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Posted: 14 years ago

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from the prologue itself i must say u seem to b a vry nice writer

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Posted: 14 years ago

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good start dear..continue.
bt i wud like to point out something just for ur information- abt wordsworth describing life as a huge drama.. i think u meant shakespeare- it was his sonnet starting 'All the life's a stage' from his play As You Like It... i think u meant that one.i also hav studied it in my 9th.. am nt finding mistakes or anything, just telling 4 ur info.. correct me if i am wrong..u cud read the poem here if u wud like it- http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/show/15490-William-Shakespeare-All-The-World-s-A-Stage Other than that, nice start to d ff.. continue.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: phoenixgirl
good start dear..continue.
bt i wud like to point out something just for ur information- abt wordsworth describing life as a huge drama.. i think u meant shakespeare- it was his sonnet starting 'All the life's a stage' from his play As You Like It... i think u meant that one.i also hav studied it in my 9th.. am nt finding mistakes or anything, just telling 4 ur info.. correct me if i am wrong..u cud read the poem here if u wud like it- http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/show/15490-William-Shakespeare-All-The-World-s-A-Stage Other than that, nice start to d ff.. continue.

O thnx...Its my mistake..I had two poems consecutively..One of Shakespeare and one of Wordworth..I got confused..Anywys thnx for letting me know..🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Loved it.... plss add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: zahra15
from the prologue itself i must say u seem to b a vry nice writer

OMG..Thats such a shweet comment..Please dii..I am just a growing writer..They are way better writers whom I admire..But anyways thanks a lot for the lovely comment..It made my day😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: sindu555
nice...

continue soon

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Sana

Hey Sana dii..

Thanks for giving my FF a try..Its very sweet of you to be here and comment as soon as I sent the PMs

Thanks for liking the starting too😳

Definitely I will continue..

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ
Loved it.... plss add me to ur pm list

Hey🤗

May I know your name pls?

Thanks a lot for loving the prologue

I really appreciate that you spare time for commenting..

Thanks a lot once again for the very sweet comment

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@amal
anytime dear... i know many people get confused between Wordsworth, Shakespeare and Blake, might be because they share the same first name. Good that you have corrected it in your prologue, as it is a very famous and beautiful poem, and doesn't feel nice if you get the poet wrong. Good luck with your FF!!

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