**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

lagta hai yeh maasi kuch toh kare gi ..

wel sach bataoon jab ek part khatam hota hai toh maza nahiin aata .. dil karta our bhii likha hota itna jaldi end ho gaya ..

well waiting for nex update .. plz soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
wow trishu...fab part hun....oye ye masi kon h...continue asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
trish..
awesome part!!
whos the massi?
:P
cont soon!!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
guy thanx a lot🤗
u all know who is this masi
guess karo😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Is maasi daksh's mother by any chance ??? looking forward to shlok-aish's meeting 😛
aanchal and arjun are really sweet 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Trishuuu. 🤗

I liked this update. Nothing really moved but I found Arjun and Aanchal cute! 😳 ''Tum baar baar blush kyon kar rahi ho?'' 😆

Yay, go Shlok. You gotta fight fight fight fight, fight for this love! And seriously .. Chand and Haseena think that relocating their house in between the forest is gonna stop Shlok from seeing Asmin. They are REALLY under-estimating him. 😆

Oh, so is the princi Yakwant Dev types? You know, caring about his rep n all .. n corruped n punishing everyone who poses a problem for his son? And, yay, I know who the maasi is ..Soniya Ray! 🥳
Edited by _Akanksha_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

Is maasi daksh's mother by any chance ??? looking forward to shlok-aish's meeting 😛
aanchal and arjun are really sweet 😛

no,masi is not Daksh's mother
thanx a lot 4 commenting😃.............onek dhonnobad😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Trishuuu. 🤗


I liked this update. Nothing really moved but I found Arjun and Aanchal cute! 😳 ''Tum baar baar blush kyon kar rahi ho?'' 😆

Yay, go Shlok. You gotta fight fight fight fight, fight for this love! And seriously .. Chand and Haseena think that relocating their house in between the forest is gonna stop Shlok from seeing Asmin. They are REALLY under-estimating him. 😆

Oh, so is the princi Yakwant Dev types? You know, caring about his rep n all .. n corruped n punishing everyone who poses a problem for his son? And, yay, I know who the maasi is ..Soniya Ray! 🥳

thanx akhi🤗
btw,the princi is something like Yakwant Dev but not exactly & u r right it's Soniya Ray😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
I've add a new charecter in this story as Asmin's massi so plz take a look in introduction thread
Part-5
(next day in Dobriyal's house)
Arnab:"Madhu......kaha ho tum? jaldi aao"
Madhu:"aarahi hu.....chillao mat"
Arnab:"arre samjha karo Madhu..........mujhe Meera ko pickup karne airport jana hai...........or tum to usse janti hi ho k agar mujhe der ho gayi to usse manana mushkil ho jayega"
Madhu:"ha ha mai janti hu,lekin itne dino baad aarahi hai to mujhe lagta hai ki vo badal gayi hogi"
Arnab:"Meera or badlaav noway..........i'm sure vo jaisi thi waisi hi hogi"
(Asmin coming trough the steps)
Aish:"papa i'm ready,lets go"
Madhu:"ready?kiske liye?abhi college jaaogi kya?"
Aish:"what?college ki baat kon kar raha hai?mai to papa k sath massi ko pickup karne jaaungi"
Aranb:"par college?"
Aish:"papa...
Madhu:"bilkul nahi.........arre kalhi to tumne college join kia hai or dusre din hi college nahi jaaogi?"
Aish:"mumma ek din nahi jaaungi to kuch nahi hoga...........plz mujhe massi ko pickup karne jana hai"
Arnab:"nahi.........tum college jaao..............arre tumhari massi kya aaj hi chali jayengi?.........vo pure ek mahine k liye aarahi hai...........badme jee bharke baatey kar lena lekin iss waqt college"
Aish:"fine to mai college se bhag jaungi"😡
(Aish left house)
Madhu:"ye ladki kabhi nahi sudhregi..............Arnab jaldi jaao varna Meera bura maan jayegi"
Arnab:"ha ha abhi nikalta hu"
(Aish in college with Anchal)
Anchal:"kya hua Asmin?...........tum itne gusse me kyu ho?"
Aish:"aaj Meera massi aarahi hai or maine bola ki mujhe unhe pickup karne jana hai lekin mumma,papa ne mana kar dia or zabar dasti college vej dia"
Anchal:"what?Meera massi aarahi hai...........itne dino baad.....owao"
Aish:"exactly.............itne dino baad or mai unhe lene bhi nahi jaa sakti"
Anchal:"koi baat nahi.............vo to ghar hi jayengi na to ghar pe hi mill lena.......or zara socho agar tum college nahi aati to mera kya hota?"
Aish:"or kya hota..........college wale tumhe kaccha chaba lete specialy vo Daksh..........btw,vo hai kaha,aab tak dikhayi nahi de raha"
Anchal:"kyu?tumhe usse milne ki kya zarurat?"
Aish:"zarurat hai..............usska dimag sahi raste pe lane k liye mujhe usse milna parega"
(Mumbai)
(Raichand's)
Chand:"sari packing ho gayi?......kuch chut na jaye..........waha jaake problem ho sakti hai"
Haseena:"saab ho gaya hai Chand..............par mujhe fikar iss baat ki nahi hai...........mujhe fikar hai Shlok ki.............kya hum usske sath thik kar rahe hai?"
Chand:"thik to nahi hai par hume aapne aapko saab se chupake rakhna hai"
Haseena:"or tumhe kya lagata hai ki Shlok ko pata nahi chalega ki hum kaha jaa rahe hai............usse kisi din pata chal hi jayega"
Chand:"baad me dekhenge.........filhal k liye usse chupa k rakkho"
(Shlok was listening)
Shlok:"mere mom,dad mujhe bevakuf bata rahe hai...................par mai aapni Asmin se jyada din dur nahi rahe sakta"
(in airport)
Arnab:"Arjun.........agar hum late ho jate na to pata nahi kya hota"
Arjun:"par hum time pe to aagaye na"
(there was a croud in one side)
Arjun:"dad,waha kya ho raha hai?"
Arnab:"han....inti bhir or airport pe?...chalo dekhte hai"
(a lady was screaming on a airport police)
Lady:"mera itna kimti saman kho gaya hai or aap usse dhundne se mana kar rahe hai..............kiss tarha k police hai aap?"
Arnab:"arre madam aap itne zor se kyu bol rahi hai?"
(she turn.............she was Meera)
Meera:"aap ko kya....
(Arnad & Arjun chocked)
Meera:"jeeja ji?"
Arnab:"Meera"
Meera:"to aap aahi gaye............dekhiye na........mera ek importent saman kho gaya hai or ye yaha ki police dhundne k liye taiyar nahi hai"
Arnab:"kya kho gaya hai?"
Meera:"bohut kimti tha"
Arjun:"lekin massi batao to ki kya tha"
Meera:"ek impoted nail paint tha"🤣
Arnad:"kya?😲...........tum ek nail paint k liye itna chilla rahi ho?"
Meera:"ha.........vo mera favorite colour tha"
Arjun:"massi u r too much"
Meera:"kya too much?.........mujhe vo wapas chahiye"
Arnab:"thik hai thik hai.............mai ek or la dunga same colour ka...............par tum aab ghar chalo............tumhari didi besabri se tumhara intezar kar rahi hai"
Meera:"or meri sweetu sweetu chocolate?"
Arnab:"vo college gayi hai"
Meera:"ok to ghar chalte hai lekin mujhe apna nail paint wapas chahiye"
Arnab:"ha ha dilwa dunga.......aab chalo"
(in college..................Aish in hall way)
Aish:"pata nahi massi aab tak ayi hogi ya nahi.............mumma ko ph. karu kya......no no no....vo daatengi............kahengi padhayi pe dhyan do"
(suddenly Daksh come there)
Daksh:"wah.......akhir tum pagal ho hi gayi............aane aap se baatey kar rahi ho"
Aish:"mai kya karti hu usse tumhe kya...............jaao yaha se mujhe tumse bahez nahi karna hai"
Daksh:"kyu? dar gayi?"
Aish:"duh uh.....mai kisi se darti nahi hu.............or ami unhi logo se baat karti hu jinke paas brain hota hai lekin aafsos............vo tum or tumhare frnds me nahi hai"
Daksh:"mujhe bhi tumse baat karne ka koi shok nahi hai..........vo to baas gym teacher ne tumhe class k liye bulaya hai...........yehi batane aya tha...aab chalo"
Aish:"gym class to sirf ek bahana hai..............tum mujhse milne aye na?"
Daksh:"watever............aab chalo varna class me tumhare sath mai bhi problem me par jaunga"
Aish:"fine....lets go looser"
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70

lovely .. wait for next update...

miss soo much sonia .. lovely character

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