AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131

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I-love-Roses

@I-love-Roses

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Posted: 14 years ago

#581

My goodness! What an awesome and touching update. Feeling so sad for abhiya's present condition. God I'm crying now. You made me remember my own lv letters and all the past lovey dovey tyms. Plz update soon.

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Tahani01

@Tahani01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#582

cant wait for the next update so update fast plez btw loved this update it is so sweet how abhay has forgotten pia but still remembers her awww

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#583

Hey Poco!
Wonderful update!
Abhiya simply rocked it. .
I feel so bad for piya. . N just hate that Cat Natasha. . . But abhay is always there to protect her . . Luv him!
N those lines:
"my mind might forget u but my heart will always remember u". . . Takes my breath away. .
Abhay is so adorable when he is jealous!
When r abhiya gona unite again. . Can't wait. .
Continue soon!
Tc

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Ritika

@WiseGirl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#584

Poco, that was so short! Oh well... You can make up for it by updating quickly. *hint hint* 😉

Natzie annoys me so much. Can't she just mind her own business? I love how Piya made such good comebacks and handled her. I was amazing! And "Since when did you start watching seasons of Gossip Girl? Butting in between?" 🤣 Also, "And don't you worry about Maithli. She would only be too glad that am keeping Piya away from the manicured talons of the likes of you!" Maithli would be the first one to throw Piya into Natasha's clutches. 😆 Abhay is soo jealous! It is hilarious to watch him this way. He can't handle the fact that there might be someone else for her who loves her so much, and he doesn't understand why he feels that way.

Please update fast, Poco! I am waiting for the next chapter to see what Abhay does next. 😃

Edited by AbhiYa_luver - 14 years ago

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shivani

@ssshh

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#585

sorry di😕,i can n't comment these days😭,b'coz i m busy in exam😡 but i read ,all update whenever u updated😊.

plzzz update soon😊 .don't think i m not reading.both previous two update r awesome👏.plzzz update soon and yes long also😳.

again sorry for not comment😔.

i love u di😳😊

Edited by ssshh - 14 years ago

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@vidi263

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Posted: 14 years ago

#586

Hello Pocu...After a long time...was on a vacation...had a great time in Vegas 🥳... .Missed reading your daily analysis and more importantly your FF 😃

It took me a long time to catch up with your last 3 updates together...and I am hooked...the Tanushree-magesty interaction was the most powerful of all...and the way T gave it back to Natzie was amazing...I also liked the intensity of the Abhay-Piya convo and I am liking that Abhay is getting jealous.

I lons this supernatural nexus...every character is assigned a supernatural role and it is outstanding the way you have assigned those roles to each of them...reminds me so much of TVD and still..your FF is so different from it. Kudos to you and your supernatural mind 👏😛

I have a confusion though..if T healed herself why are those bruises infected and they have septic..is it the effect of the huraan (or the extra poison that she was infused)?? I feel so bad for her..

Waiting for your next update..

Lots of love and luck..

Vid

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: koyal-kajal
wowww poco i love it how i wish abhay remembers everything and metzie i wish she is thrown into hell's fire even natasha
but loved this chap
you are the most awesomest writer in this whole forum

Thank you. Abhay will not remember anything unless Anushka comes back and undoes the curse. She is the last surviving and the most powerful of the sapphire witch clan and nobody can undo what she has done. But Abhay will fall in love with Piya all over again. Maithli and Natasha will pay for their sins. 😳

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: PreeyaKSharma
so short? 😕

but still amazing!! 😃

Time, my friend! But the next one is coming up soon as well. 😊

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: katiehiwatari
hey awesome update dear... loved the jealousy sweepin in Abhay.. just so beautiful expressed.. thnks..!!! 😊

Thank you. Frustoo Abhay is fun to write. I find him cute. 😳

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Untitled001

@Untitled001

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#590

This was so beautifully written. Though it was short. I loved the way it turned out.

I laughed when he said about scaring kids. That must have left a mark. And the conversation was beautifully portrayed. Abhay talking about Anushka and then turning the conversation hot. Knowing Pia she is not going to try to tell Abhay anything. But what will she do?

I love the jealous Abhay. It is so cute when he acts out of jealousy. The way she held 'his' letter to her heart was really touching. Abhay will fall in love with Pia all over again? Wont he? He has already but he doesnt realize it himself.

Even if his mind forgets her, his heart never will...
Maybe a little more than it was.

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