New Mayur FF: Just Business Updated Pg.84 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Nice part dear
So they both love each other but not excepting Hmmm interesting
waiting for there past
thanks for pm cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
wonderful update dear
loved mayur argumants n their jlsy
update soon n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
The MayUr moments at the party were mesmerizing 😍 I could see it playing in my head ... aggh!! Wonderful update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Thanks all of you for commenting on the parts, i don't have much time to indiviually thanks all of you! But i do appreciate all you guys taking your time to ready, what i have written.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
i wish dey communicate wid each other soon😕😕😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

very very nice update......

{MAYANK}
"kya palak.. kya jhalak..
kya ada.. kya mehak...
ye zameen.. ya falak... thi kahan tu ab talak...
kya asar kya.. leher..
door thi tu magar..
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
kya palak.. kya jhalak..
kya ada.. kya mehak...
ye zameen.. ya falak... thi kahan tu ab talak...
kya asar kya.. leher..
door thi tu magar..
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
ye jo mehaka.. sa.. hai...
band hothon mein...
hooo....
vo to nagma sa hai...
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
soyi..soyi.. raaton.. mein jagah..rahoon....
khoyi...khoyi...
yadon.. mein.. soya.. mein rahoon...
haa..
tujhe.. mil k kya.. mein kahu.. socha.. karu..
teri.. k haa. mein jee..lu ya maru...
tum ko bhi ye bechaniyan hoti hai kya..
hoo.........
tu dua unsuni...
yu lage tu.. kabhi.......
hooo...
dhup mein... chandni...
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari.................
tu jo.. bole.. taaron.. mein tujhko le chalu...
bheegi.. bheegi.. si.. aankhon se tujhko..
chum loon.../
haa..
jhoote.. moothe..vaade..
mein tujhse..na karu..
teri.. meri.. chahat.. humari..aaabroo...
hoga.. kabhi..ab khatam na.. ye silsila........
hoooooo.....
ek lamha.. sa.. hai..
hooo..
meri saanson mein...
hooo..
vo to behka sa hai...
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
tu kahawab hai.. ya koi.. jadugari
na jaane.. aise.. kab mayank.. nupur k liye.. gana.. gayega
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
lovely lovely update
very interesting...
continue it soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Hi guys i know this is short part, bit i had to write it to set up the next few parts.

Part 5

It had been two weeks mayank and Nupur had been ignoring each other, the only conversation they had in these two weeks related to the work. Nups was in her office looking at the market files she had to check, when a note paper caught her eye. It was a sorry note and a thank you note for mayank that she wanted to give two weeks ago, but she couldn't because of Mayank's attitude towards her. She sighed sitting there thinking, maybe she could give it another try. She picked up the note, her file and walked into mayank's office, who was looking at a file.

Mayank: "yes Miss Bhushan how may I help you?". Mayank said not looking up from his file.

Nups: "umm actually, uhh I wanted to tell you something uhh". Nups couldn't understand why she was stuttering.

Mayank: "Would you hurry up Miss Bhushan, I don't have all day". He said a little brusquely.

Nups: "No Sir, I have nothing to say sorry to waste your time". she left his office walking at a faster pace. She bumped into someone dropping her file, she bent to pick it.

Woman: "I am sorry I didn't see you, tum thik to ho".

Nups (without looking): "No it not your fault, who hai na mayank Sharma ekdum sadu, irritating, angry young man attitude seriously kabhi kabar toh man karta hai''" She looks up at the woman who is none other than Shilpa, smiling down at nups. Nups stands up straightening her t-shirt.

Nups: " Aunty app I am sorry maine dekha nahi".

SHilpa: "Jaanti hun, its good issi bahane mujhe yeh toh pata chala ki tumhare khayal mayank ko leke kuch zyada change nahi huye". Nups looked down unable to meet Shilpa's gaze.

Shilpa: "Nups beta, ek baar gale bhi nahi lago ge I am seeing you after one year". Nups looks up and hugs Shilpa.

Nups: "kaisi hain aap aunty".

Shilpa: "Bilkul thik, tum batao, tum toh gayab hi hogayi bina kuch bole". Nups knew what shilpa was talking about, but it was past. Nups smiled.

Nups: "Bas aise hi aunty, aap bataye yahan kaise".

Shilpa: "kuch nahi apne sadu bte ko lunch dene aayi thi". Shlipa said smiling. Nups also smile, she always shared a special bonding with shilpa.

Nups: "Okay aunty, mujhe kaam karna hai". Nups walks away, when shilpa's voice stops her she turns around.

Shilpa: "Nups, beta".

Nups: "Ji Aunty".

Shilpa: "Nupur, kal sham ko mere gharpe holi party, hai I will be really happy agar tum aao".

Nups: "Aunty main kaise?".

Shilpa: "itna toh haq hai na mera Nupur tumpe".

Nups (smiled and nodded): "Ji aunty zaroor angogi". Shilpa smiled and went into meet mayank.

~It was 1 at night Nupur was lying on her bed awake, she couldn't go to sleep, thinking about Mayank and herself. Nups got up from her bed irritated. She went to her balcony, feeling the warm breeze of Mumbai.

Nups (whispering to herself): I don't understand Mayank what got between us, why didn't you listen to me that day one clarification and everything would have been fine you didn't give me a chance".

Mayank on the other side was in his balcony, looking at the moon. It was like they both Mayank and Nups were conversing with each other, only if it was face to face.

Mayank: "There was nothing to clarify Nupur, you broke my trust, my love meant nothing for you".

Nups: "You meant everything to me mayank".

Mayank: "lie!, everything you said to me was just mere lie".

Nups: "Oh right why would you believe me because for you my love was a lie, and look here I am after one year, but standing on that same courtyard wishing I had one chance to explain"

Mayank: "Your love was lie, then why am I still on that same courtyard, hoping that you will stop me, tell me you love me".

Nups: "even after one year I haven't been able to move on".

Mayank: "throughout this one year, there hadn't been a single moment that a thought about you didn't struck my mind"

Nups: "why is so hard Mayank why".

Mayank: "if I only knew the answer about moving on, I would have".

Nupur: "Maybe it isn't hard, I am just making it difficult, from now on I will completely ignore mayank and only talk with Mr. Sharma, I will start this at the holi party (Nupur just realized that she had to go see Mayank tomorrow) Oh no holi party, Mayank ke gharpe, why does this always happen to me the more I run away from him, I end up getting more closer". Nups shook her head. She walked back to her room and flopped down on her bed, hoping for a peaceful sleep.

~Mayank closed his eyes, trying to get rid of the pain, thoughts of Nupur had inflicted upon him. As he closed his hands memories of him and Nupur came through his mind, their first meeting, the perfect date they had, the first kiss, then came another memory, Nupur hugging Rahul, holding hands and laughing. He opened his eyes in an instant, his muscles tightened as anger rushed through his body. Of course he couldn't move on because he could never get rid of the pain Nupur had given him. Peple say time heals everything but for him time had only made the pain worse and his anger towards Nupur much more. Nups was the only person he had opened up to, trusted, besides his mom and what did she do, left him.

I know this part was quiet boring, but in the next few parts there will be a twist coming! However i won't be revealing the past any time soon.

Do leave you comments/criticism
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Lovely update ria
it was not boring at all
loved nups and mayu.mom convo
woh now i got the reason- mayu saw nups was hugging rahul
and he thought there is something b/w them
ehhhhhhhhhhh - mayank is so dumbo- is a valid reason not to trust nups????

now waiitng 4 next part.
plz do cont it.
Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
nice update
luved nupur n shipla aunty convo

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