Destiny's Play-Pt XXXIII(Pg 144) 4/3

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Ilovemsk

@Ilovemsk

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#631

Awesome....
Yaar. Update soon...so happy!
Superb x

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komlika

@komlika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#632

awesome update.........love confession........they kiss ☺️........ thanks for update......... now love story has began 😍

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#633

awww how cute!! yay :))

cant wait to read the next part!

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@-BlushaLicious-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#634

awsome update yaar loved it

loved geets boldness lol

love maaneet

update soonxx1

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@simi91

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#635

its was good they solve there
misunderstanding

amazing confession

love Geet turning

bold so cute to keep him

quite with a kiss

super hit update

pls cont soonnnnnnnn

thanks pm

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Isha

@JilyPotter

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#636

Yes...you have made me so happy....

I loved the part went Geet is on the swing...you actually are able to see how weak and vulnerable she is even if she puts such a strong mask on...

and thank goodness that Maan came..and he explained his situation so well that any girl can fall in love...and i fell in love...

and than the kiss...it was just sweet bliss..

thank you for the update...it was wonderful

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Tinks

@HawtieSeep

Navigator

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Posted: 14 years ago

#637

hey thank you for the updates😊

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#638

Awe so sweet maan confessed his love to her and cleared the misunderstanding and awe geet understood the depth of his feelings and reciprocated it with a loving kiss anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#639

Originally posted by: manashi
i just loved the beginning and end of this update.....................😛

the analogy with the changing phases of moon was so apt and beautiful................😳

and the kiss was more of an acceptance than desire..............⭐️

lovely update as usual..................continue soon............👏

You liked only the beginning and the end, not the middle? You are right, the kiss was one of acceptance and not desire. Geet did not like seeing Maan plead for her love when she was only more than willing to give it to him.

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#640

Originally posted by: sindu555
loved it to the core ...

you know the thing i loved the most about both of them is their honesty towards each other ... their flawless, honest communication. is truly amazing

the symblolization with moon was awesome .... 😊

everything about them is so pure...

thanks a ton for the awesome update

btw will u be giving us more updates today ? 😍

love

Sana