Stardust - Link to thread 2 on pg 1 - Page 42

Originally posted by: ..KaJenDelena..

Welcome Back Sanaa.

I Literally done a crazy dance when I saw this on my inbox. lol. Call me crazy but when I know something is going to be worth the read, i get excited. ;) anyway... This OS was seriously nothing short of perfection! Everything was just so beautiful. Every emotion, evey word, every sentence was constructed perfectly.

One of your best OS's ever. lOl, i dont know why but when Ridhimma had opened the door, I imagined Armaan in an army suit before you told us about his profession. I was so proud of myself... just thought I would share that ahaha!

The description was superb, literally, I felt everything, as if i was watching the characters before my eyes. The concept was refreshing and the way you have written this is just beautiful, you have chosen a good scene to write about and the ... literally I dont know how to describe it is just so bloody good! Not even sugar-cotting anything, it was simple amazing!

Your getting better with each OS and I missed you. Keep producing such beautiful stories. Its always a pleasure to read something as beautiful as this. Dont know why but i always run short of words, for the writers that I truly wanna give a long comment to. Sorry.

With Love, Priyanka.

Originally posted by: zephyrr

Beautifully written.. The sacrifice that families of each and every person in the armed forces make cannot be compared to anything else in the world. It's something that makes you look at them so reverentially. I loved the way you captured their emotions.. all the relief, the exhilaration.. and of course the love! beautiful! 😊

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

*EDITED*

Sanaa 🤗

Man, its been eons since I commented on your work!!! Umm can I please not comment on LOOC & WK? Just this once? I swear man, I have loads to do, not to mention studying :| Please, Please, pretty please? :(

Anyway, coming to the OS, it's :O << Okay it's way more that that, but that was my reaction when I first read it. Speechless. In a good way 🤣 But now I shall comment, wait karo.

OMG it was utterly beautiful! Stunning <3 Definitely one of the best things you've written!! The flow of emotions, the way you've written each sentence...everything, was beyond awesome. Her conflicting emotions when she saw him after all that time, standing in front of her, the way you wrote that, magnificent. Seriously. I don't even know what to say, because whatever I say will never be enough for this OS 🤔 It was just that good! Even Sia's emotions were so genuinely portrayed! The things she felt, the shyness, the joy et al was so so so amazing! And when he lifted her up just like all those other dads, I could picture the moment.

And then the end bit with just AR...it was so beautiful. Words didn't matter between them, their love oozed from each gesture! The way she hesitated in showing her tears, the way they touched after all that time, the way he clasped the end of her dupatta, and of course their "I love yous"! Each moment, each emotion, it was all described in such intrinsic detail! I was/am awed :D

And then you go on to say you've lost your writing skills 🤔 I'll tell you what you've lost in Africa. Your MARBLES, that's what! Are you stark raving mad???????????? :O That OS up there, is friggin' fabulous!!! Pagal hai tu! :P

Needless to say, I loved this OS :D Has to be one of my favorites on AR! <3

Write more, soon! And please forgive me for the LOOC & WK comments, I'm seriously sorry about those 🤔

Love you! <3

xoxo

Aanya

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

EDITED??? *falls out of her chair in surprise*..!!

Yes it's been decades since you commented on my work..!! But you finally did..!! 😃 And I read it..AND it made my dil khush..!! 😆 And yess..it's ok..you can cut the comments on WK and LOOC so far..!! Partly because you've given me soo much time to edit my comments..and being the lazy BUM I am I still haven't..but in my defence..my cousins are around so it's pretty difficult for me to come online..!!😕

Awhh..is it really one of the best I've written..?? 😳 Thank youu..!!! *hugs* I was really worried because I knew exactly what I wanted..but there were times when I had to delete Paragraphs because it just didn't fit in..or didn't flow well..!! Hence I thought my writing skills had gone down..!! 😆 Thank youuu..!!!

And I just re read it..and saw some little grammar mistakes which I'll edit in a sec..😆 I guess I really was tired..but even I personally adored the part where she's unsure of how to react...what to do..and his one gesture of holding her dupatta suddenly makes every single little thing fall into place..!! *sigh* While I was watching Mausam I kept thinking how painful it was for those people who had lost husbands..lovers..families in wars..And since I didn't want to kill Armaan off.. this scene was the next one which I thought of to turn into a ff..!!

Merci beaucoup..😳

Love youuu..!! *trillion hugs*

Sanaa

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Haha thank you for letting those slip by ;)

And yep, I shall wait for your edits ...whenever you do them 😆

As for Mausam...err I haven't watched it because well people told me its a 3 hour torture, but the theme sounds nice :D

xoxo

Aanya