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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy da promo waz outstandinGGG sachi mein loved it Ria so Mayu + Nupz have 2 share same roomi lol kan't wait 2 read it na plezz pleZz plezz continue soon luved diz FF plez do bother 2 pm me next time
-Linu🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice promo dear
and we will pray for good health of your computer 😃
thanks for pm
and cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you for the lovely promo .. and sorry to hear about your computer issues .. no rush then .. update when you get the chance(:
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi guys, okay so i still haven't gotten my computer back, but i know most of you want an update, so i wrote this one on my friends computer, it is not very good update, but i had to move the story forward. So here is the update.

Chapter 15 Changing weather

Mayank and Nupur were at mayank's house getting ready to leave. Nups had made mayank talk to her parents about the trip, to mayank surpries her parents were happy to let her go alone with mayank. He couldn't believe they had this much trust on his character which was obviously good.

Shilpa: "Nups beta you packed everything na".

Nups: "yah aunty". She said looking at shilpa, mayank was outside putting luggage in the car.

Shilpa: "Nupur".

Nups: "ji aunty".

Shilpa: "Nupur beta dekho tum mayank ke saath akele jaa rahi ho, yeh sahi moka hai mayank woh waapis paane ka, Nupur main chahati hun ki tum dono switzerland se haath pakad ke, apne pyar ke saath waapis aao".

Nups: "par aunty this will be very difficult".

Shilpa: "Nups who said love was easy, but i know you can definitely dominate mayank after all you are Nupur Bhushan".

Mayank: "agar aap ladies ki chatting puri ho gayi ho toh i think we should leave the plane is not going to wait for us". mayank said coming, both shilpa and nupur looked up.

Shilpa: "yah yah you both should take a leave". Nups bends down as well as mayank to take Shilpa's blessing.

Mayank: "Maa please please apna khayala rakhna eat you medicine and food on time, okay".

Shilpa: "fine fine i will take care of myself, Mayank ab tu sun, Apna aur nupur ka pura khayal rakhna, especially meri bahu ka agar usse thoda sa bhi pershaan kiya na toh dekha lena".

Mayank: "Wah kya baat hai aap meri mom hai yah uski". Pointing at nups.

Shilpa: "Phele sirf teri thi ab uski bhi hoon".

Nups: "Bye Aunty please take care of yourself". Nups said hugging Shilpa. Mayank and nupur left for the airport.

~Mayank and nupur were at the airport checking in the plane. Nups was walking in front of mayank, while mayank was holding all the luggage.

Mayank: "oh hello mam atleast hold you bag". Nups stopped and looked behind.

Nups: "mayank if i have to hold my on bag then what will you do".

Mayank: "What??? main tumhara bag uthane ke liye bana hun".

Nups: "ofcourse husbands isliye hi hote, and tum toh mere hone wale husband ho tumhe to mujhe aur pamper karna chahiye, you know kahin main tumhare haath se nikal na jaao".
By now both were inside the plane, mayank was putting the luggage in the upper bin, while nups was being comfortable on the seat.

Mayank: "uski tension mujhe nahi hai, infact shaadi ke baad more than 50 percent husband apni wives ko cheat karte hai, yah phir marriage kissi reason se tut hi jaati hai isliye acha hai na ki tum phele hi mere haath se nikal jao".

Nups: "Don't worry hamari shaadi main aisa kuch nahi hoga". Nups said giving a wide smiled, mayank was about to clarify that he still hasn't forgiven her, but they were inside a plane he didn't want to create a scene. mayank sat beside nups, the flight was 14 hours long, nups fell asleep right after the plane took off. she put her head on his shoulder, first few time mayank shook his shoulder, but nupur's head kept felling on his shoulder. Finally mayank gave up and fell asleep. Both were sleeping like newlyweds couple. Maany people looked at them and smiled, at the gorgeous couple who peacefully sleeping holding hands.

Nups was planning to win back mayank and go back home with her love, mayank was only there for the meeting and plan ahead about how to break the the news to his mom and nups parents about calling off the marriage. Mayank didn't want to upset either of teh families, but even if he tried he couldn't forgive nupur for what she. She had betrayed him, his love his trust. When nups first came to mayank's life, she completely turned his life around, he went past his studious attitude, she settled into a part of his heart that he never new existed, but then she stomped on that part of her heart and left him with his loneliness. how could he ever forgive her.

~Finally both of them reached the hotel where they were supposed to stay. Nups got out of the taxi and was amazed the hotel was huge, with the perfect view of the city.

Nups: "wow amazing". Nups whishpered, mayank looked at her and smiled. The weather was also very nice, a little sunny with chilled air.

Mayank: "Come on lets go, he said taking nups hand". Nups smiled as mayank took her hand in his, she felt so complete, mayank on the other hand didn't even realize that he was holding nupur's hand, i guess the 2 in weather was getting into his head. Both walked towards the receptionist.

Mayank and Nupur were standing at the reception desk.
Receptionist: "hello sir how may i help you?".
Mayank: "We had two bookings, one under Mayank Sharma and another Nupur bhushan". Receptionist looked in her register and nodded her head.
Recep: "i am sorry sir...but there is booking for only one room under Mr. Mayank sharma and his fiance Nupur Bhushan".
Mayank & Nupur: "What?????". Both mayank and nupur screamed in shock, they settled their voice realizing that everyone had stopped and was looking at them.
Mayank: "This can't be possible".
Recep: "i am sorry sir but Shilpa Sharma booked only one room".
Mayank: "Oh great!". Mayank said sarcastically obviously his mom would do something like this, nups was quite thinking the same thing.
Mayank: "Okay could you book another room for Ms. Nupur shar...i mean bhushan". Nups looked at mayank as he mentioned her name.
Recep: "i am sorry sir but we have no rooms available in fact none of the hotels in this city are available, because we are having an annual event, i am sorry sir but you will have to share the room".
Nups and mayank both looked at each other, this room sharing was going to be interesting.

Mayank: "okay could i have the keys".

Recep: "In just a moment Sir". The receptionist looked at few keys and handed the keys to Mayank".

Recep: "your room is on the 16th floor the first one left to the lobby".

Mayank: "thank you".

Recep: "Hope you do enjoy your stay with you would be wife at Hotel Seamore".

Mayank: "yah like that will happen". he muttered under his breath, but nodded politely to the receptionist.

~Mayank nupur reached the room, it was huge like a honeymoon sweet, it looked completely romantic.

Mayank: "Oh gosh just my luck tumhe office mein kam jelhelta hoon ki ab 24X7 tumhe dekhna padega".

Nups: "wow mayank what a sudden change in your attittude...you have a problem with me but not with my hand". Mayank looked confused.

Mayank: "what?".

Nups: "The hand you have been holding since we got here". Nups said pointing to their locked hands, mayank instantly let go.

Mayank: "oh sorry...Anyways Mr. Meheta ke saath hamari meeting is in 2 hours i will go freshen up".

Nups: "Wait i will freshen up first". Nups said blocking mayank's way to the bathroom.

Mayank: "why is that...i said it first i will go". he said taking out his clothes out of the bag.

Nups: "Don't you know it is gentlemen's attitude to let the ladies go first". Nups said as a matter of fact.

Mayank: "I know par yaha pe koi lady bhi toh honi chahiye".

Nups: "ha ha very funny, i will freshen up first". Now both of them have reached the bathroom door, nups was blocking mayank from getting in, in a instant of second nups snatched his shirt out of his hand and threw it on the bed, mayank looked at the shirt, and nups quickly slipped in the bathroom and closed the door.

Mayank: "Oh gosh", it had been 40 minutes and nups was still in the bathroom, mayank was getting impatient.

Mayank: "nupur come out, i have to get ready as well". Finally nups stepped out of the bathroom wearing a pink rob provided by the hotel, her hair were all wet, she was drying them with a towel. Mayank looked at her, at the sight mayank's heart skipped a beat she was looking gorgeous even with no makeup. The sight in front of mayank was so beautiful that he forgot everything for a moment and was lost in Nupur's beauty.

Nups walked upto mayank she noticed him staring at her, she snapped her finger in front of his eyes.

Nups: "what are you staring at go freshen up". Mayank got out of his thoughts. Mayank took a step forward and slipped from the water that was dripping for nupur's hair. In a instant of a second both mayank and nupur were both on the bed, mayank was on the bottom and nups on the top. Both were so close that they could hear each other's heartbeat, nups cheeks were crimsen red, mayank's lips were almost touching nups cheek.

Nups: "uh sorry woh".

Mayank: "no its okay". Nups tried to get up with the help of mayank. The moment was awkward for both of them, they had't been this close since the last 2 years.

Mayank: "uh i will go freshen up". Mayank said and went inside the bathroom.
Nups took her clothes out of her bag and started dressing up for the meeting that was in an hour.

I know this part wasn't very well written out, i apologize for that, but i will try to add more romance to the next part, it will be very well written hopefully.

Do leave you comments/criticism😊

Love Ria
Edited by lopli - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey it was a really nice update and thanks for updating! I found it really sweet how Mayank was holding Nupur's hand the whole time😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

awww thought waz going to be first one to comment😆

anywayz thiz partzz amazinGGG!!!!! sachi mein Ria, you wrote it wonderfully. So both Mayur going for a deal na and then they had to share the same room. and their cute little fight to go first in tthe bathroom and get ready Nupur throws Mayu'z shirt in the bed, and went inside
waz choo cuteee😆😆
and then Mayu waiting for her for such a long time😆 n she came out😳 and he lost in her and then they slip on the bed becuzz of the wet floor☺️ loved this part na wish it didn't finish so quickly, btw do continue soon na sis🤗 -Linu
Edited by .PINK. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic update ria
loved it so much😃
very nice update
keep it up



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Posted: 14 years ago
finally u updated...awesome update really loved it...plzzz comtinue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww ria... this was such a sweet update!!!!! n i loved the last part to the core 😳
thanks for the pm, n do update soon!!!!
take care 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww hope they'll get more mmnts tooo
this was good :D

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