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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow! This seems very interesting ... Lots of suspense I can see 😆 Im very impatient about that .. Youu'll update soon na? I really can't wait ... And please don't rush the end because your other 2 FF's youu did the same ... I really wanna see a brilliant ending just as a wonderful beginning 😳😉 -Sara
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Hi guys how are you all? Thanks all of you for commenting on my new ff, i really appreciate your comments. I will try to update parts soon, but sometimes it gets hard, because i get busy with school. but i will try my best.

Part 2

This was the third nupur's alarm went off and she snoozed it. Finally she heard her phone ring and she looked out of her blanket and looked at her phone, it said mayank. She looked at for few minutes thinking why mayank was calling her. Suddenly she jumped on her bed releasing that she was two hours late for work. She jumped out of the bed and ran to the bathroom, not picking mayank's phone.

Nupur: "Oh man I am so gone pata nahi woh sadu mera kya karega". Oh she came out of the bathroom after twenty minutes fixed her hair and went to the office, thinking what was mayank going to say to her when she gets there. Nups reached their and she went inside mayank's office.

Mayank: "oh hello Ms. Bhushan I hope you had a good long sleep".

Nups: "I am really sorry I am late".

Mayank: "you should be sorry, cause now as punishment you will be working overtime for two hours for a week".

Nups: "what?"

Mayank: "that too in the morning, you will now have to show up at 6 am instead of 8".

Nups: "you have got to be kidding me".

Mayank: "does my face look like I am joking". Nups just stared at him.

Nups: "okay sir".

Mayank: "Good now we have a meeting with Mr. Gupta in 1 hour, please get all of your things managed and show up exactly on time or else you will come to office at 5 am". Mayank said walking out the door.

Nups: "Fine Sadu".

Mayank: "I heard that". Mayank said as he left the office. Nups sat down on her chair holding her face in his hands.

Nups: "oh I gosh I should have thought twice about working with Mayank, after having two years of experience with him". She got up and left.

It was 6 pm Nupur was about to leave the office, when she saw mayank sitting in his office sleeping. She turned to leave, but something pulled her back, she walked towards mayank's office and entered it. She looked at mayank he was looking so handsome just as before, tears stared forming into her eyes as memories passed through her mind painful memories of the last time they talked. Mayank's last words an year back to her repeated continuously in her head. "I hate you Nupur, I hate you". Suddenly she felt her body go weak and she dropped her files, the sound of files hitting the floor woke up mayank. He looked up and saw nups, he went towards.

Mayank: (angrily) "what are you doing her ms. Bhushan". Nupur just stood there lost in her thoughts. Mayank shook her, and she came back to present.

Nups: "oh I am sorry,I came here ummm hunn to ask you about, about".

Mayank: "forget it Nupur, you can't lie, office is closed you should go home now". Mayank pointed toward the exit, Nupur picked up her files and walked out cursing herself for going their in the first place.

Mayank walked over to his desk and opened a drawer he took out of a picture of nups her had taken a year back on his sister's wedding. She looked really cute. He had notice her crying and he knew somewhere that it was because of him. But he didn't care now he hated her for what she had done to him, for making him a hard core person. He looked at the picture, well did he really hate her, of course he could never hate her, and she is still a part of his life and unacknowledged part of his life. He put the picture back in the drawer and walked out of the office.

Nupur entered her house and went straight to her room, tears rolling down her eyes, however she was furious at mayank at herself for going there. She knew that mayank did notice her tears, because he knew her too well, she was furious that he completely ignored that she sat on her bad and started crying.

Nups: "I can't believe mayank I am crying for you again and it was your fault you didn't trust me mayank you left without listening to me, diya was right I shouldn't have worked there, but why is having so much affect on me I hate him, do no I still love…………….oh shut up Nupur shut up you can't let yourself break this easily, he didn't even trust you". Nups wiped her tears just then her doorbell rang. Nupur went to open the door it was Diya, she stepped into nups apartment furiously.

Nups: "oh hello what happened to you? Why are you so angry?".

Diya: "uff I hate benji so much".

Nups: "why what happened?"

Diya: "you know first he used to leave all of his work and come to meet me and now after engagement he is always so busy that he doesn't even have a day to take me shopping, just gave me his credit card".

Nups: "wow aur abhi toh shaadi bhi nahi hui, if he doesn't have time after engagement, what will happen after marriage".

Diya: "ha ha very funny jale pe namak mat chirakh". She said making a face.

Nups: "okay baba sorry so what are you going to do now".

Diya: "I am going to take you with me". Diya said taking nups arms.

Nups: "oh no no you know how much I am not interested in shopping".

Diya: "Won't you go with me". Diya said making a childish face". Nups huffed stomped her feet and went in the bathroom to change.

Nups and Diya were sitting in a restaurant in the mall.

Nups: "Oh diya you are too much, I should have never come with you".

Diya: "why not?"

Nups: "you took 4 hours to buy 5 dresses seriously".

Diya: "what I am really picky about my clothes okay and I love shopping".

Nups: "I can tell that, but I don't".

Diya: "Oh come on it wasn't that bad". Nups smiled.

Diya: "hey here you go". Diya handed nups a cookie.

Nups: "what this?".

Diya: "it a fortune cookie come on open your I want to see what's is your fortune".

Nups: "acha, what was yours?"

Diya: "nothing that my marriage will be very successful". Nups burst out laughing.

Nups: "that's so true, because whenever you will be mad at Benji he will just give you his credit card and you will melt".

Diya: "ha ha very funny, come on open yours I want to see". Nups opened her fortune cookie.

Diya: "what does it say".

Nups: "it says that I will (physically) bump into my lover today at 11 pm, yah like that will happen". Nups said boredly.

Diya: "wow that really specific, but you have already met your lover Mayank a year back, so I forgot to ask how was your first day of work?".

Nups: "Come on diya I don't want to talk about it". Diya could that nups was upset so she didn't push her much.

Diya: "hey come one nups lets go". Diya said getting up.

Nups: "ab kahan".

Diya: "i will tell you lets go, I promise no shopping".

Nups: "oh Diya you are annoying". Nups said getting up.

Nups: "where are we diya". Nups said looking around.

Diya: "nups obviously it says club".

Nups: 'what?, diya are you crazy, I am not going in".

Diya: 'oh come one nups for once learn to have some fun and its our college club no a bad club okay".

Nups: "how do you know?"

Diya: "firstly because Anny opened this Chacko okay and I come here on weekends now come on lets go". Nups gets out of the car and both of them go inside the club.

Nups: "we are not staying here long okay it 9 we will leave at 10 okay".

Diya: "not okay stop being such a spoil support". As nups and diya entered the club they notice that it was not a bad club all of the people from there college were there. Diya excused herself to meet few pf her friends, nups was a little thirsty she went to the drink counter.

Nups: "excuse me can I have a glass of water please".

Guy: "sure mam". He looked at nups.

Chacko: "nups tum yahan". Nups looked up to see that it was Chacko.

Nups: "oh hi chacko, how are you?".

Chacko: "fine, how are you?". Handing her a glass of water.

Nups: "I am fine too". Just then mayank came on the other side of nups.

Mayank: "hey chacko can I have a coke". Nups and mayank were about to touch the same glass, they looked at each other, both pulled their hands away.

Mayank Nups: "Tum".

Mayank: "oh wow I didn't know ki Ms. Bhushan was interested in coming to clubs".

Nups: "well you are not the only one who knows how to enjoy". Nups left and went to the dance floor. For the first time today she felt little better, dancing, mayank came into the dance floor to dance.

It was almost was 11 and diya and nups were exiting the disco.

Nups: "le yaar its 11 my lover didn't bump into me". Nups said jokingly as she felt relaxed.

Diya:"oh wow I thought you didn't believe in that".

Nups: "I don't I am just saying it to prove it to you". Nups was looking at diya as she bumped it to someone, she was about to fall when strong arms went around her waist and saved her. Nups opened her eyes to see it was none other than Mayank. Nups looked it to his eyes, so did mayank, and as usual they got lost into each other's eyes. Diya cleared her throat to and mayank and nups came back to reality. Mayank helped nups get up.

Nups: "thanks you".

Mayank: "you're welcome". Diya stood on the side smiling. Mayank noticed diya.

Mayank: "oh hi diya how are you?' Mayank hugged diya.

Diya: "I am fine you tell tum toh itne busy hogaye ho ki tumhare paas hamare liye time hi nahi hai".

Mayank: "no its nothing like that bas time nahi mila". Diya was still smiling.

Mayank: "wow tum aaj kuch zyada hi smile kar rahi ho, hows benji?"

Diya: "oh he is fine, heyy mayank do you believe in fortune cookies".

Mayank: 'why?"

Diya: "who actually nups". Before diya could say anything nups stepped in diya's toe.

Diya: "ouch, (turning to mayank) hey mayank you will come to my wedding right, tum engagement pe nahi aaye the".

Mayank: "yah diya definitely actually is din I was out for a meeting I am really sorry".

Diya: "its okay".

Nups: "Diya chale".

Diya: sure, bye mayank".

Mayank: "bye diya and by Ms. Bhushan". Nups looked at mayank.

Nups: "Bye Mr. Sharma". Nups said sarcastically and walked out. Mayank looked at her leaving she was looking really adorable, he didn't know why but a smile crept across his face. It was first time in one year that his smile wasn't forced but came naturally.

Do leave you comments/criticism. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
awesome update.
i like mayur.......their r'ship was lil different.
poor nups.......nw she attending d office at 6am.......poor she!!!
mayank still loves nups,......so, why he hates her??
what hapnd in hteir past???
dance floor scne was very nice............fianllay she bumped with mayank in exact 11 pm.
hope their lovestory start againg!!!
waiting for next update.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
aww... ria..
part 2 ws good!
mayu... hayee... he's soo rude 2 Nups...
& luvd d MN convos @ Club..
luvd it!
continue soon !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it is super duper osom soooooo lovely
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Posted: 14 years ago
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phhh ria fab update esp loved dat fortune cooki wala idea....😉😉😉
cont soon dearie😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Hi Ria
it was fabulous update
so mayur were trying to hate each other and they were showing that they hate each other a lot
but Why???? why they hate each other
whats the reason behind it?
what happened in their past.
why mayank don't trust nups????
hmmmmmmm so many q's
i want all the ans asap
veryyyyyyyyy good update and really very interesting
do cont it
take care


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh so beautiful and lovely
I liked that fortune cocky thing
Thank U so much for Pm and cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Aww ... how sweet when Nupur fell into Mayank's arms

I can't wait to find out why Mayank hates her soo much
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
hey ria
lovely ff
nice concept
plz add me to ur pm list
will comment on each part later

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