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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: -YaRa-Forever-

Thanks for the PM Trish...!😳


But sigh just looking at that Raj/Priya/Gautam pic merged is making my heart skip a bit...which is just coz of YaRa...seeing them in one frame is always😍☺️😳 Sigh I love them...and Raj gave such million dollar in that yuvi-yamini scene!😳☺️🤗 Eeks, they are going to kill me one day!😳☺️😍 I just now saw that scene of yuvi-yamini...and eeeks I am fida over him again!☺️😳😍

Neways I shouldn't really start talking Remix...but hey you brought YaRa, AY are bound to come here!☺️😳

But really nice job! I am looking forward to see how the story shapes up! Shaurya's counterpart is Asmin's childhood friend right?

Geee although I am a Asmin-Daksh shipper all the way, I really want to see how each and every relationship develops!😳

Keep up the good work!😳

Love,
Nitz

PS: You should have kept Sonia Ray as Asmin's mom!☺️😍😍

i'm very glad taht u like it
btw,thanx 4 commenting😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
waah jaani...2nd part is fab...haha..loved ashi n daksh.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Part-3
(Deradoon)
(in college cantin Daksh sitting alon.........then Rohan comes)
Rohan:"hey dude,Asmin k saath baat bani?"
Daksh:"baat?kaisi baat............yaar sari ladkia mujhpe marti hai lekin ye ladki to ulta mujhe sunake chali gayi"
Rohan:"I told u,usse panga ;ena thik nahi hoga...............or aab to tum usse apni G.frnd bhi nahi bana sakte"
Daksh:"what?G.frnd or usse.............mujhe usse apna dosst bhi nahi banana.............btw,lets go to the class"
Rohan:"lekin class me to vo bhi hogi"
Daksh:"I don't care.........lets go"
(in the class)
Anchal:"Asmin tum un ladko k moo kyu lag rahi thi?"
Aish:"vo saab aamir baap k bigre huye loosers hai.......................unhe thik karne ki zarurat hai"
Anchal:"or usska theka tumne le rakkha hai?"
Aish:"No but agar vo mere samne aye to mai unhe nahi chorungi.............specialy uss Daksh ko,aaj cantin me vo muhpe line maar raha tha............can u belive it?"
(in that time Daksh enter in class)
Anchal:"lo aagaya"
(Daksh comes to Aish)
Daksh:"hey,wacko........ye sit mera hai,kahi or jaake baitho"
Aish:"oh i'm sorry but mujhe yaha tumhara naam nahi dikh raha hai.............so u go"
Daksh:"mujhe tumse bahez nahi karna hai............accha hoga agar tum yaha se uth jaao"
Aish:"oooooooh,mai dar gayi"
Daksh:"tumhe darna hi chahiye................kyu ki jaab Daksh Rajwansh ko koi pasand nahi ata to usse mujhse darna hi chahiye"
Aish:"duh uh.....jo karna hai karlo.lekin mai iss sit se nahi hatungi"
Daksh:"fine......aaj tumhara 1st day hai issi liye chor raha hu but next time nahi chorunga"
Aish:"ya ya........next time nahi chorunga............idiot"
(Mumbai)
(in Shlok's room.............he was thinking about his mom,dad)
Shlok:"mom,dad zaroor mujhse kuch chupa rahe hai lekin kya................mujhe pata karna hoga...............dad uss waqt shayed maneger se baat kar rahe the"
(he calling maneger)
Shlok:"hello,manager.........mai Shlok bol raha hu"
Manager:"ha boliye"
Shlok:"kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai ki dad aaj aapse kya baatey kar rahe the?"
Manager:"oh,ha...........actually humari company ek deel k liye Deradoon me ek building bana rahi hai ussi ka kaam dekh ne k liye Mr.Raichand ko Deradoon jana parega"
Shlok:"what?Deradoon?............kya dad akele jayenge?"
Manager:"ji ha"
Shlok:"kya aap mera ek kaam kar skte hai?"
Manager:"ya sure"
(Deradoon)
(the class is end............all the students r going out of the class.............when Aish & Daksh going out then they collision toghter)
Aish:"aaoooo...
Daksh:"wow......akhe nahi hai kya?........dekh k nahi chal sakti ho"
Aish:"listen sicko..........mai nahi tum mujhse takraye ho...........so u batter be watch out"
Daksh:"hah,mai tumse takraya hu?..........tumhi to mere paas aaneki kousis kar rahi ho"
Aish:"hey bhaggu [😉].............jaab aap dunia me brains distribute kar rahe the taab shayed ye kahi pe flirt kar raha tha.............tum ek kaam karo,mandir jaao or waha jaa k prair karo............i'm sure bhaggu tumhe brain de denge"😆
Daksh:"aapne aap ko bohut smart sajhti ho?"
Aish:"samajh ne ki kya baat hai...........mai to smart hu hi par tum nahi ho"
Daksh:"tum nahi janti k tum kisse ulajh rahi ho"
Aish:"i know,ek bohut bare looser se"
Daksh:"u....
Aish:"mai tumhare saath tu tu mai mai karti par late ho gayi to mumma fikar karengi............so i have to go,kal baat karenge,sicko"
(Aish left)
Daksh:"hah....mumma fikar karengi........mumma's girl"
(Mumbai)
(Raichand's house)
Haseena:"Chand..........Shlok ko iss bareme kuch pata to nahi hai na?'
Chand:"yah....usse pata bhi nahi chalna chahiye.................it will be bad for us"
(suddenly manager calling)
Chand:"hello manager"
Manager:"sir,hume order mila hai ki aapko aapke puri family k sath Deradoon jana parega"(Shlok's planing)
Chand:"what?😲..but why?"
Manager:"i don't know sir........humey deelar se ye order mila hai...............vo aapki puri family se milna chahate hai"
Chand:"Haseenaaaa"
Haseena:"kya hua chand?...kya kha manager ne?"
Chand:"deelar ne puri family ko Deradoon bulaya hai"
Haseena:"what?😲............lekin hum shlok ko waha nahi le jaa sakte hai..........tum jante ho na kyu"
Chand:"ya i know..............lekin buisness k liye jana parega"
Haseena:"tumhe kya lagta hai Shlok Asmin se mile bager rahega?..............vo usse milne ki kousis zarur karega"
Chand:"hume hi usse rokna hoga"
Haseena:"but how?"
Chand:"i know how.........haaah"
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
hei trish,
tat was nice fight b/w daksh n aish..will they like this fully..it is actually fun to read..n now shlok will aish han?r aanchal r arjun our main lead?u r not giving anything abt them..continue soon..
luv,
ramani
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: RB81

hei trish,
tat was nice fight b/w daksh n aish..will they like this fully..it is actually fun to read..n now shlok will aish han?r aanchal r arjun our main lead?u r not giving anything abt them..continue soon..
luv,
ramani

Daksh,Asmin & Shlok r main leads
Anchal & Arjun r side roles but don't worry they will be a couple😃
did u see the introduction thread?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
hey nice update bt now i want to see chemistry between shlok and asmin..... nd this small world war between asmin and daksh was awesum...
plz keep updating soon...
nd keep it up wid ur gud work...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
@sanjna-thanx dear
@praty-thanx jaanu😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Great Update Dear... Daksh-Aish Fight was Nice.. Waiting for Shlok 2 cum... Do update d next part soon... Thanx for d pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
wow trish, mast part tha..
after the heavy drama ek is showing us, this was too good
:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
@Gals1110,Lizza,Komal-thank u sooo much🤗

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