Destiny's Play-Pt XXXIII(Pg 144) 4/3 - Page 65

Originally posted by: MsMovielover

oh wow i just came across ur ff.. & read it all in one go 😲
loved its really amazing...
please add me to the PM list i cant wait to read more

Thanks. Send me a buddy request so that I can send you PMs for my updates.

Originally posted by: Opti

Thanks. Send me a buddy request so that I can send you PMs for my updates.

hey you online...

uopdate soooooon.. I was wating for you

Originally posted by: shivangi783

The misunderstanding has been solved! Yay

Loved how Maan poured his heart out to her.

Now both have confessed their love for each other, and thus begins their new journey of life😊

But what about Sameera? She's a such a good soul! Will she get a man who'd love her selflessly?

The last three updates were really high on emotions, portraying the pain of both Maan and Geet.

Yes, the misunderstanding has been solved and they have confessed. I will deal with Sam a little later.

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

hey you online...

uopdate soooooon.. I was wating for you

Yes, I am online. Will update after I'm through with the comments. Had taken time with this update because I had modified some things from the original update.

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Yay. She is his sherni even here.

Geet is so full of surprises. This just goes on to show, Geet can be humble, lovable, down-to-earth, kind but she only looks gullible, weak, submissive. She is a very strong girl with the capability to do anything.

I loved it that she ran and initiated their first kiss. Splendid Opti.

Can't wait to read more.

Geet will always be Maan's sherni wherever she is, in the show on in this fic. She is a very strong girl and her strength will come out more in the face of adversities. She initiated the kiss because she wanted to stop Maan from pleading. She can't bear to see him in so much misery.

Originally posted by: ammu5

geet u r superb

Yes, my Geet is superb.

Originally posted by: kadydeep

Opti..

I read the last 2 updates together.... I cannot stand too much suspense or angst...Thanks to your tear jerker warning me waited for a couple chapters before I read.......I am happy with the way things turned out......

Glad to see them being honest and straight forward......I am glad Maan spoke out and cleared all of Geet's apprehensions ... The girl deserves some happiness after her own kith and kin deserted her.....

Thanks Deeps. Yes, my Geet deserves some happiness and Maan will try to give her as much of it as possible.

Originally posted by: sarita21992

Loved d comparision u drew btw geet nd d moon. Superb! all i can say is tht now i see a full moon coming again in geet life after those three weeks of new moon. Hope there wont be much problems in their relationship now on. Geet is so pure, after being hurt so much, she so readily forgave maan... Hats off 2 d women. Seems lyk 4m now on d story will focus on how maan eventually becomes successful with d support of his gr8 wife.
Any more updates for d day?

Thanks Shivangi. Yes, they are in the full moon phase and hope this phase never ends but then life is full of ups and downs. Whe you love someone as much as Geet loves her man, I dont think it should be difficult to forgive him, especially when she sees how much he regrets what he did. The story will discuss Maan's struggle to attain his dream and how he does, of course in the backdrop of Maaneet's love.

Originally posted by: liv2laugh

Opti

Dunno if I commented on this or not and too lazy to check 😆 😆 😆

I loved this part. You beautifully brought out the mix of emotions Geet is experiencing. On one hand she really loves the thick headed idiot 😆 on the other hand she is wondering why her life is always so cursed and why she is always unlucky 😭. I felt so bad for her - she had been let down by the man in her life always 😭. I feel her pain. But I admire her for taking this step and trying to sort it all out. She did not go to her maayka because she knew it would create a storm.

Maan finding her and his feelings on seeing her were conveyed so well. 😃

I love her friend Sneha. You took care to show her side of things also. You develop your characters well 👏 👏 👏 unlike the people in the serial 😡.

Maan was stunned when Geet revealed she overheard part of the convo b/w him and Sam. But he quickly put the pieces together. This man may be slow sometimes but when he wants something he will not let anything stand in this way and will be superfast 😎.

I loved their conversation and the way Maan cleared up the air and all the misconceptions that Geet had. But as they say actions speak louder than words, so Maan better do something to prove to her that he loves her 😉.

And yeah love our sherni Geet who is always the first one to take the bull by the horns in this relationship - first one to say "I love you" and the one to initiate the first kiss. Maan has a lot of catching up to do if he has to keep up with this wife 😆 😆 😆......bechara he thought he was getting a nice docile wife for a short time. 🤣 and this girl has already made the first move twice. 🤣

Thanks for making my morning. Now back to work.
Jhan 🤗
PS: Is there any chance of getting on your PM list. I am sending you a buddy request (which I probably should have done a long time ago but as they say better late than never right 😉)

PPS: Haila I wrote a ramayan on your post. Sorry. 😆 😆 😆

Thanks for that lovely long comment. Yes, Maan has a lot of catching up to do but he will get there and more than meet his wife's intensity! Will PM you when I update next .

Originally posted by: doosheeka

great update..................finally maan has accepted and confessed his feelings for geet...................continue soon......................

Yes, Maan has accepted his feelings for Geet and she too has accepted and forgiven him.