New Mayur FF: Just Business Updated Pg.84 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
awesome update
they r sooo stubborn man!!!they hate n love each other
luved their funny nok-joks...want to know abt their past

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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
hey Ria..!! i jus loved the beginning...pls pm me next time u update...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
beauitful update yaar.
nice.
i really really really wnated to know abt their past.
what happened with them a years back...........m really curios!!!!!!
shilpa-mayank scene was gud.
waiting for next update.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Wao so sweet and cute Update
She show him her tongue So funny 😆
I am so Impatient to Know there past
Thanks for Pm
Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
awesome part ,
loved it...😊
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Aww ... What a cuteee update .. 😍 So many MN moments .. uff 😳 Especially the moments in the care when Diya left .. WOW! I could just feel the love 😆 And the usual knok jhok was absoluetely adorable! 🤗
Wonderful update ... Now just waiting for the suspense to break out! Aakhir kya hai jo MN ko paas laakar bhi, dor rakta hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
1st so srry for the late comment 2nd congrts ur new FF which is really so interesting i allways love office romance
your dong fantastic job hun
thanks alott for the pms
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Here is part 4

Part 4

Nups: "bhaiya please auto rokeye please".

AD: "Kyun madam kya hua". The auto driver stopped the auto and Nupur stepped out. She crossed the road and stood behind Mayank who was kneeling down by his car tire trying to fix it.

Nups tapped on mayank's shoulder who turned around.

Nups: "Excuse me Mr. Sharma any problem".

Mayank: "NO". He said sternly.

Nups: "well Mr. Sharma if you need a ride my green auto is waiting, please feel welcome".

Mayank: "No thank you mere itne bhi bure din nahi aaye hain". Nups giggled and walked back to the auto and sat in, but didn't leave. After ten minutes of waiting Mayank finally came.

Mayank: "Could you scoot a little now please". He said sitting inside the auto as Nupur giggled.

Nups: "Another lesson for you mr. Sharma behave as a gentlemen with a girl".

There ride in the auto was very bumpy, they both kept bumping into each other. Finally a big bump nups jerked forward she was about to hit the still road in front of her, but mayank held her shoulders just in time, nups looked at him and they shared an eyelock, while the song played in the background, Milke bhi hum na mile tumse na jaane kyun millo ke hain fasle tumse na jaane kyun anjaane hai silsile tumse na jane kyun, kaise bataye kyun tujhko chahaye yara bata na paaye yeh baatein dilo ki dekho jo aake tumhe samjaye tu jane na, tu jane ne na.

With same passion as before. In their eyes there was pure love, and hurt, but both had ego issues. Neither of them was willing to talk out the past afraid of hurting themselves again, because they have learned to leave their life as a compromise. Finally the auto came to a stop.

AD: "Lo aapka hotel aay gaya". Mayank and nups came back to reality.

~Mayank and Nupur were in Mayank's office discussing the party they had to arrange for tonight since there deal with Shreya's incorporation had been successful.

Mayank: "Ms. Bhushan, I will put you in charge of the party, this time I want everything to be perfect".

Nups: "Yes sir, I will do my best".

Mayank: "I want this party to be very professional, keep up my company's status".

Nups: "Yes sir anything else".

Mayank: "Here is the list of guest you need to invite, book the party hall, and decorate it, also some members that are not on the guest list but I need you to invite are Shreya's company members''" (Mayank was about to say something when his eyes fell on nups, who was scribbling like crazy, everything on the notepad, he watched as a layer of her kept falling across her eyes bothering, she kept filliping her head trying to get it away. Mayank smiled he moved his hand towards nups forehead but he stopped midway. Nups looked up at his hand, knowing his intention, she put her layer behind her ear, mayank took his hand back and put it in his pocket.

Nups: "anything else sir".

Mayank: "No that's it you can go now". Nups gets up and leaves.

~The party was full on rocking, Nupur had done her best with everything, the decorations, food, music, guest and especially herself. Mayank was mesmerized, when he saw Nupur enter the party wearing a pink, gray suit, her hair open. At present mayank, Nupur, shreya, and shreya's partner Abhi were all standing together enjoying the party.

Shreya: "I must say Mr. Mayank you have done a great job with the party".

Mayank: "Oh thanks, but actually it is my marketing manager who has done everything". Pointing towards Nupur, who smiled.

Shreya: "well even then you deserve the appreciation, since you hired her". Nups glared at her, she definitely didn't like the way Shreya was talking with mayank or actually flirting with him. Shreya kept finding ways to touch mayank, which was bothering Nupur why she didn't exactly knew.

Shreya: "I must say Mr. Mayank you look fabulous today". Shreya said touching mayank's hand. Nups muttered something under her breath, which was heard by mayank he looked at her realizing that she was getting jealous. He planned of playing along.

Mayank: "Oh but I can say that you look fabulous everyday".

Nups: "oh well how would you know Mr. Sharma since you met her just today". Nups said in a jealousy tone.

Mayank: "Well it's about some girls I can judge them easily, especially Ms. Shreya". Nups glared at him. Mayank totally ignored it, and kept flirting more with shreya.

Abhi: "So Miss Bhushan, I don't believe you are enjoying the party very much". Sudden voice of Abhi got nups out of her thoughts.

Nups: "oh no there is nothing like".

Abhi: "Oh really then do you mind having a dance with me?" He forwards his hand. Nupur hesitates she looks towards mayank who was busy in his conversation with Shreya. She took Abhi's hand and they both walked on the dance stage.

Mayank felt nups walk away from he looked towards the dance floor. He saw Abhi was slow dancing with Nups, he felt a pang of jealousy in his heart. He watched every move of nups and Abhi.

Abhi was slowly trying to get more close to Nupur, who started to understand his intentions and tried to move away from him. Abhi moved his hand around her waist, he pulled her more closely. Nups was feeling uncomfortable; it could be read from her face. She looked at mayank, her eyes asking for his help. Abhi's hand slowly moved down her waist he twirled her round, but mayank came to nups rescue he stepped in between Abhi and Nups.

Mayank: "May I". Mayank forwarded his hand to nups and who took it, Abhi realized the situation and quietly let go of nups hand. Mayank took nups other hand and put I on His shoulder, he then moved his other hand around her waist. Nupur shivered at his touch, but in a good way.

Mayank: "tum thik ho". Nups looked mayank, just this small gesture of mayank told nups that he cared a lot about her. She smiled and nodded quietly. Mayank and nups started dancing slowly, on the song khuda jaane, their eyes did not leave each other throughout the song. They remembered their first dance on this same song on valentines.

Finally as the song came to an end, and people around them started clapping, mayank and nups came back to reality. Mayank walked of the stage ignoring Nupur. However throughout the rest of the party mayank stood with nups, making sure that Abhi came nowhere near her again.

Finally when the party was finished, nups walked out of the hall, she was looking for a ride, when mayank stopped his car in front of her. Nups quietly went to the passenger side and sat in, as she felt obliged to thank mayank for what he had done for her in the party.

They were both quite for few minutes, finally nups broke the silence.

Nups: "Thanks mayank". She whispered, mayank didn't answer her right away, but he did.

Mayank: "For what?"

Nups (letting out a big sigh knowing that mayank wouldn't let her off guard easily) "For understanding my uncomfortableness with Abhi, I shouldn't have joined him in the dance".

Mayank: "Hec you shouldn't have" Mayank said a little rudely surprising nups.

Nups: "What does that mean?".

Mayank: "what don't you understand English".

Nups: "I do but there is other meaning in your words". Nups said with the same loud pitch as mayank's.

Mayank (anger starting to boil within): "it means that you should have better judgment for people".

Nups: "Oh and you believe that it is easy to figure people out, well to let you know that you can't completely it understand a person even in a life time let alone in one party".

Mayank: "Well that is exactly why you shouldn't go dance with a stranger". He said loudly and more rudely then before.

Nups: "Seriously mayank, he looked like an educated respected human being to me".

Mayank: "A person who was flirting with every single girl in the party looked respected to you". Nups looked at mayank shook her not understanding why they were having this conversation, but they were she was not going to back out.

Nups: "He didn't seem any different than other guys at the party". Exactly pointing toward mayank.

Mayank: "Excuse me was that directed towards me?". It more of a statement then a question.

Nups: "Yah, because you were interested in flirting with Shreya". Nups tone was more of a jealousy then rude.

Mayank (smiled at the face nups made when she took shreya's name): "Does me flirting with another girl affect you? Are you jealous Miss Bhushan". It was more of a statement which pissed Nupur more.

Nups: "why would that make me jealous, I am just saying that to compare your character with every other male". Now it was mayank's turn to be pissed.

Mayank: "Now you are comparing my character with that sick person, despising the fact that I just saved you from him". Mayank was flaring with anger; he hit the staring wheel, trying to control himself.

Nups: "So who told you to save me?". Nups screamed.

Mayank: "You eyes did". Mayank yelled back. Both became quite, mayank stopped his car in front of nups apartment, nups got out and left. Mayank stood there, as he watched Nupur safely enter the building. He kept on waiting there for what he didn't know. He looked up to see at Nups apartment window and she was standing there watching, him tell him that she had safely reached her apartment. These things were unacknowledged but true, mayank had waited for nups to come at the window and show him that she reached her apartment safely. These were little gestures they both did when they were in relationship, nothing had changed their egos were same, there love was still there in fact more stronger, jealousy, compassion, everything was there, but the only thing that was missing was communication, if only they had communicated a year ago they would have been married by now. Mayank drove off and nups went to her room to change and take some rest.

Do leave you comments/criticism!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
lovely update lopli....
loved jealousness of both..
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
wow interesting...

Nupur getting jealous, and dancign with a so called "stranger" and mayank saving her was just soo cute...
And the discussion in the car was relly funny....

hmmm.. So they do love each other but lack of commmunication they parted... and almost got married?? wow what a twist... Awesome update Ria... 😳

-Laiba

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