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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Chotii

Aww my Maaneetians!

@ Nadz!! My jaaaanaaa! 🤗🤗🤗
Yes, I actually posted it, can you believe it?? 😆 YouKNOW that I would NEVER have even started writing again if it wasn't for you and your PM yaar! And now LOOK at the success of our thread - it's awesome right hehehe *cheers baby!*

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*A smug looking Nadia pats herself on the back for forcing Saz to start writing again* 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I knowwwww right.... i can't believe how popular this thread has become 😎😎😎😎😎

*Hi5* 😆

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

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*A smug looking Nadia pats herself on the back for forcing Saz to start writing again* 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I knowwwww right.... i can't believe how popular this thread has become 😎😎😎😎😎

*Hi5* 😆

🤣 HOWDY PARTNER! I know... There's not enough romance going on in the show, its not our fault that we have "plans" for Maaneet ... such plans, that the CV's would be oh-so-freakin' generous if they could present on the screen too... sigh... if only...
*Saz snaps outta reverie and rushes to fix up next update*
(abhi thodi dair me milte hain jaanu - I still gotta read ur Lingerie SS! ☺️ Will see ya there! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 )

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

*Waves arms around in air frantically*

No yaar, I'm not drowning. It's my dramatic, pantomime style large HELLO to everybody! So, I'm back with the next part!

Part Three

written by Me (Saz / Chotii) Enjoy!

Turning her back on Maan due to her nerves, Geet lifted her hand to indicate for Maan to return her dupatta. She stopped mid way however, noticing the patterns on her palms. She instantly dropped her hand back to her side.

For a moment, Maan had forgotten the game he was to start with Geet of refusing to give back her dupatta. When Geet's bare back came into his view, it made him powerless.

A thin line tying a knot at the top of her back with two strings teasingly dangling down her smooth spine ignited a burning desire within Maan to remove anything that was invading his right of touching her. On an accord of their own, his legs began moving forward towards her delicate frame. How he urged to caress that silky back of hers, untie the dori that was doing his job of protecting her modesty and preventing him of access to more. He slowly walked forward mesmerised by the sight of Geet. He didn't even notice when the lace material slipped out of his hand and fell to the floor.

Geet could feel Maan inching closer, and just wanted to get out of the situation as soon as possible. She suddenly felt familiar fingertips sliding over her bare abdomen causing her heart to skip a beat. When her heartbeats began regaining their rhythm, and that too a rapid one, Geet closed her eyes as Maan gripped onto her waist tightly from behind, pushing her back closer into himself.

He could sense the rapid rise and fall of her chest. Maan dropped his head in frustration on her bare shoulder, as he knew he would have to control himself for just a little while longer. "You drive me crazy, you know that?" His ragged voice whispered into Geet's ear tempting her to respond. He enclosed her between his muscular arms, feeling content to have her so close. He was quickly losing his calm however as he moved his face slowly against hers from the side. It was the smell of her beautiful hair that was his undoing. Why did she have to smell so good? Geet wondered the same thing about him. There was not a single flaw in her soon to be husband. He was Maan Singh Khurana. His voice, his touch, his mere presence made her forget all else. She was beginning to fall weak with his light caresses.

Maan's slow nuzzling movement on Geet's neck was just making him feel more teased by the stunning woman in his arms. He moved his hands slowly down her arms placing them around her fists and turned her around to face him. He wanted to see her. He needed to see her.
Geet had surrendered unknowingly and as Maan loosened her clenched palms, her eyes began to flutter open. He filled the gaps between her fingers with his own and pulled her closer. Their gazes met and all Maan could see was the heat and immense shade of pink their closeness had caused upon Geet's cheeks. He let go of one hand and slowly caressed her cheek, before stroking his thumb down to her lips. As he rubbed his thumb over her bottom lip, a small moan escaped from Geet. Judging from what was happening, and what Geet now wanted, she thought maybe Maan seeing the designs on her palms wouldn't be such a bad idea...

No. She couldn't melt. Not right now. Not yet anyway. Although she was sure Maan was as lost in the moment as her, she did not want to risk breaking his trance with the state of her hands, so she slowly released her hand out of Maan's grasp, and allowed his other to remain on her face. So not to give Maan any inclination of her sudden antics, she slowly placed both hands upon Maan's chest. "Not yet Maan". She whispered lovingly, looking into his burning eyes. All she could read was desire. He hungered for her, and she could not deny that. Geet looked away, as she had only just mustered the courage to break free from her own daze, and she could not loose herself once again.

Maan's free hand instantly found its way to Geet's bare back. Geet felt a new tingling sensation shake right through her body as she felt Maan's intent hand slowly feeeling its way over her exposed skin as he moved his head closer down towards her ear. Ignoring her plea, Maan's other hand travelled around her waist, to the lower half of her back, and rested there as he leaned her closer still. He placed soft kisses below her ear, trailing lower to her neck. The pleasurable feeling of her warm skin was driving him wild, and he wanted to savour the taste and feel of her as much as he wished to ravish her just then too.

He made his way back up to her forehead and dropped a final small kiss. With his head bowing down he scanned her face, and let his eyes fall lower, allowing him to sneak a glimpse of Geet's peaking cleavage. There was no way he gave a damn now. That was it, he tugged back her head and laid open-mouthed kisses upon her mouth, quickly trailing lower to her collar bone, aggressively pressing her flesh with his lips and sucking the taste of her body a while longer at her nape. His fingers unconsciously made their way to her dori as he lifted her and shoved her against the closest wall. He ran his hands along her bare arms, kissing her more passionately as he could feel the response Geet was now returning with no reluctance. These kisses were nothing like the soft ones Geet had received from Maan before. These kisses were the consequence of what Geet had allowed Maan to see. She was now at mercy to him. There was no way she could help what she had started. Maan continued deepening the kiss, drawing throaty moans in between as he enjoyed the flavours of his bride. If tiny exposures of her body could provoke him to such an extent, Geet couldn't help but wonder what the images on her hands would lead Maan to do.

"Oye Geet!" came a voice from not so far away. Geet's hands stopped their eager movements in Maan's hair, and she looked around frantically for the person the voice belonged to. Dadi Ma had told her that the girls would be on their way to her shortly, how could she have so stupidly forgotten?

Maan lifted his head lazily from Geet's lips. At that moment, he really did not care about anyone seeing them and certainly not about being caught. What mattered right then was his need for Geet. Their need for each other, and he had no intention of stopping what they had started.
"Maan chodiye, Pinky mujhe dhoondte hue andar aa jayegi" she tried to reason with him.
"To aane do Geet" Maan answered between hungry wet kisses. "Mujhe koi faraq nahi padta". His kisses became more urgent as he feared her getting away.

Geet's eyes grew larger than she thought was physically possible. She lightly slapped Maan on the shoulder and struggled to push him off. He just wouldn't budge. "Eh lo. Inhe to sach me koi faraq nahi padta".

When Geet felt her blouse loosen, she knew she had to stop Maan before... before they did the thing they could not do before they were getting married! It was an evil idea, but she knew it was all that could save her now.

"Ouch!" Geet winced as if in unbearable pain.

He stopped.

"Baby" was all Geet said, and it was all that was needed anyway.

Maan shot his head up in concern to look at Geet and then down to her exposed tummy. He realised he may have been too rough on her. He moved himself off of her so she could breathe. As he stepped back a little, Geet noticed her chance to escape. She pushed Maan aside with her shoulder as she lifted her heavy skirt and ran out of the hall leaving behind an angry Maan glaring at her retreating figure.

"Oye Geet, kya Maan sir ne tere haath dekhe kya?" Asked an over excited Pinky between giggles. "Bol na!" she pleaded.

Geet blushed knowingly, thinking "sirf haath nahi... kuch zyaada hi dekh liya".

Geet had bumped into Pinky on her way down to her room. Although Geet was aware that Dadi may have told Pinky that Geet was in the small hall, she didn't want her friend to suspect too much of why it took her so long to answer Pinky's calls. Geet simply told her that Maan had met her in the hall and wanted to check whether she was wearing the outfit he had selected for her. This was enough to satisfy Pinky, but it did not stop the chirpy girl from questioning further.

Pinky waved her hand before a lost Geet, "Oye Geet, me tujhse kuch pooch rahi hoon bata na..."

"Pinky woh chod na..."

"Wait Geet. Dadi said you were almost ready?" Pinky looked over quizzically at Geet.

"Haan, toh? I am ready Pinky".

Pinky frowned at Geet and shook her head in disbelief. "You were alone for a small moment Geet so you could add the finishing touches, and you forgot the most important thing!"

Geet immediately brought her attention to her own appearance, searching for any faults in her outfit. Her jewellery was all in place. She checked her bangles. They were the right ones. They jingled slightly as she moved her arms and the noise quickly reminded her of the scene before. She remembered the constant clashing noises they were making from the rushed movements she made whilst kissing Maan. Kissing Maan brought her attention to her skirt and blouse and she immediately placed one hand on both parts of her body. Her clothing was actually all fine, she remembered making sure of that when she rushed out the hall to meet Pinky. Geet couldn't work out what was so wrong, especially when whatever she touched or saw forced her thoughts to keep on going back to what her and Maan were up to a while ago.

"Uff. Lipstick Geet!" answered Pinky in huffs and puffs. Geet raised her fingers to her lips. She could still feel the stinging sensation on them as well as... Maan. She could feel the way his lips had clung onto her lips and the magic his tongue and teeth had done with them.

Geet was pulled out of her reverie with Pinky's words "Hum sabko pata hai, ki Maan sir ko teri saadgi pasand hai. Par aaj teri shaadi hai Geet. Thoda sajna savarna toh parega na?"
Geet couldn't help but smile. She realised the false colour was ruthlessly smudged off of her lips, as Maan had pressed himself onto her. It was as if he really could not bear any sort of barrier between them. She knew he loved her, and she also knew that he wanted nothing artificial between them ever. He surely was a master of stripping barriers she thought, smiling some more at her own thoughts. Her smile had quickly turned into a grin as she realised the bright pink colour Maan's lips must be at this moment and she let out a small laugh.

"Geet, me teri itni chinnta kar rahi hoon aur tu hai ke mujhpe hass rahi hai? Jaa, me tujhe apni lipstick nahi doongi. Aur naa hi me tere saath chaloongi tera make up teekh karne. Tu apne kamre me akele hi jaa. Me tujhe dus minute me yahin miloongi Annie ke saath. Samjhi?"

Geet smiled at her friend's sweet annoyance. She nodded in agreement, and made her way out of the corridor.

Geet heaved a sigh of relief as she thought of her luck on the way to her room. "Babaji ka shukar hai, isse pehle ke vo mere haath dekte, Pinky aa gayi". She took mindless steps down the hall thinking and talking to herself.

"Tab toh tu bach gayi Geet. Par... aage kya?" Geet knew that although she was successful in keeping the design on her hands a secret from Maan for now, she could get caught very soon. How long could she actually keep on diverting his attention like this?

Looks like Geet's in trouble... Am Sorrrrrrrrrryyy I got a little carried away in the "heat" of the moment and so Maan never actually saw the design... Hope you enjoyed this anyways! Once again... Happy 'Like'-button-pressing and commenting!😃 🤗

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@Sienna..

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

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☺️ *slowly breathes in.... and forgets to breathe out*... *coughs, chokes, splutters... and then goes back to read again*☺️

Saz madam you have a real talent for writing- but you probably already know that😛 Which is why i'm saying pls, pls, pretty pls turn this into a full fledged FF *goes down on knees begging*. I really want to see your version of Maaneet life😛☺️

Coming back to the update... ufffff super hot!☺️☺️☺️ I love the way you described everything- for me i could def imagine Maan & Geet in this situation, right down to Geet's fake "ouch", Maan's immediate concern and then our sherni making a dash for the door☺️

And btw thanks for leaving us hanging again for Maan's reaction!You def know how to keep us hooked😛 Next update kab milega? Will be waiting😍

Update soon!😎

Edited by midnight.blue - 14 years ago

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

God that was hot!☺️☺️... loved it to bits!;D... thank God somebody mentioned the backless lehenga Geet for her engagement.... it was soo damn beautiful!!😍....

and she looked sooo good in it!😳.... I so miss her wearing that kinda stuff!.. the real sexy stuff... cuz of the script change they didnt even get to play out that engagement look of hers....

Imagined just the same right now and ☺️... no wonder Maan lost it😆

Edited by ninand - 14 years ago