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PART 5:

Geet: Maan, wats wrong tell me

Maan (wid full intensity nd taking Geet's hand in his): Geet I LOVE YOU, I REALLY REALLY LOVE U. I DON'T KNW HOW, WEN ND Y BUT U BECAME AN INTEGRAL PART OF MY LYF INFACT U BECAME MY LIFE ND I CANT LIVE WITHOUT U. WILL U BE MINE?

Geet stood dere frozen. She has never ever thought dat Sumday Maan would say dis thing to her. She don't know how to react, wat to say. She was totally speechless at dat moment. No doubt she likes Maan nd likes his company also but just as a friend she has never thought anything beyond dat bcoz sumthing from her past is stopping her to feel like dis for sumone. She don't want to break his heart but she didn't even want him to give any false commitment. She again looked at Maan who was waiting for her anwer paitently. She was really praying dat dis turned out to be a joke, sum another prank of Maan's but unfortunately its not

Maan: Bolo na Geet! WILL U BE MINE?

Geet: Maan, wat r u saying? U r joking rite

Maan(held her by her shoulders): Geet, u think m joking? U think I can play any kind of prank like dis specially to the girl whom I love a lot

Geet(closes her eyes): Maan pls.! Pls stop it over here only. I cant take dis joke of urs anymore

Maan(growled): Geet for god sake its not joke. I REALLY LOVE U

Geet opens her eyes only to find him standing close to her nd his eyes are speaking in volumes. She still couldn't believe d reality which is in front of her.

Geet(softly): Since wen?

Maan: I don't know Geet. I don't know since wen, where, why; I don't know anything all I know is dat I LOVE U VERY MUCH ND I CANT LIVE WIDOUT U.

Geet: I m sorry, I m sorry if I have given u any wrong signal but I haven't seen u more den a friend. I haven't thought of u in dat way

Maan: y m I dat bad dat u cant think of me more den a friend.

Geet: no Maan its nt like dat

Maan: Den wat Geet?

Geet: Maan, m not ready for all dis. I don't want to fall for anyone

Maan: but y Geet?

Geet said nothing nd looked other way. Maan sensed dat Geet doesn't want to share it now therefore he didn't force her to tell. He held her shoulders nd make her to face him

Geet: Maan, wat did u saw in me?

Maan: I don't understand u Geet

Geet: Maan, u r such a handsome, Good looking Person. Any girl would die for ur one look only nd u can make easily any girl fall for u nd moreover m not like ur previous Girlfriends neither I m hot nor I m stunning like dem. I m just an average looking girl who just simply lives her life den wat did u saw in me? Hw can u fall for me?

Maan: Geet, even u don't know wat special qualities r dere in u. I agree on whatever u say but Geet u r different from all other girls. Ur simplicity, ur innocence makes u different from all other girls nd dis quality of urs makes me fall in luv wid u. trust me u r d most beautiful girl I have ever met.

Geet: Maan, I need sumtym

Maan: Geet, I know its very sudden for u. nd u take ur tym as much as u want. I'll wait for ur answer

Geet: Maan, let me make one thing clear to u before only, I knw wat kind of answer u were expecting from me wen u asked to give me sumtym but dat doesn't mean my answer would be yes only. I mean I cant say wat would be my answer after dat may be den also my answer would be no. R u ready for dat?

Maan: Geet, I completely understand wat u say nd trust me I'll not force u for anything. U take as much tym u want nd whatever ur answer would be after dat I'll accept it. It's a Promise.

Geet: Thanx Maan, nd one more thing I don't want our friendship to be affected due to dis. u knw wat I mean?

Maan: ya Geet ofcourse nd don't worry we r friends nd we always be. No matter wat ur answer will be; we r friends nd we'll always be I assure u of dat

She said nothing but smiled

******~~~~~Back to Present~~~~~*******

"I wish I would refuse to u straight away dere only nd walks out from urlife forever after dat" She said while opening her eyes wen she remembers d moment wen Maan Proposed to her. She remembers wen she came home dat nite. Her state of mind was still not settled. Everytym she thinks of Maan she remembers about his Proposal even if she don't want to. She remembers hw much excuses she has to give to her Mom wen she skipped her dinner dat nite. No matter hw tried she hard to not to think about it but it all failed. She hears d music, she reads her fav. Novel, she surfs d net just to keep herself busy so dat she couldn't think of dat but nothing seems to be working. Finally she shrug off all her thoughts nd decides to sleep. But sleep seems to be miles away from her. She decided to talk to Meera about dis. she texts her to meet her next day at CCD she needs to talk sumthing important.

*****~~~~~~~ Flashback~~~~~~~~*******

Meera: but wats d Problem Geet? Y u can't accept his Proposal?

Geet: Meera u were asking me dis? u? u knw everything

Meera: I knw Geet, but hw long u'll stuck up in ur Past. Its tym for u to move on nw

Geet: m not stuck up in my Past Meera I moved on nd u knw dis

Meera: den wats d Problem?

Geet: I don't know Meera, but m afraid

Meera: Afraid of wat Geet?

Geet: Wat if I again left Heart-broken? Wat if he also does d same wat Rahul has done wid me?

Meera: Geet, dere is a difference between Maan nd Rahul. I knw dat I dnt knw Maan from much Long but I knw dat he's nt like Rahul. I knw he had affair wid many girls but I haven't seen him falling as seriously as he fall for u. infact since d day u both became friends I haven't seen him or heard him talking about any other girl

Geet: But Meera...

Meera: Geet, I had seen u going thru very tough tym wen Rahul left u. only I knw hw hard was it for u to overcome from dat. U smiled from outside but had lots of pain inside nd nw wen Life is giving u other chance To Love, To live, To Feel for d person who truly loves u den y u denying it? Y u not giving him nd urself an another chance?

Geet: Meera, hw can u be so sure dat nothing will go wrong dis tym?

Meera: Geet, tere sath jitna bhi bura hona tha ho gaya, ab job hi hoga wo acha hoga. Trust me.

Geet said nothing but smiled. She finds a ray of Hope in Meera's Words. She thought that Meera is rite she should give Maan one chance but before dat Maan should know About her Past nd she will tell him everything. Thinking dis she texts Maan to meet her next day.

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Next day both Maan nd Geet met at d same place where Maan proposes her. He had no idea y Geet has called him today over here. She just said dat she need to talk sumthing important so he decided not to get late as Geet dnt like Latecomers. But wen he reaches over dere he saw Geet already sitting over dere

Maan (To himself): Shit! I m again late

He quickly speeds up his pace nd reaches to d place where Geet is

Maan: Hi Geet!

Geet (smiles): Hi! (den looks at her watch) 20 mins late

Maan: m sorry yaar. Actually got stuck up in d traffic. (He said while sitting)

Geet said nothing but smiles

Maan: So u wanted to talk sumthing important to me

Geet: ya Maan its really very important.

Maan: ya geet tell me

Geet: Maan as a friend u knw me from six months nd u knw every part of my lyf. But dere is one thing which neither u had asked nor I had ever told u. but I think nw I need to tell u before I can consider about our relationship

Maan: Aisi kya baat hai Geet? Y u so tensed?

Geet: Maan dere is a part of my Past which nw m going to tell u nd which will decide d future of our relationship

Maan said nothing but listened to her

Geet: Maan, u asked dat day na dat y cant I fall for sumone. Bcoz I had already Fallen for sumone 3 years back. He was my classmate. I had crush on him since d first day of our session infact it was Love at first sight. But I couldn't able to tell him. Den one day on Friendship Day I asked him for Friendship nd he agreed to it. He said dat he was always waiting for me to ask him as his friend becoz he was afraid to ask me as he thought that may be I'll refuse to it or even create a scene.

Maan: den?

Geet: Den we bith become friends nd day by day our friendship gets stronger but my Love was always dere for him but I was not able to express it den one day he proposes me in front of d Whole class. I was totally speechless as d person whom I love d most is proposing me in front of d whole class. It was all just like a dream to me. I instantly accepted it. Nd after dat we became d famous couple of d college. Girls use to envy me as Rahul was my partner but I didn't care for anyone of dem as I m happy wid him. I was happily seeing my dreams of Future wid Rahul. I thought dat as soon as we set up our career we'll tell our families about our relationship. But it is rightly said dat Dreams r broken as soon as we open our eyes. Mere saath bhi aisa hi hua

Maan notices a Drop of tear in her yes but he didn't stopped her

Geet: I still remember dat day wen I faced d reality. I was very happy dat day. I got selected for inter-college quiz show for representing my college. I wanted to share my happiness wid Rahul. But he was nowhere to seen. I enquired about him so sumone has told me dat he has not came to college today as his parents has gone out of town nd he needs to be at home. I decided to meet him over dere. I thought of giving him a surprise so has gone without telling him. As soon as I reach his home I saw his bike at Parking Lot which makes sure dat he's at home. I knocked at d door but no one opened it, den I noticed dat door was not locked so I entered inside

******~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~*******

Geet (To herself): where is Rahul? Darwaza bhi khula chod rakha tha? I think I should check to his Room

She said nd proceeds towards his Room. He once told dat his Room is upstairs next to Aquarium so she didn't find it difficult to find it. As soon as she opened d Door of his room. She saw d Bitter Reality of her life. She saw Rahul on his Bed wid sum other girl nd d girl was none other den Sonia, her classmate.

Sonia: Honey u are very bad

Rahul: y?

Sonia: u make me Jealous like hell of dat tacky Geet. U are wid him always glued wid her like dat like u were really a couple

Rahul: o c'mon Darling I had done all dis for u only. U were away from me becoz of dat Jay. So I need to make u realize ur mistake so I haven't find any other option den dis. nd wid Geet it was easy as I was knowing d fact dat she loves me from d day 1 so there would be no complications. U know first find any GF nd all dat.

Sonia: but how long ur Relationship will be wid Geet. I cant stand her near u anymore

Rahul: Relax Darling very Soon I m planning to break-up wid her. Waise bhi she's very dumb. I get bored wid her. She always talks about Love, trust etc etc nd dis makes me bore. Poor girl thinking dat we r having Future together but least she know dat soon m going to throw her out of my lyf.

Geet couldn't face d fact nd in vein she dropped d Vase near her which brings Both Rahul's nd Sonia's attention towards her. Rahul was shocked to see Geet over dere. Geet just closed d Door nd ran downstairs as fast as she can. In d meanwhile Rahul quickly wears his Bathrobe nd came downstairs nd stopped her

Rahul: Geet Wait!

Geet: let me go Rahul

Rahul: Geet, I can explain to u

Geet(angrily): wat will u explain me Rahul? Dis? dis Bull Shit!! Why had u done dis? y had u breaked my trust

Rahul(smirked): fine nw if u knw everything so I wont hide anything ffrom u. yes I love Sonia from always but she has gone far away from me due to misunderstanding so I need to attract her attention derefore I used u. I was never in love wid u. I always love Sonia

Geet: I haven't seen a cheap person like u

Rahul: nd u wont see also. Nd waise bhi it was a saying "Everything is fair in Love and War". Aur tumhe kya Laga dat I can fall for u? u d dumbest girl. Just look at urself in mirror do u think u had any extra-ordinary quality dat can make anyone fall for u. no u don't so better forget about everything dat was between us nd get out from my lyf.

*****~~~~~FLASHBACK ENDS~~~~*****

Geet: nd after dat day I decided dat I'll never see his face in future. I even changed my college also. He was nowhere in my lyf nw. but d pain, d wound dat he has given me was always dere. But den wid d Help of Meera nd other friends I overcum from all dis but I vowed dat I'll never fall for anyone neither I'll trust anyone because I dnt wanted to get hurted again. (den looked at Maan) den u came to my Lyf. Nd unknowingly I started trusting u nd u became my very gud friend but wen u propose to me den I couldn't able to face it dat tym.

Maan notices d tears in his eyes nd he couldn't stand it. He felt rage towards d person who has hurt her dis much. He slowly keeps his hand on hers to calm her. She slowly wipes away her tears nd faces Maan

Geet: Maan, I dnt have courage left to Love again, to trust sumone again. No doubt I trust u but I still cant prepare myself to luv u.

Maan: Geet, I understand. U had really gone through a very bad Phase. But Geet trust me I'll never break ur trust. Geet I said before also nd again saying dat m nt forcing anything on u. u take as much tym as u want nd even if u wont feel d same way like I did den also we'll be friends like we r nw.

Geet dnt know y but she felt an assurance in his words nd dey started dating each other. Though Maan was always behave wid her in d same way like he did before but Geet started to Feel sumthing for him. D feelings which she has suppressed for forever. She found Meera's word right. She found her true Love in Maan nd after 3 months she said yes to him. Not because she don't want to disappoint him but becoz she has really started to feel for him. She gave her life a another chance nd she was happy. Memories of Rahul was nowhere in her life. Nw dere was only one person left in her Life, Maan. Nd dey both r really going well wid each other. Everyone adores dem as a couple. Yash nd Meera both were happy for dem.

Almost 1 nd a half year has been passed of dere relationship. But dere was sumthing which was still to cum in dere way. Geet Found Maan's Behaviour Odd from few days. He gets irritated very soon nd was not like before anymore. Geet thought dat may be due to stress because of studies he was like dis so she didn't complained but d reality is sumthing different.

Maan get influenced by sum of his friend dat d thing between Geet nd Him is not Love but just an Attraction. Initially he didn't concentrate on dis but as d tym Passes by all dis things has started leaving impact on him. Nd he really started to feel like dat d people around him were true. Yash was out of town due to his internship derefore he couldn't discuss it wid him. He even had a fight wid Geet also without any reason which leave Geet stunned nd she realizes dat Maan's behaviour was not due to stress but sumthing else nd sumwhere she had d intuition dat soon dis relationship will cum to an end nd as this thought came to her mind she Prays to God dat nothing would happen like dis nd all dis Passes like a Nightmare. But it didn't nd she gets sure of dat wen Maan called her for meeting him next day. Datsy she kept d belongings which she considered as a souveneir of dere love wid her so dat if in case Maan ends dis relationship she can return him back all dis

On d other hand Maan was too in dilemma. He don't want to break Geet's heart nd trust. But he don't want to keep dis relationship widout Love either (Acc to him). Derefore he decides to call her next day nd thought of talking her about dis nd asks her to just be friends

*****~~~~~~~Back to Present~~~~~~~~*****

"But u didn't agreed to that also Geet" he said while getting up from his Bed. He thought that Geet would be agree to be his friend forever but she said nothing nd walked off. Was this d Thing which was bothering him so much? Her silence?

Maan's Monologue:

I got up from my bed thinking about all d moments dat happened in Past. I have no idea wat to do? Whom to ask? I don't know y but m not getting peace. It was me only who asked her to end dis relationship den y m I getting so much restless. I remember wen she said to me dat she had no courage left to love again den it was me who assured her dat nothing will go wrong wid us, den y did I done dis? if d thing between us was really not love but just a mere attraction den y m not able to get out from d thoughts of her.

Was it because of d Feeling of Guilt which was killing me inside. I remember Geet's face wen I said all dis. I thought dat we'll be friends always like before but she didn't said anything nd walked off which was enough to understand her answer. Y she didn't said anything to me? Y she didn't asked me any questions? Y didn't she asked me wat was her fault? Y didn't she shouts at me? All dese thoughts were haunting me. Her silence, her silence was haunting me. I still couldn't able to figure out dat if I was not in luv wid her den y her silence aching me?

(Maan's Monologue Ends)

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Geet's Monologue:

I sat dere at d window thinking about whatever happened so far. I don't know y Maan did dis to me? I told him everything about my past lyf. Hw I was badly hurted by Rahul, hw my trust have been Badly Broken by him. I also said dat I had no courage left to Love anyone. Den u assure me dat nothing will go wrong wid us. Nd I believed u. I believed on everything u said. U said u love me, I believed. U said me to trust u, I believed. U said dat u'll never leave me, I believed. U said dat u r busy therefore cant meet, I believed. Nd u said u dnt love me, I believed to dat also. I believe on everything u said datsy I didn't questioned u anytime not even today wen u asked me to end dis relationship.

But I dnt know y but I wanted to ask u y u did dis to me? Y u betrayed me? Y u left me? Y u break my heart? Y u break my Trust? Wat was my fault? Y r u giving me dis punishment? But den I thought dat it's useless to ask anything. I knw Maan dat ur friendship id genuine but i dnt want u to be in any kind of guilt. Because I know dat if I'll be wid u after dis den we can never be like before. u be happy in ur lyf nd I'll also try to be happy in mine. From now on Geet Handa will be no where in ur Life nd as d tym passes by u'll forget me also but I doubt dat I can ever forget u as I cant forget d person who came into my Lyf nd changed it forever nd nw who has walked out nd again changed it forever.

(Geet's Monologue ends)

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Awesome update.
Feel really swri 4 geet.
Hope maan realises soon enuf..

just read all the parts!

thats an amazing update..
hope maan realises his folly soon...
feeling extremely sorry for geet...
loved the update to the core
keep writing
reva

maan is such a fool he believed that it was not love
awesome update