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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: minahil1997

owesom dear!!!!!👏


loved the update dear😳... u wrote the romantic moments so well... so again mysteries and troubles r headed to pia's direction... so tala have abhay ... ok , i have a feeling that this is going to be really bad... now i m dying to read the next update😆 , continue soon .. love u🤗



thnks dear... im writing it now.. im almost finshed.. you can breathe again.. lol..!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gals_11

Woww yaar Awesome update.. Loved Abhiya.. now where's Abhay n who msged her.. Continue soon..thanx for d pm..lol.


thnks.. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shonababx

well m confused wid abhay's behaviour.. :O ..


btw nice update

continue soon :)



oh dear.. ah.. what are u confused with.. wel Abhay loves Piya a lot.. but doesnt have the strngth to avoid her.. everytime she is around him.. he cant help to stay away.. he is fighting with his heart as his mind tels him to stay away from Piya..!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

nice update. ohh so is tht a trick, or has tala actually got to Abhay



thnks... ahah.. cant tel that..!! 😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago


thnks..!! 😃
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thnks..!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Very cute Abhiya scene! It was really nice! And Abhay is in trouble? It will be interesting to see how Piya saves him! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊



thnk u... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1301Princess

Hey Katie...😊
Awesome update yaar,,👏
Very romantic..😳
Is Abhay really in Danger or this is a plan of someone to hurt Piya??... 😭Wow!! Such a nice twist...😃
Waiting for the next update...
When are yo updating next?😛
Continue soon..😊
Love❤️
Sweta...🤗



thnks Sweta..! updating today..!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 26


Piya got down at a village which was about 10km away from fatepur sikri.. carrying her luggage she stepped out. Watching the bus go.. she began to walk.. when her cell beeped.. she took it out from her bag.. a smile spread across her face.. when she saw the sender's name.. but that smile was soon clawed off.. when she read the message.. her eyes widened in shock.. and her breathing became faster.. 'I have your precious Abhay.. come and get him if you want.. love Tala..'
Piya panicked all over.. her hands were trembling.. and she did not know what to do.. she felt helpless.. what would Tala do with Piya..? Why did he call HER.. what was the profit..? It was totally confusing.. but the only thing that tremored her body was 'Abhay'- if anything happened to him.. she couldnt even imagine life without his guidance and love he always showered unconditionally.. she could relate the same state of hers to her life when she was eight.. and the fear and anguish she had gone through when her mother was taken to the hospital.. as she sat there waiting to see her mom again.. to see her smile... her lovely eyes.. her care.. her affection.. little did she know that she had just seen her mom for the last time.. she suddenly snapped out of the thought.. 'no.. this cant happen.. and anyway what m i thinking.. common.. Abhay is grown up he knows to take care of himself and anyways his dad is with him too.. so 2 against 1.. not a chance.. so basically i feel that Tala is lying.. but how did Tala get Abhay's mobile.? God.. itne saare questions.. aur mere paas jawab tak nahi.. i think i should sort it out.. before i take another step.. cause one wrong decision.. i will be just sending the coffin right upto to Abhay..' she thought sitting down at the bench near the bus stop.. she put her luggage next to the her.. and ruffled her hair in annoyance..
She began to put across all the points.. 'first thing.. the massage had been sent to Piya.. telling her to get to Abhay as he was in danger.. this was sent by Tala.. ok..! But how did Tala get Abhay's no., i know that Abhay is not a lunatic to send such messages.. and im pretty sure that Abhay is not with Tala.. even if he had attacked Abhay.. he had his dad to back him up.. did he come with an army..?


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Abhay was watching Piya intently, as she was copying down the notes.. Abhay just keeping his eyes open.. there was no use of him coming to classes.. he could answer all the questions in a jiffy.. he was just a victim under the 'VMNBE' act.. VMNBE is 'Vampires Must Not Be Exposed'.. oh well.. but atleast he could get to see Piya. She was quite normal.. almost 2 hrs had passed after their intense moment..! There was 15min more left for the break.. Piya could figure out that Abhay was staring at her.. the whole time by the corner of her eyes.. she felt happy.. she felt relieved.. it was not an angry or rude gaze.. it was a lovely gaze.. which only consisted of love.. her smile was dancing on her face.. through the whole lecture.. she was waiting for the break and so was he.. both had the same goal.. they wanted to clear out everything.. this was a little too much.. and both knew that both werent going to profit from this..
As the bell rang.. all the teens ran out.. Misha called out,"Come on Piya let's go..!".. Abhay raised his head to hear the answer, his eyes were searching for the answer and she could see that.. after a small eye lock.. "Nahi Misha.. tum chali jao.. mujhe kuch doubts hai.. mein physics department mein jaake poochkar aathi hu ok..!" she said in a chirpy voice.. but Misha was not at all happy with the answer, "Kya yaar.. hamesha book ko goorthe rahthe ho.. ab ye doubts kaha se aayi..? you can ask them later common.. today is tracker's bday man.!", she said pouting.. " Mujhe pata hai Misha.. now look if i don ask this doubt now.. it will just grow in size and will become a problem.. pls try to understand..!" she said pressing her lips, and raising both her eye brows.. Misha stared at her for 5 seconds, then eventually gave up and went out of the class saying.. "Wo bhi Albert Einstein banna chahthi hai..!"
The class was empty except Piya and Abhay.. taking a deep breath. Abhay stood up.. "Finally.. i get to speak to you alone after waiting for 2hrs 4min and 45sec.. yeh..!" he said showing fake enthusiasm.. "Ha ha Abhay so funny.. " she said showing the same attitude.. "Ok ah.. this can go on forever.. well Piya look.. i just want ot make things clear.. i know that im attracted to you.. now that is very clear.. but the thing is.. we cant be together.. i know you like me too.. n so do i.. but you cant accept me.. im too dangerous.. i have death hanging around my neck all the time.. maybe i look real jobless but trust me im not.. i still gotto find the silver here.. rememeber.?! so please.. i dont want to talk on this topic again..!" he said frankly.. but in as nice way.. Piya was glad.. and not also.. she really did want to be with him.. express the depth of her feelings.. her thoughts.. but it was just a little difficult.. ok maybe not LITTLE..!
"Ok fine.. but we still can be friends right.?!" she said in a hopeful voice.. she just wanted him in her life.. no matter he is a friend or a lover.. but not anything else though.. he smiled at her question and immediately said 'yes'.. she sat on the bench.. next to Abhay.. "Hey i have a question..!" she said.. "Ah Piya im not a member of the physics department..!", She wacked his arm playfully.. "Shut up Abhay.. im asking you a question related to your life.. i actuallyb wanted to ask you.. ah that night.. when you were turned into a vampire.. well you said that Tala killed Vijender and had gone back to inform the others.. well did he come..?!" she said.. excitement flowinf in her words.. and her mouth had formed an O.. omg..! she looked so cute.. Abhay so badly wanted to touch her.. he dug his nails in his palm.. to control his desires.. and he took out his right hand and pinched and pulled her cheeck lightly grinning.. "Soo cute..!... Hmm wel.. actually what happened to Tala was..


ok guys here is the update.. well if you liked it.. press the like button pls.. and do comment..!!! thnks... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!thats great abhay finally said the truth but..what about the present track...update soon!😳
Edited by ilove99 - 14 years ago

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