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Angelic_mishty thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnq frndz..........
for ur lovely comments.............
i repeat all dose who want me to PM dem.........can send me frnd request................
thnq..........
btw m updating all d links of parts...on 1 st post...........
so dat vil a bit easy
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Posted: 14 years ago
next part jaldi post karna
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Posted: 14 years ago
u frndz can also suggest me if u want anysong or poem to upadte in it.............
m dere to fullfill all ur wishes.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey r u going to update now...............pl pl update....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me..

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...

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Part 9



geet was dumb stuck...
she felt like she vil almost faint...
not for dat she talked sum1 else insted of annie...
but...
she recognized his voice...
she knew it was him...
a smile teased him lips...
all d moments of mall scenes flashed in front of her...
...

her heart started beating fast...
maan could feel d restlessness in her breath...
he smiled...
her silence was a proof to him dat she recognized him...
his heart rejoyyed wid d thout dat even if she didn't see him..still she recognized him...felt him...
...
both kept quite for a moment...

maan - apne dil se kaho ke shant ho jaye...is waqt me pass nahi hu..usse sambhalne ke liye...
her eyes popped...
she melted in his words...

she got sure its him...she never doubted any way...
her smiled widened...
her heart filled wid happiness...wid his voice...
her heart beat even more fastened...
maan smiled...

she cut d call in moment...

maan looked at d mob lovingly...
kissed mobile...
maan - ye kaisi ladki hai...GEET...kya me isse kabhi samajh paunga...kya meri b kahani shuru ho gayi...
...

he was stuck at d moment...
looking at mobile as if he is watching her...

" shuru ho gayi...
...kahani meri
mere dil ne baat...
...na mani meri...

shuru ho gayi...
...kahani meri
mere dil ne baat...
...na mani meri...

hadd se b aage ye...
...guzar hi gaya...

khud b pareshan huva aur...
...mujhko b ye...kar gaya...

dil kyu ye mera...
...shor kare...
dil kyu ye mera...
...shor kare...

edhar nahi...
...udhar nahi
teri...
...aur chale..."
?

maan was still lost standing at d same place...
annie came out..
annie - kiska phone tha bhai...
maan didn't respond...
annie shook his hand.. - bhai...
maan snapped out of his thouts...
maan handed over d mob n moved out without saying anything...
maan now knew 1 more thing..d gal he was searching allover world...is frnd if his sis...
he would hav just jumped in joy...but controlled himself...
n moved...
annie shook hear head... - bhai b na...
checked d number it was GEET...
Annie called her...
geet looked at d number...
her heart punced in joy...but y..she wondered...
she was still not sure..dat she justed talked wid him..or she dreamed...
but y vil she dream for a stranger...to whom she havn't seen yet..she wondered..
phone rang again...
she snapped pick d call...
annie - hello geet...
geet was now sure she dreamed...
a smile teased her lips...dat she dreamed of him...
annie - hello...r u dere...
geet - haan...haan annie...
annie - tune call kiya tho wo...dar asal mere b...
geet interupts saying - haan wo..kal ka plan batane ke liye..kal tum subha 11 baje hume XXX ke yahan milna...
annie - hume...
geet - wo mere sare frnds tumhe milna chahte hai..in short u can join our group..
annie - how many r u guys...

geet - we r total five...1 pair...
annie - great..wat r d plans exactly...
geet was still reminding her blah blah...she dreamed*...lol
geet - hmm..wo kal subah we vil roam..vil have lunch outside...den movie...n a part from me in d night...which is a surprise...
annie - sound fun...ok i'l b dere..seeya...
geet - yaah..bye..
annie - bye..
...

geet kept d phone aside...
rolling over d bed...
pullling spread to hide herself...but from whom...she wondere...
she has never seen him..or may b vil never see him in future...still she is dreaming...

geet murmuring - mujhe ho kya gaya hai...jab se subah wo...
...she paused...
her cheecks turned pink wid blush...
d moment of deir closeness flashed in front of her...
her heart beat started beating faster...
suddenly she remebered his words.."apne dil se kaho ke shant ho jaye...is waqt me pass nahi hu..usse sambhalne ke liye..."
she hide her face in d spread...
suddenly came out of bed...
took out dat saree she purchased 2day...
went in front of mirror...
tried putting it on herself...
she was almost blushing looking at herself...
suddenly reality stuck her...
she shook her head...

" geet..tu ye sab kya soch rahi hai...hav u losted it...wo sirf ek accident tha...par wo...wo kay haan...wo kya..tumhe unhe dekha...nahi dekha par...nahi dekha na...firit was just a accident...forget him..he hold u bcoz u were scared..dats it...ok...not just ok...remind urself..he is nobody...dare u think of him again...par...waise b adhi pagal hai...ab puri ho jayegi...dekha na...kya kar diya...unke samne aise patar patar bol ragi thi...par wo to sapna tha na...woho to tu kisi stranger ke sapne dekh rahi hai...tujhe chadhh gayi hai kya...ab chup chap muh band kar aur soja..."
geet fighting wid herlf in front of mirror...
shooks her head...
n gets in d bed...
again to dream of him...
dosses off...

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IMP - reader, i need good response from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating...if u want more n more updates from me...dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec to LIKE n a min to COMMENT..dnt i deserve a min or ur time aftr d update ??...i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

love
MishTy

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
preethia thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update................just asked if u r updating and then i receive pm abt ur update.............i loved it...........and that too when maan says to geet "apne dil se kaho ke shant ho jaye...is waqt me pass nahi hu..usse sambhalne ke liye......."
haye haye.............kya dialogue hain..............
i just cant get enough of this love story now.............i know u updated now only but when r u planning to update next
Edited by preethia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was awesome update.....precap is very interesting...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
ho that was a cute update...loved it...
apne dil se kaho ke shant ho jaye...is waqt me pass nahi hu..usse sambhalne ke liye...haiiiii😍...thanks for the pm....precap...i hope its nt a dream again...do continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mishty,ur update is so nice & cute... it....
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is lovely part 😳

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