FF-Tum Kaun Ho (Chapters 24-44)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#451

wohoooo double updates !!!!!!
and they were brilliant ones toooo !!!!!!
eagerly waiting for the next part !!!

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ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#452

really like the way you have slowly been taking the story forward... the gradual development of their relationship, Maans acceptance of his feelings for Geet.... the intrigue angle and now Geets stance to withdraw cuz of her past...

the storys gaining steam.. :D.... looking forward to more..

and yeh... Happy Holi!!

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sweet cherry

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Posted: 14 years ago

#453

loved both update

do continue

it was amazing

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Ayesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#454

OMG! I m loving this! :)

maan is slowly realizing..he is fallin for her ;) ahh! that shirt scene was hot :D LOL! we need more scenes like this! :D

I love JD :D I would love to see JD calling Geet "Mom"? that would be nice..becus I love their bond. its soo strong & I want maan to see that too :)

last part was awesome :) now geet is gonna back away becus of her part. I want to see a intense confrontation between maaneet..

maybe now..geet will ignore maan & maan will get angry & hott :P haha!

UPDTSOON! :DD update everyday. I missed your updates for awhile :(

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-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#455

Both the parts were lovely. Jealous Maan, Angry Maan, Naughty Maan, Playful Maan....we got to see it all!

I am really worried about this mystery person- who are they and what are they upto.

I wonder how Maan is going to go about convincing Geet to stay (and I am quite convinced that he wont let her go so easily) now that she has made up her mind to leave. I wonder what hides in Geet's past....

Will wait for you to unveil everything in your updates.

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago