Mayur FF - Magical Complications. - Page 24

Mehak Part 4 was just too good the whole Mayur scene n Mayank's attitude n Nupur's helping nature...Aww..........😍

Mehak i read part 5 n 6 as well😆
wow u r just great with FFs always something new n interesting am so looking forward to it n their characters are developing so so well👏😍😍

I just read parts 5 and 6 - both were amazing!
This FF is getting really interesting Mehak and it's good to see you writing something different.
Looking forward to the next part.

Hi!

hey mehak...........i finally mannaged to read all the 6 parts so far..................i am loving the concept of the ff lots.........cant wait to read the next part...........loved the update lots...........

Sorry for not commenting yesterday.😳 had 3 tests today to revise for love part 5. The way you explained mayank's problems is really good. I feel sorry for him. Its really sad that whenever fathers commit mistakes, the whole burden is on the poor son to fix it. love his relationship with his mother.😳
coming to part 6, the best part yet😍 it's nice to see that nupur doesn't care about what others think of her. There are very few girls who have attitudes like that and I love it. Plus I'm glad that she's really good at her job😳 the last part is the cutest, the biryani questioning is adorable.😍 love how she straight forwardly asked him to make biryani for her and the last line is magnificent.. 👏
Thanks for the pm🤗 keep up the great work🤗

Wow Mehaku...I loved this update....and especially the line---I don't think we need to decide - destiny is already doing this for us............I m loving it

thank u sooo much guys..🤗

7. Is this really me??

Mayank turned off the stove. The biryani was almost ready. He smelt the fragrance, but wasn't sure if it smelled like the one he cooked yesterday. He tasted one bite, still he was un-sure. He again took a bite..

"Stop it mayank!, what the hell!", he dropped the spoon and headed out of the kitchen. "damn it!, now if it doesn't tastes or smells like yesterday, than what am I supposed to do, she herself asked for it, and now if she doesn't likes it than I care a damn!"

He took over the blanket and closed his eyes very firmly, as if threatening sleep to come soon otherwise it will have to face the rage of Mayank Sharma.

After keeping his eyes closed for almost half an hour and not allowing any other thought to cross his mind, he finally opened his eyes - kneeling down to sleep - well it isn't scared of mayank sharma, he should better accept!

He again started thinking about his day, today for the first time he saw her in day light! - and without mention, she looked beautiful - extremely beautiful!, and today she again wasn't in the night club, maybe she had quit drinking - this thought warmed his heart with a strange happiness - yes may be, she wasn't coming from the past two days, since the day her sister took her away crying., but what was she doing that day at the bus stop, somewhere else - alone at night! - he didn't want to think.

She met her at his work site, she lives somewhere near, no she lives near York, the bus she took that day goes to York, may be works near - yes may be work!, or maybe she wasn't going home that day, somewhere else - OH GOD STOP!,

"dude!, have u lost it?!", he knew the answer to this question, "YES!"

"thinking where she works, where she lives, will u start behaving normal!!", he took a deep breath, "she was nice to you ,but u didn't bother talking', he again lied down closing his eyes, allowing his heart and mind to argue. "that is because i don't know her",

"ya right, didn't know her, now u want to know about her work hours?,

Another deep breath!

"ok fine!, I accept I am an extremely rude person, may be heartless, but I can't stop thinking about her"

"better!, now go to sleep!,"

"Ghr pe hooooon," nupur was answering it for the fifth time to gunjan, and still she was not convinced.

"dekho di, tumhain meri.."

"meri maa.!!.main teri , apni, maa ki, bauji ki, rohan ki , araav ki, samrat ki, shahrukh khan ki,..sab ki kasam kha k kehti hon k main ghr pe hon!!", she was getting irritated by her doubts

"acha acha, naraaz mat ho, karo kaam tum, main subha baat karti hon tum se"

"thank you!, pehle hi teri interrogation main mera adha ghanta waste ho gaya hai"

"bye di, and thank you!"'',

for what?"

"for making ur life normal, at least u are trying"

Gunjan on the other side also smiled, she knew the arrogance of her sister, she was like this, she didn't need to express who much she loved her, and neither did she ever say!, gunjan was quite used to it.

She entered the room; samrat was busy reading a journal. She quietly placed her phone on the table, and lied down, stealing glances at him, which obviously he noticed.

'u want to say something gunjan?", he asked, eyes still fixed on the journal

It was about 3 am in the morning, when finally nupur decided to sleep. She had been making drafts and working out on ways how to make this ad campaign, the best of the year. She lied down, in between the whole mess of files and her laptop, she was too lazy to clear the mess, after so many days she went to office, so she was dead tired and slept immediately.

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U call this biryani - this is poison - OH MY GOD! U WILL KILL ME

I don't believe this, this is the best I have ever tasted, this is..

SNOOOOOOOOOOOOZEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

And finally Mayank Sharma woke up! - haunted by all the weird dreams he had been having last night.

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