😳
Gina- I so wish DMG had concentrayed on all the characters equally. They were all so wonderful. Glad you liked the SR scene. Hope you like the next one.😳
Sidra- Wow Sid made you blush! I hope he continues doing so.😳P.S Love your siggy. I remember feeling so bad for Sid in that scene in the show!
Noorya- glad you liked cute SR😳
Sayo, Angel and Pooja- thankyou😊
Sanjana- your welcome😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 4

The farmhouse was decorated beautifully, with twinkling lights illuminating the classically decorated garden . The air was filled with the lingering scent of fresh lilies and Jasmine and soft music played soothingly in the background. The sound of people laughing and chattering indicated the wonderful time everyone was having.

'This is so beautiful ,'said Padma Gupta as she and her husband Shashank were greeted warmly by the Modis.

Just then, Sid and Ridhimma walked down the stairs hand in hand. There were murmurs of appreciation from the guests who watched them descend. They truly looked beautiful together and the love that radiated from them was felt by all.

The Modis and Guptas looked on proudly at their children, who greeted the guests with a warm smile and a kind word making everyone feel so welcome. As soon as Ridhimma spotted her parents, she gave a happy laugh and ran into their waiting arms pulling Sid with her.

Suddenly, Abhi shouted excitedly, 'Badi ma, Bade Papa. Raj is here!'

While everyone hurried to greet the family of the groom-to-be, Mrs.Modi quickly told Ridhimma, Nikki and Naina to go and bring Sue down. Sid, Abhi and Yuvi went and hugged Raj who was looking extremely handsome in a black sherwani. As his eyes searched desperately for his beautiful fianc, Sid gathered him in a warm hug and laughingly told him to be patient.

As both the families greeted each other and made small talk, Raj's eyes kept stealing anxiously towards the stairs. Despite being hugged, mauled and touched by numerous people who wanted to congratulate him, his heart was just waiting for one person''Sue! He hadn't seen her for days and he missed her terribly. Suddenly he saw Naina coming down the stairs . Hidden behind her from his view was Sue, surrounded by her 2 bhabhis. As Raj, strained his neck to get a glimpse of the woman he loved, Naina teased him by deliberately walking slowly in front of Sue so she couldn't be seen.

Raj desperately looked at Yuvi, who gave him a quick wink and determinedly walked towards Naina. Without warning, he swept his astonished wife into his arms and carried her out of the way, so Raj could finally look upon his bride-to-be. As Raj saw Sue, his heart skipped a beat. She looked stunning. Slowly, Sue made her way towards Raj, with her eyes on the floor. As she reached him, she looked up nervously but as soon as her eyes met his smiling ones, all her anxieties were swept away.

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Dinner finally ended and Mr.Modi announced that there would be music and dancing for everyone to enjoy. As the crowds swarmed towards the dancing hall, Sid glanced at each face as they walked by, desperately searching for his gorgeous wife. He had hardly seen her all evening as they had both been so busy entertaining and looking after the guests and he ached to be with her. But despite looking everywhere he couldn't see her.

As Yuvi saw Abhi moving towards the music system he quickly excused himself from Dr.Shashank , with whom he was conversing, and ran towards Sid.

'Quick Sid, we've got to stop your brother before he bores everyone to death with that 'junglee' song again,' said Yuvi desperately pulling Sid's arm.

Sid laughed with amusement.

'Don't worry Yuvi. Abhi maybe older then me, but Im smarter then him. I hid the CD earlier on.'

As the 2 friends gave each other a 'high five', they made their way towards the music system where Abhi was frantically looking for his CD.

'I'm sure I left it right here Sid. You haven't seen it have you?'

'No bhaiyya,' lied Sid with a straight face, 'but maybe we should play something else anyway. Remember what bhabhi said to you?'

As Abhi's face went pale thinking about the prospect of spending one month in the spare room, Yuvi took advantage of his momentary distraction, and quickly grabbed a CD and put it in the music player. 'Avein Avein ' started blaring into the hall, and the excited crowd quickly started gathering on the dance floor and jiving to the music. Raj quickly took hold of Sue's hand before anyone could stop him and whisked her onto the dance floor finally taking her into his arms where he had desperately wanted to hold her all evening.

Naina walked over to where the boys were standing and grabbed her husband's hand and took him for a dance. Just then, Nikki arrived as well to claim her husband. As she tried to convince Abhi that the song wasn't 'horrible' and it would be fun to dance to, Sid asked her where Ridhimma was.

'I saw her heading towards the patio,' she shouted over the loud music as she dragged her reluctant husband onto the floor.

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Sid quickly left the hall in search of his wife. As everyone else was now in the dance hall, the rest of the farmhouse was unusually quiet. As he softly approached the patio, Sid heard Ridhimma gently humming to herself. He stood at the door , with his heart thumping, watching his breathtaking wife who seemed oblivious to the world. She was framed against the night sky, with a faraway look and an exquisite smile on her face, as if she was thinking of something beautiful . Suddenly sensing Sid, she looked at him and smiled. Sid's heart skipped a beat.

'I was waiting for you Mr.Modi,' she said teasingly.

With a naughty glint in his eye, Sid walked towards her and held out his hand. She raised her eyebrows and gave Sid a questioning look.

'Dance?' he whispered.

'Music's inside,' she whispered back cutely.

Sid slowly put one arm round Ridhimmas waist and pulled her towards him, and with his other hand softly pushed her hair away from her face. He leaned seductively towards her until she could feel his lips almost touching her ear.

'We'll make our own music' he whispered and suddenly twirled her around.

Ridhimma squealed in delight as Sid lifted her off the ground high into the sky. As he slid her carefully back down, she weaved her hands around Sid's back while they danced sensuously to their own imaginary music, totally in rhythm with each other. Soon their dancing became slower and slower and finally Ridhimma gently leaned on Sid's chest with her eyes closed, while their bodies swayed softly together. They could hear the muffled laughter and music coming from the other end of the farmhouse where the guests were dancing and having fun, but they were content to just stay in each others arms.

Suddenly, Sids mobile phone rang. Reluctantly he answered it while still holding Ridhimma close to him.

'Hey Sue,' he said and listened attentively to what his sister was saying, 'Okay we'll be right there.'

'Ridhimma, we have to go to the hall. Some important guests have arrived who we need to meet.'

As Sid was talking, Ridhimma gradually lifted herself off his chest, looked into his eyes and sighed. Sid knowing exactly how she was feeling, gently held her face in both his hands and softly kissed her forehead. Ridhimma slipped her hand through her husbands strong arm and they both walked unenthusiastically towards the sound of the music.

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As they entered the hall, both Ridhimma and Sid were surprised to hear the music being switched off.

'They must be really important people,' thought Ridhimma to herself.

She saw Mr and Mrs. Modi talking excitedly to some people whose back was turned to Sid and Ridhimma so they couldnt see their faces. Sue was hugging a girl and was obviously ecstatic to see her. All the other guests in the hall were watching the scene with interest, everyone asking each other who these people were. Ridhimma thought she heard Nikki say they were very close friends of the Modis from America, as she passed her by.

Suddenly, Mrs. Modi spotted her son and daughter-in-law and she pointed them out to the visitors. As they turned round Ridhimma saw that it was a man and woman who were as old as her parents and there, standing next to them, was the most beautiful girl she had ever seen. She was nearly as tall as Sid with legs that seemed to go on forever. Her long, black shiny hair came down to her waist. She had skin like porcelain, and a figure to die for.

'Siddy!' she screamed in excitement.

A puzzled Ridhimma looked up at Sid, as she felt him gasp in surprise.

''Katrina?'

Ridhimma didn't exactly know what happened , but one minute she was holding onto Sid and the next moment she had been pushed aside while Katrina was in her husband's arms.

'Oh my gosh Siddy, it's so wonderful to see you,' said Katrina while hugging Sid tightly.

'You too Katrina. And you're even more beautiful then I remember you.'

And just there'..just at that moment Ridhimma experienced a feeling she had never felt in her life. Her eyes narrowed and her fists clenched and she felt the most horrible pain in her heart.

This was the first time in her life, Ridhimma Modi truly felt jealous of anyone.

Edited by zeenia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
sigh!!!so u ve choosen sheela...i mean katrina to make ridzii feel jealous of..😃
hmmmm dat makes it preity interesting...😆
anywyzzz lookn 4ward 4 d chudail😡 mode of ridzii babieee
and yeah this update was really gud👏
n waitn 4 d xt
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Posted: 14 years ago
zeeenieeeee

its fab as usaual!!!!😳
THE MODI family is very lovely n beautifull i must say😳 😆

n abhi is too cute 😆

n ofcourse SIDHIMMA r d best!!!

wohoo ridz is jealous soo wanted 2 see all d shades of u r ridhimma n SR but glad we can imagine it all soo well throu u r FF

katrina hmmmm interesting

looking forward 2 d chudail modi continue super soon!!!!!
Edited by subia-17 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic update sweetie👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Zeeeeeeee 🤗

Fab update as always😳

I so love the Modi family and Abhi's just too cute😆
him n his 'jangli' song😆

Sue-Raj n YuNa were very cute too😳

and of course Siddhima *SIGH*
They're the best😳
Just love them soooooooooooooooooooo much!!!

and yayyyyyyyyyy!!!!
Mrs.Modi's gonna be jealous
I so wanted to see this side of Mrs.Modi and finally its here
Eagerly waiting to see what Mrs.Chudail Modi's gonna do now 😛

Continue super soooonnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Buhahaha.... Mrs Modi Jealous of Katrina.... Great update Zeenia, n thanks for pm...

Wow, all the parts, specially, the ones of our own fav couple 😉, are awesome, n so beautifully written..

Once again, Hats off to u!!! Keep it up!!

Looking forward to the next part very impatiently..

Regards
Liashna
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Posted: 14 years ago
Zeenzie 🤗🤗

U know what I was abt to give u dhamki to update ur FF & see u already updated 😛
This is know as ' Dil se dil ka connection ' 😳😆

Coming to the update

AWESOMEEEEE as usual

I love the Modi family 😳
Abhi is soo cute 😆

SueRaj , YuNa & Nikki were cute too 😳😳

Siddhima ☺️☺️

Awww I loved their romantic dance <333

So Kartina oops Siddy's Kartina is there to make Mrs Chudail Modi jealous hmm interesting 😉

Looking forward to the next part
Continue soon....

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