**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Hey Trisha.. I really loved the first part.. Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
part 1 is really nice .... liked it 😛 waiting for the asmin-daksh 's 1st meet 😉
plzz continue soon ..😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part-2
(Deradoon)
(Aish & Anchal at college gate)
Aish:"hey Anchal.........mai car lock karna vool gayi......tum andhar jaao mai avvi aati hu....OK"
Anchal:"alright"😊
(Aish left...............Anchal entered in the college.......................Daksh was sitting with his frnds)
Angad:"Daksh look..............lagta hai new hai college me"(to Anchal)
Daksh:"ha par vo mere type ki nahi hai but i can try"
Rohan:"No dude uss ladki ko mat cherna"
Daksh:"kyu?tumhe try marna hai?to marlo"
Rohan:"I mean vo Asmin Dobriyal ki frnd hai"
Daksh:"Asmin Dobriyal?vo kon hai?"
Rohan:"tumne shayed Arnab Dobriyal ka naam sunahi hoga................unki beti hai Asmin Dobriyal....or usse ya fir usske dossto se panga lena matlab............
Daksh:"jo vi ho hai to ladkihi na................or Daksh Rajwansh kisi vi ladki ka heart melt karsakta hai...................just wait & watch par filhal usski frnd se hi baat karte hai"
(Daksh comes to Anchal)
Daksh:
"hello beautyful"😎
Anchal:"hi"
(she is trying to cross him but again Daksh stoped her way)
Daksh:"I'm Daksh Rajwansh the cool guy of college & u?"
Anchal:"Anchal"
Daksh:"hmmm..........pretty & old name.So do u have any B.frnd?"
Anchal:"What??"
Daksh:"yes,agar hai to bata do................tumhari akhey...uff.....or tumhare baal..........
(He's just trying to touch Anchal's hair but suddenly Aish come & hold his hand tightly)
Aish:"meri dosstko haath vi mat lagana"😡
Daksh:"oh really?but why?tum kya yaha ki quine ho jo tumhare dosstoko haath nahi lagaya jaa sakta"
Aish:"quine to nahi hu but tumse better hu...............now move we're getting late or Anchal se door rahena"
(Aish & Anchal start walking)
Daksh:
"hey,aapna naam to batati jaao"
Aish:"mera naam nahi jano toh bahetar hoga"
(she left)
(Daksh smiling)😊
(Mumbai)
(Raichands)
Haseena:"Chand.......hume kisisvi tarha Asmin ko Shlok k dimag se nikalna hoga"
Chand:"aahhhh......
(Ph. ringing)
Chand:"hello"
Maneger:"sir hume abhi abhi pata chala hai ki kisi buisness k kaam se aapko Deradoon jana hoga"
Chand:"what???Deradoon??"😲
Haseena:"Deradoon?"😲
Maneger:"yes sir...........any problem?"
Chand:"oh noh noh...............mai aapse baad ,me baat karta hu"
Haseena:"kya hua Chand?Deradoon ki kya baate ho rahi thi?"
Chand:"kisi buisness k kaam se mujhe Deradoon jana parega"
Haseena:"What???oh no.......agar Shlok ko ye baat pata chal gayi to accha nahi hoga"
(suddenly Shlok come to the room)
Shlok:"konsi baat mom?............aaplog mujhse koi baat chupa rahe hai?"
Haseena:"nothing.......
Chand:"just some buisness problems............jisse hum tumhe door rakhna chahate hai..........that's all"
(Deradoon)
(in college cantin)
(Asmin sitting on a table...............Daksh comes & sits on other chair😆)
Aish:"tum yaha firse..............mera picha karrahe ho?"
Daksh:"yehi samajh lo...............jabse tumhe dekha hai mere dil or dimag pe kabu nahi raha........
Aish:"Oooo hello............ye sare bekar lines aapne un bimbo type G.frnds k liye bacha k rakkho.................mujhpe ye kaam nahi karega"
Daksh:"okey.now u hurting me...............aajtak kisi ladki ne mujhse aise baat nahi ki"
Aish:"kyu ki aajtak tumhara pala mujhse nahi para..........duh uh...tumse to baat karna hi bekar hai"
(she's standup & start walking)
Daksh:"hey,kamse kam aapna naam to bata do"
Aish:"mujhe tumhe aapna naam nahi batana hai"
(again start walking then Daksh said)
Daksh:"WACKO"
Aish:"What???"
Daksh:"yes that's the perfect name................WACKO"
Aish:"watever.........huh"
LOVE Trish😊
Edited by 00123trisha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
that was nice convo b/w ashi n daksh..
i hav a feeling tat after sometime ashi wud punch daksh..as he is trying to irritate her..
will shlok meet ashi sometime?
write lengthy updates yaar..
anyway do update soon..
luv,
ramani
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: RB81

that was nice convo b/w ashi n daksh..
i hav a feeling tat after sometime ashi wud punch daksh..as he is trying to irritate her..
will shlok meet ashi sometime?
write lengthy updates yaar..
anyway do update soon..
luv,
ramani

yes,Shlok & Aish will meet after somedays in this story
btw,thanx 4 commenting😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
Trishaaaaa....🤗Very well written.. Daksh is such a flirt.. I loved the Aish- Daksh convo.. It was so funny... Daksh ne Aish ke liye naya naam rakha, WHACKO..🤣Chand will go to Dehradoon.. Hmm.. Not Bad.. Jaldi se next part likh do.. Pls make it thoda lengthy ok. Thank u for the PM..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
wow! what a name - WHACO!!!! waiting 4 the next part......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
wow! what a name - WHACO!!!! hahaha..waiting 4 the next part......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
it was so nice and wonderful.... add 3 part soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Trishaaaaa....🤗Very well written.. Daksh is such a flirt.. I loved the Aish- Daksh convo.. It was so funny... Daksh ne Aish ke liye naya naam rakha, WHACKO..🤣Chand will go to Dehradoon.. Hmm.. Not Bad.. Jaldi se next part likh do.. Pls make it thoda lengthy ok. Thank u for the PM..

thanx a lot
about the updates.......i have very short time for updating😭....................but don't worry i'll try my best next time😊

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