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meena..

@meena..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#741

i missed many parts yar

i read now all in once

awesome and superb

some parts are romantic very nice

wonderful and fab work

keep it up

keep writing

cont soon

waiting for asap

plz do pm me after updating

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Varsh

@Varsh.r

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#742

I think only angels can think and write so sensuous and breathtaking...u r superb yaar...it is such a mesmerizing and touchy ff...reading maaneet love in ur ff is really a bliss ...plss continue soon...best part is Ther is nothing as such physical bw maaneet but still havin goosebumps lik nythin...oh god ...u r gr8...waiting to read more of ur deepest thots on maaneet luv...keep it up

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awesomepooja

@awesomepooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#743

hi misty add me to your pm list.

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muskaan

@dh_riti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#744

hey mishty where r u? whn will u update?

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muskaan

@dh_riti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#745

hey mishty kahan kho gayi koi msg hi de do k kab update karoge.

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#746

when will you going to back

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#747

Loved it, plsss PM thenext updates as i dint get PM of part 60 and plsss continue sooon.

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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#748

Where r you dear? When updating?

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#749

Just started to read please do add me to your pm :) x

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Angelic_mishty

@Angelic_mishty

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Posted: 13 years ago

#750

my account - /user/601210

those who want to be pmed...

do send me buddy request and also tell ur IF frnd about my stories...😛

part 61

as dey reached gett's bedroom...

it was almost 5:30 in morning...

maan - geet change karlo...aur haan..aaj AC on mat karna...otherwise u vil definitely catch cold...

geet smiled - haan baba..ab aap bhi jayiye...kafi der ho gayi hai...

maan lovingly cupped her face...

maan caringly - achha suno...gar tabiyat thik na ho..to mujhe call kar dena...

geet smiled - haan baba...ab aap jayiye...mene aapko sone bhi nahi diya...

maan naughtily - dnt worry...it vil b payed back 1 day...

geet knew wat he meant...

she slapped on his chest blushing...

geet - maan aap bhi na..ab jayiye na...

maan smiled...

kissed her forehead n left halfheartedly...

while geet made her way to change...

...

NXT MORNING

...

rano entere geet's room only to find geet sleeping on bed..while her room quite messed wid damp floar...

rano - geet..puttar uth ja..colge nahi janna...

geet rolling on bed...slowly n lazily opening her eyes...

rano - aur ye kya haal bana rakha hai kamre ka..ye farsh gili kaise ho gaya...tune raat ko khiki khuli chhod i thi kya...kafi barish...

rano was about to continue wid her blabber...but stopped as she found dat geet is not hearing a single word...

rano rolled her eyes...

rano - uth ja bachha..ekh kitni der ho gayi hai...

geet - mumma...5 min bas...

rano - abhi...

geet - mumma plz...

rano - geet...

geet lazily pushed herself out of bed...

n was a bout to slip on d wet floar wen rano held her..not letting her fall...

rano - ye farsh etni gili kaise ho gayi..kitni baar kahan hai ke sote waqt khidkiyan ban rakha kar...

geet knew d truth..so didn't say a word...

n made her way for daily chorses...

...

KHURANA MANSION

at breakfast table...

dadi - maan bete kahan hai...

dev smiled - aaj kal bro dikhayi hi kahan dete hai...

annie dramatically - actually dadi maa...bro aaj kal dikhte hi nahi..

dadi smiled knowing d reason...

dadi - annie dev..aise bhai ka mazak nahi banate...annie beta..jao bhai ko bula lao..

annie - ji dadi..

annie left to see maan...

dev - dadi..mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ke kuchh gadbad hai...

dadi - dev..wat do u mean..??

dev - dadi..u very well know wat i mean...bhai aur..u know...

dadi - maan ko nahi pata..par agar ye maan ne apke muh se sun liya to aap..u know...

dev gulped his saliva in fear...

n ate his breakfast silently..

while dadi laughed...

...

annie entered maan's room..

annie - bhai...

maan in sleep... annoyingly - wat is it annie...

annie - i dnt believe dis...MAAN SINGH KHURANA sleeping at dis late...

maan got up annoyingly...

maan - dadi ne nashta kar liya...

annie - haan bhai..sab ne kar liya...but wat is wrong wid u...

maan - kya matlab...

annie - i mean..aaj kal aap kab sote hai..kab uthate hai...kuchh pata hi nahi chalta..

maan rolled his eyes...

maan - tumhe colge ke liye der nahi ho rahi..go fast..i need to fresh up..

annie - ok bhai.waise b aaj last day hai...

saying dis annie left...

maan thinking..."..last day..??..dis gal...pata nahi ye geet uthi bhi hogi ya nahi..aaj usse leave leni hai...leave.??..hmm..dats y annie said last day..but y annie..leave it.."

saying dis maan left for his chorses..

...

COLGE

PRINCIPAL'S CABIN

ranbir , nisha , mayank , nupur , annie n geet standing in 1 row...

while principal standing in front of dem wid serious face...

all looked at each other for once n den looked down again...

princi - wat is it ?

geet - sir..veerji ki shadi hai..dats y i need leave of two weeks...

princi - hmm..wat about others..

nupur - sir..veerji ki shadi hai..dats y i need leave of two weeks...

princi - mayank u ??

mayank - sir..veerji ki shadi hai..dats y i need leave of two weeks...

princi litle suspiciously...

princi - u ranbir ..??

ranbir - sir..veerji ki shadi hai..dats y i need leave of two weeks...

princi - nisha..??

nisha - sir..veerji ki shadi hai..dats y i need leave of two weeks...

princi - n annie u ??

annie looked at each of dem...

all signalled her to repeat d same..

annie - sir..veerji ki shadi hai..dats y i need leave of two weeks...

...

principal stared at dem wid angry face n disbelieve...

princi - me sach me bewkoof hu ya tum log mujhe banane ki koshish kar rahe ho...

nupur - aap sach me hai sir...

nupur immediately bite her toung for her blabber...

mayank - sir eska matlab hai..hume samajh nahi aa raha aap kya keh rahe hai...

princi - sab ke veerji ki shadi ek sath hai...

ranbir - no sir...jinki shadi hai wo hum sab ke veerji hai...

geet rolled her eyes...

geet - sir wo actually brij veerji ki shadi hai..aur hum sab kafi karibi dost hai...like familiar relationship...so...

nisha - so..hum sab ki madat bahot jaruri hai na sir...

princi - hmm...but i need to talk to an eldor of any of u...

annie - sir..aap me bhai se baat kar sakte..u know..mr.khurana...

saying dis she winked at every1...

principal gulped his saliva wid maan's name...

princi - nahi nahi...mr.khurana ko taklif ho jayegi..its ok..u all need to leave an application to HR department...

all together - thnqqq sir..

...

cantin

geet - kya baat hai annie...tere bhai ki to kafi chalti hai...

nupur - haan yaar...aur uske muscles...marjavannn...hoyyyeee...

mayank rolled his eyes...

nisha - mayank..kafi tagda competition hai..bachke rehna...

ranbir - nishu...wo to hamari ms.bollywood ko ghass bhi nahi dalega...

nupur waked him hard on arm...

ranbir - ouchhh...

nupur - u deserve dat...

geet - tum sab log iske bhai se mile ho..aur me nahi..??

mayank - 1st day of annie..remember...u were late...

nisha - as alwzzz

geet rolled her eyes...

annie - mere veerji ko lagatar 3 saal businessman of d year ka award milta aa raha hai...

ranbir - tere veerji ka naam kya tha..me bhool gaya...

annie - bhai...bhai ka naam hai mr...

...

spoilers : wat d helll

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prvs prt - part 58+59+60 N nxt prt - part 62

thnq

love

MISHTY

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