|~voyage from MemoriestoReality~|KaSh|part6 page38 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8

hey loved the part............ n watever muskaan waz saying iz right but in shilpa's case i could truly understand her unconditional n selfless love .............. i can so feel it waz armaan to whom shilpa bumped ............. anywaz loved the part.............. pls continue soon ................ n thanks foe da pm............. take care ........love aish.................

hey Aisha..😛
Thank you for the comments😳

Originally posted by: luv_kash

loved the part

thnx for the pm
do cont soon


thanx😳

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Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

loved it n finally they bumped into each other

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shinseen

your FF realy appreciate
and the parts were really too good
sorry for late
thanks for the pm


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anamika2010

hey srishti...first so sorry for late comment....holding ears....and now about your ff....liked it so much....and u are right,abhi wo bachchen hain,actually you wrote something different...burna romantic parts toh sabhi likhte hain,but yahan tumne unka jo innocent love dikhaya hai,loved it...its like 'bhagwan ne unki jodi banakar hi bheji hai".... punam


No problm dear....I am glad you liked it and commented!

Thank you so much Punam! 😳

yeah...KaSh...Made for each other😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -KaShti-


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dont blame me for chota part then 😛

i will blame 1st of all late update & ur stupid excuses now small part😡
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -poornima-

i will blame 1st of all late update & ur stupid excuses now small part😡


I will update full..... day after tomorrow or the next day after day after tomorrow...Hiding..chalega...?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Everyone!
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Part-5

It has been past 5 minutes and Muskaan was still in her best yelling at the guy for bumping with Shilpa and making her shopping bags fell down.

And Shilpa stood there witnessing the whole scene with her shopping bags kept on the floor and her hands crossed over her chest. Wondering from where Muskaan gets so much energy to let it out in form of her uncontrollable speeches!

The poor guy! Shilpa thought. She was brought back to current situation on listening weak attempts made by the guy! He stood there with a head down and his face adoring a small smile. Right, he was scared before when it was advent of Muskaan's outburst but from few passed minutes he was trying hard to not to smirk by pressing his lips putting as much effort as he can.

Now the situation was getting worst. Not between the interacting party but the viewers. Thanks to Muskaan's high pitched voice they have gathered a big bunch of crowd surrounding them in the middle of the mall!

Shilpa thought it was better to intervene to stop further embarrassment.

Shilpa:"uhmm...Muskaan..."

His head snapped up listening to that sweet voice to see the owner of the voice.

Shilpa spoke for the first time after the whole bumping session followed by the one-sided heated fight started by muskaan.

Muskaan kept on yelling at the poor guy for bumping accusing him of bumping necessarily and giving him a good lecture. It was sure that from now that guy will be very careful while walking and not even accidentally will bump into anyone.

Muskaan: "kya hai Shilpa...wait lt me tell this guy...what he think of himself..huh!..i am sue he must have done it deliberately...these guyz of today's world. I tell you..."

Guy : "Excuse me Mam! Please...It was my mistake I admit it but believe me I dint did it deliberately...and"

Shilpa : "Hmm..its ok...Muskaan...let it be dear...it was just an accident...why are you so exaggerating it"

Muskaan : "ME!!! Are you OUT OF YOUR MIND SHILPA...This guy just bumped into you and even made all your shopping bags fell down...do you remember this is our First shopping by our FIRST income...do you..."

Shilpa : "MUSKAAN...!!!" Shilpa having enough...was now irritated...She glared an eye to muskaan which was enough to make Muskaan's mouth shut.

Shilpa then turned ...facing the guy...and continued

Shilpa: "umm...I am Sorry or the whole chaos. Its ok I know you dint bumped necessarily..."

Shilpa then looked towards Muskaan and said,"Guess its enough for today...we should leave now"

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After 2 minutes.

Shilpa and Muskaan were wandering from one shop to another, When Shilpa panicked1

Mukaan : "Kya hua?"

Shilpa: "My Purse'..O God'where did I leave it"

They started searching here and there but then it stuck Shilpa the bump'..May be there she must have forgotten it. She told Muskaan about it. Muskaan was all raged recalling that Guy.

Shilpa thought it was not right to take Muskaan there coz if they find that man again Muskaan will probably Chop his head.

Shilpa : "Muskan..Do one thing'You stay here'I will go and fetch for the purse. It probably must be lying there"

Muskaan : "oye'I am coming na"

Shilpa :: "Nah! You stay here. I will be back soon" he smiled and assuring Muskaan Shilpa left to that same place!

Shilpa on reaching there found her purse lying on the floor, but there were two men standing around there.

And what she can comprehend is'One was the same guy whom she bumped into but the other she dint knew as his back was facing her!

She went there'

The two Guyz were talking something!

The Same guy who bumped into Shilpa "Oye'She is that girl'Thank God she is alone'and not with her that Junglee friend"

That guy's friend turned around to look at the girl where the first guy was pointing '.

He turned'

And

*Bump*

She fell down with him over him. Her back hurt and her eyebrows in a rown and her wincing in pain.

The fallen guy irritated got up and made Shilpa Stand up!

First guy : "Hey''.I just want to say thanx from saving me from your friend'coz she was almost going to hit me"

Shilpa just got up with pain but listening to him made her chuckle. "its ok" she said.

First Guy: "hmm'so how come you are here again "

Shilpa "Oh'I left my purse here" she said pointing to the floor.

The first Guy bent to pick her purse and handed over to her. He looked forward to face his friend who was standing behind Shilpa now!

Shilpa too turned .She saw HIM(the guy whom he just bumped) rubbing his elbow. He must have got hurt when we fell. She thought.

She mumbled a quick babyish Sorry to him. As he looked up at her She turned to face the First guy and said "Okie I should leave now'Or my friend will come here searching for me." She said to look at the horror clearly displayed on the First guy's face.

" He beeter leave soon then'" He laughed and continued " Vaise I am Rahul'You?"

Shilpa thought and muttered "Shilpa'..Okie I gotta go"'

She then ran away from there with her purse in hand.

He(who recently bumped with Shilpa)- "Oye...what was her name "

Rahul- "Shilpa"

Guy- "Hmm..." A smile automatically reached his face


That name was very close to his heart.He turned around to see the girl who was here and just said that her name was Shilpa.


But to his disappointment he could not see her!


Rahul- "Kya hua Karan"


Karan shook his head :"nothing chal..we are getting late" He smiled

Rahul: "Remembering your girl"


Karan Smiled ..Crazy His friend is! He thought.Karan has told rahul about her...His Best Childhood buddy! But Rahul used to call her her a Karan's Girl. and never did Karan minded it . As he loved that term...Shona...Karan' girl...

It felt Perfect...!

Rahul;"oye...Before you get lost again...lets leave...or we will miss our bus"

Karan nodded and they proceeded towards the exit. But a Karan moved he felt something under his feet.He step backward to see what was it. It was a small shiny tiny bracelet.


He bent down to pick it...


To be continued...


Promo:

Karan:Saawan Ki Rimjhim Mera Tarana, Yaad Dilati Hogi Na,

Ik Ik Meri Baatein Tumko Yaad Toh Aati Hongein Na,

Yaad Toh Aati Hogi Na, Yaad Toh Aati Hogi Na,

Kya Tum Mere In Sab Sawalon Ka Kuch Toh Jawab Dogi Na

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Edited by -KaShti- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


weirdoo first off all love u for the update u lazy bum🤣
coming to the part..it was lovely..
haha muskaan is such a nuclear bomb=))
hawww KASH milte milte reh gaye.😳
awesum hope they find out soon who they r😳
this time continue soon😡😆

Edited by -LoVe.KaSh- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Dance...Then read...and then comment too! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

finally u updated

after getting a lot of irritating from me

thanx for not updating short part😆

rellay loved ur update

they bumped in to each other awwwee😳

poor Armaan gor many scolding from muskaan

glad she helped him

they both didn't recognise each other when will they understand they r meant & destined for each other i can't wait for it

i loved the way Armaan Smiled when Shilpa told her name & Rahul told ur girl so sweet

continue the next part soon u know me well na 😈don't make me do that

loved ur update

it was worthy even had to wait

awesome part

update next part soon warn😡



Edited by -poornima- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u updated......... muazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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