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Posted: 14 years ago
updated my comments on page 84
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Posted: 14 years ago
I felt bad......before doing it at least he should know that its his geet.......he lusted her than love her......she loved him and gave everything to him without thinking i can understand her thinking but maan did was i dint like it........i am disappointed with the update and i am sorry muskaan
Edited by maanmishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was an unbelievable update. simply brilliant. no words for the almost painful anxiety with which they love the other. Geets anguish can be resolved for she is with him, that knowledge itself is strength.

But for Maan, every test he puts her through, he goes through a tougher one himself. While being one with her, will revive him no end, I still want to see him out of his agony. with renewed urgency now.


had to add after reading some posts:

the strip portion was the brilliance in your update. To say it was Maan's lust is a slap to his face! I cannot begin to imagine the sheer pain and hurt that prompted this test.
To be naked in front of someone requires giving in completely, giving of yourself completely. Even when people indulge in casual sex, they do so in the comfort of being accepted in the physical way. of being longed in the physical way.
And then too, why do you think most people are shy of making love in the light?! It may seem very simple , to assume that lovers have no barriers between them.

Its actually ironical that clothes are the biggest defense between two people.

And then to have Geet, strip, in the face of his anger, and stand there, while he gives nothing away, ... to stand completely naked in the 'brightness of the afternoon'... standing naked to face maybe rejection or complete indifference, but still standing , leaving it to him....

Oh yes, that was equivalent to jumping off the building.
and yes, that was the proof Maan needed.. You cant expect him to give himself to anyone but Geet, and to make love to Meet would have to mean making love to Geet ... He would be giving himself away completely too.. and giving himself away is alien to him unless that giving away is to Geet..
this test allays his fears that hes being tricked, cause this kind of commitment and devotion can only come from geet... so the test had to be this stark, this naked.

felt such deep pain for maan while geet took the test... could have cried for him... seriously muskaan waiting for when he knows the truth.
Edited by ninand - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update. Now please dont let any misunderstanding stand in their way. Make Maan accept Meet as his one and only Geet. Update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing.. tht was really HOT!!!!!... precap looks exciting.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was an awesome update yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
my mouth was wide open in an 'O' when i read stripe... and she did it... that was not acceptable for me... i wanted him to stop her... coz what he did in my oppinion was not love but mere lust... she was doing it n he just laid there on the bed... trust me till now i never felt angry at this maan but after reading this update i am angry....
i'm sorry di but i did not like the stripe part at all...
rest of the update loved it... you explained why she did it i agree but still cant seem to digest the fact... i just couldnt get my self to like it...
when he realises for real that she is geet what will he do... say sorry for being so rude and that's it....
but i guess thats the concept of deewangi... it knows no limits....
i hope i did not offend u... just my veiw point
Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my god I don't have words to say about the update 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

hai

so she proved herself
and you took that mangal sutra away
you are becoming one hell of a suspense queen😆
precap:
the more he will have her the more he will want her😉
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
testing times for geet..............she knows she is doing it for her hubby
but maan is still having doubts and not sure that she is his little wify and wud go to any extent for his love and happiness..............i just hope he never feels bad later that he had done it with her in such a harsh manner.............i thought she wud b wearing that mangalsutra even i am hurt with that............
waiting for the next update

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