AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 61

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjna4

okay when i strt getting so many notifications den i knw dat poco has updated... past days i ws kinda upset from forum as dere is tense atmosphere... nevr mind coz now m successful in bringing my frnds back to forum


coming to update... i totally loved it d way d way abhay feels protective, jealous 4 piya... i found him cute over here... and i saw new pia over here d way she answered d natzie... well deserve answered

and most importantly best part of d update ws

Abhay ( leaving her hand )- My mind might forget you '.but my heart '( feels his throat choke on something )'.my heart will always remember you.

u wrote it perfectly and i have no words 4 dis line
amazing update🤗



Thank you, Sanju. Cheer up. Fights and make-ups are a part and parcel of life. Abhay is intense and cute and i am loving this side of him. That line is something that i just came up with it and now , its my favourite quote from this FF. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update!!! Don't have much to say.. Abhay nd Piya are simply adorable!!!
Update soon..
Luv,
Nidhi🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Poco

Sorry for not commenting on the previous. Was a bit busy, sorry!

Coming to this update, as always, a fab update! Loved it to the core! Ah, the jealous Abhay! Love it! And the way Pia was being so protective about that letter made me want to cry for her! Poor soul, so much pain!

Piya ( shakes her head )- No, you don't know him…. Anymore.

So true... Abhay doesn't know himself anymore! *sigh* Oh well, Pia will bring him back! 😃

Abhay (not knowing what he is saying )- I will like to know him…. ( looking into her baby browns)…. He must be special. He just has to be. Someone who can put all his heart into such beautiful words…..( recalls)…. Its stuck in my head.

Piya ( softly )- What?

Abhay ( leaving her hand )- My mind might forget you ….but my heart …( feels his throat choke on something )….my heart will always remember you.

And I am feeling sad all over again! 😒 When will he find out that it was him who wrote that letter!? Hopefully soon!

And your previous update was awesome as well. So now Kabir and Panchi have entered the supernatural world as well. So good to know that Panchi understood everything so quickly!

Oh, and Natasha. That bitch! Go away from Pia! And Abhay, so good to know that he came to protect Pia yet again! The fool doesn't know that it is because of his love for Pia and not Maithli that makes him protect Pia! 😛

Please update soon!! And a request, please make the update longer next time! 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
poco,
its superb update
i love ur writing
the abhiya part was really touching
will abhay again love pia without knowing the past???????
pls update fast pleeez...pleeez...pleeez...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh seriously this was damn cute abhay being jealous😳 and he will fall in love with pia again😳.😳,...sooo cute...i just wish that abhay leave metz😡 and cm to know that she cheated on him and that piya is his true love☺️😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
There is only one word which describes the story you write Nitica and that is B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L

You simply write the Abhay -Pia parts so wonderfully, that I had tears in my eyes while reading the last part.

Kudos to you!


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Pocahontas



Lol. Thank you, Akkoo. I am glad that you liked Sam-T . Most readers can't stand them 'coz T deters the Sam-Misha story. Haha. Abhay's mind and heart are not in sync and it is driving him mad. A point will come when he will have to remind himself that he loves Maithli , not Piya.


in my opinion, that's kinda stupid - hating T - just because she deters Sam-Misha's story. Sam and Misha are two strong individuals, they can think for themselves, feel for themselves, take action for themselves; they have an attraction towards each other but they know it's impossible. Sam and T are two 'monsters' in the supernatural world, they share a wounded connection.Their scenes are emotionally powerpacked and the bond they share..it's just a treat to read. I'm likin 'em better than anyone in the story right now. isn't he doing that now? - reminding himself again and again not to think about Pia 'coz he is supposed to be with Maithali?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poco the update is truly beautiful...i wasn't reading it..i was feeling it...i don't know how exactly to praise you becoz no words will suffice...the scene of Abhiya with the letter...i remember you saying Maithili will regret what she did...i thnk i can almost understand your statement...the last part was surely the best part of this whole ff...love you Poco
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Posted: 14 years ago
what an ammmazzinnggg update dear... just loved it...
am greedy as ever... always asking for more updates.. hate it wen i see the to be continued part... i feel like i can go on n on reading ur FF...
Just loving Abhay-Piya's sweet love story ... Sam- Misha's chemistry... Sam-T love but not love.. T's story is something really unique that u picked up... loving her in this kind of avtaar..
Plzzz update soon dear.. thanks.. :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wao dear amazing nd superb partz of ur ff.
really really luv all d partz.
plz plz cnt wid nxt part as soon as possible.
plz plz add me to ur pm list dear.
do cnt wid nxt part soon nd dunt 4get to pm me.
luv u
vritika

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