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Posted: 14 years ago
continue soon..........it looks like maan had already met geet in london..........................just geet does not remember him.....................
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Posted: 14 years ago


Loved it . So Armaan played well as Rob with Geet enacting as her husband šŸ˜‰

Poor Maan . Guess for Maan he's feeling strongly for Geet .

Geet's saree & pic was Beautiful ā­ļø ā­ļø ā­ļø

Do continue dear ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaara u have so many ffs going on the same time and they all r addictive. i feel so greedy going on each one of them n asking for an update....
...while i'm at it...can u plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update this and a long long long one.šŸ˜†šŸ¤£
"if it's free then i'll take two" yup i'm not being greedy atall 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear, another awesomely super funny, super exciting update with equally interesting precap.. I loved everything about the update, maan's detective brain, maan rating armaan(rob), maan feeling super jealous, geet self thought, maan self thought.. And most imptly, SUPER LOVED THE PRECAP.. I feel bad for geet and understand her situation totally.. I bet maan will be happy if he finds out the truth about geet.. Anyways, your last part of update part 8, are you in any chance saying he knew geet before.. I don get it.. Pls explain my doubt keyama.. Thanks.. Oh did i tell you, i love the twins and rajji.. And hope you make geet realise NOT ALL MEN are BAD.. Maan our sher is NOT!! Haha.. Uff, hate that armaan though.. Haha.. And precap, was killing! Gosh, now if he get to know the truth, what will happen then?? Oh what if geet's mum like maan and ask maan to marry geet? Oolalala... Thats great idea.. Anyways cant wait for the nxt update dear.. Again, will be waiting patiently.. If remorse was painful, paradox was intense, then this is just a relief, a pure entertainer.. Super light feeling to it.. This including aroma.. Damn nice.. Keep writing dear.. You should NOT stop writing..
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Posted: 14 years ago

WAITING eagerly for the next one..!!*~šŸ˜

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNN...!!*~


and a long one pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeešŸ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon m waitinggggggggggg...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
***Enigma***
part 9
pls do comment & press the like button' ty for all the love and suport
xxx
SORRY FOR SHORT ONE' very BUSY...




Maan walks in to the khurana mansion. He could barely walk... Everything in his life seems so messed up after that weird girl .... Umm lady walked in my life.... I looked round... The whole khurana house was empty! I feel like I am waiting for something to bring this whole world of my to live... What am I waiting for? I slowly walked in... One by one servant came infront of me... Serving... I had no intention to make any effort to do anything...

Next morning... I could barely remember when I hit the bed & fall sleep! The morning sunshine was no where to be seen! It was covered by thick snow of mid December! I looked out of the big window... Town was covered by thick layers of snow! Blizzard! I had some feeling about this lag night but I didn't expect it to be this bad!... One of my servant walks in....
Servant- sir! Sir! He was panicking....
Maan- what's wrong?
Servant- I have found a lady on the road! I am not sure what to do!
Maan- what do you mean!
Servant- I think she singed right infront of our gate!
Maan- have you brought her in?
Servant- no sir!
My eyes went bright red! What type of servant I had? A lady dying out there! .... I couldn't wait any longer... I ran out without thinking.... She was half dead... Her whole body went blue.... I quickly picked her up & brought her in the haveli... It was freezing cold! My self started to go num in matte of 10 minute & god knows how long she have been out here! I quickly called the dr. She was a middle age lady.... Maybe in mid 40s or early! I called the female servants to help help her to keep her warm.....

It's been 24 hours since she have walked in.... Still uncontious... barely could open her eyes...... I kept an eye on her now & then.... Her family must be so worried! But why would she come out in this blizzard storm.... Wouldn't she....

It's been 48 hours now... It was still snowing... All the transport have been stopped... Nothing was on... I have to be back to India by next week! Hopefully it will clear soon..... One of my servant ran in...
Searvent- mam is wake sir!... I node & flowed to her room....

She looked lost....- where am I?
Maan- hello... I smiled... Tried to be plight as possible.... You fainted in front of my haveli! I have brought you here! Everything is still closed! May I know your name mam! .... She looked petrified... Seems like she wasn't from this world... My each word started to terrify her....
Maan- you had a massive scar on your head! I had to specially call the dr!.... The lady looked confused.... Like she have forgotten everything....
Lady- who am I? Where am I?... I looked at her in shock! I didn't expect this... Luckily she had some type of card... Which only mentioned her name! Nothing els....
Maan- I think your name is Rano! Does that ring any bell!.... She nodes for a no.... The big scare in her head probably had something to do with this.... Rano holds her head.... Why can't I remember anything?... How have I managed to come here? She cried!
Maan- please aunty.... Don't say that!
Rano- Rano! Is that my name? Why can't I remember anything? What's going on?
Maan- aunty please don't cry! ... She broke down....

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Geet drops the phone.... Tears rolled down her eyes.... She couldn't move or make any noise.... She lands on her knee... Trying to hide her tears.... What she will tell her sibling now... Her mother is no where to be seen! Is she dead? Is she alive? Police can't say.... Shila hugs her tight....
Geet- that monster have killed my mom! She shouts... Those two monster have killed my mom!.... She screams in tears... Those two brutal man have killed my mom!...
Shila holds her tight... She have no clue what to say... How to react... What to react? She thought...
Geet- everything I have done it's just.... Geet cried.... She screamed.... What's the point of this now? What's the point?
Shila- please geet! Have faith! Aunty is fine! Please...

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Maan looked worried. She can't remember anything! Imagine his family. Mist be worried sick! He looked through her bag again... No information... He wanted to contact the police but then stopped seeing the big scare! Someone have done this on purpose! He couldn't let her go back.... If they were trying to kill her!
Maan- aunty... You can stay with us if you want! Until you regain your memory!
Rano wasn't sure what to say... She could barely remember anything! & someone offering help this time of her need... She cried for some reason... Seeing this unknown kind man helping her.... Without any trouble... Without anything in return... He was helping her.
Rano- god bless you son....
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Ummm very intriguing

Now my curiosity is peaked...there's more coming?
Edited by pushpi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
How much I loved the concept..........thnx for continuing this...........u r always a fabulous writer...........



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Posted: 14 years ago
resss
gud update...luved it..!!😊
Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago

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