AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131

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Sumana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#511

loved Abhay's reaction to Pia's closeness .........and how patiently Pia waits for her Abhay to regain his memory, true love can wait for eternity I guess........ very well described by Pocu 👏👏

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I-love-Roses

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Posted: 14 years ago

#512

Awesomely written. I luuuved the abhiya part. They're so passionate. Felt realy sad for T. Continue soon with that letter part. I think abhay himself wrote it

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_Klaroline_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#513

woooooooow

pleeeeeeeez continue abhay pia part fast

pleeeeeeez

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: Ritzie
Wo Wo Wo - What an update Poco!!! Both parts just awesome.

Abhay and Pia awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Who says Abhay's heart doesn't beat? It beats for Pia. I just loved the library scene. Abhay did get an after-shock on not reacting to Pia's blood. Poco, Abhay toh pagal ho jaayega - par wait Vampires pagal nahi hote nai.😆 And was it Abhay's letter? Will Abhay find out so soon? How is he going to react?

Loved Tanushree in the new avatar for the first time. I feel like she was the Hero of the day. She should kick Natasha more. OMG me turning violent in new T's company. Too much influence. Will she rebel in future? And will she die? Will she kill Natasha? And I am so sure she is going to help Sambhav now. I hope I am not asking the whole story right now. 😃

Thank you so much, Ritzie. 😃....Abhay has written that letter but he obviously has no idea. He would be intrigued and then, jealous. He won't rest until he finds out who the guy is. 😆...dimaag ki dahi hone waali hai.

The Bolshvas are underestimating T. They cannot puppet her and T is becoming aware of how powerful she is and what she can do. Sambhav will find out in the next update what happened with her in the torture chamber. 😊

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: missglam
awesome update..poco.👍🏼.
abhiya scene was the best... Abhay feels something but cannot comprehend his own feelings...AWWWW...😳

piya was such a sweetheart..❤️.she really touched him DEEP... overall..a beautiful update..😍

feeling really bad for T... but atleast she gave natasha a piece of her mind..i loved that part...

continue soon...plz update ASAP...can't wait..😳

tc

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Thank you.😳.....Abhay is just going crazy and its important. If he doesn't go so , he will not reach his breaking point to find out the truth. 😆.....T was kickass and that Natasha really needed some spanking.😉

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ilove99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#516

awesome poco...👏👏

the whole first part was awesome!!!😉😛

abhay is as usual in confused matter 😕and pia is going superb...👍🏼i don't understand how is she controlling herself!!and that explanation her words were adorable...hope abhay finds out soon what's happening to him.

and that no vampy instincts is that ause of they have connection or it laaouuw!!!!😆hun?

well T is geting good slowly but please tell me who are the soulmates mish and sam ???or T and sam???

Update soon..........

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#517

lovely update

wow tanushree was good i got a feeling that T will be majesty destruction............

abhay listened to piya wow ............

do continue

bye sumi

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: sanjna4
poco u r really making khichdi of abhay's mind.........i mean his mind is going through so much.... dats why i alws say dat abhay is saddness ki dukaan in ur ff and also in show....okay now cumin to update.........i found abhay comfused aatma over here as he dont know why his mind and heart is not working in sync way bt m loving all this mess bcoz it is depicting abhay's true love 4 piya and d way pia pacifies abhay was super adorable........ and u knw how to take ur readers to imagine each and evrything through your word power and when abhay realises dat he didn't crave 4 pia's blood dat ws jst d same thing dat striked me while reading and i know dat magic sheild has something related to it in practical terms and in other sense it is love

okay now i loved dis T dat u displayed....... cz she is full of courage, power and self confidence and when a person who immediately has these things has lost fear from death and dat was cleary displayed in todays update and i jst loved d way she bach answered majesty and i am so sure dat what she said is goin to happen soon she will see who is majesty and m lookin forward to it

and poco awesome update👏

and thankfully u updated otherwise people wud have finished this thread in demand of update😛

Thank you, Sanju.😳....Abhay did not crave for Piya's blood because he is CONNECTED to her. Remember , they exchanged blood when Abhay had to bring her back to life in the woods. T is gaining rebellious confidence not just because she is becoming aware of her powers , also because she has nothing to lose. And Natasha had irritated the hell out of her. 😆

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: AbhiYa_luver
Finally, Poco! I was waiting for this update eagerly!

Abhay finally let his emotions take control! He is going to find out that he loves her soon! Yay! Piya was very mature; she pushed him away knowing that he would regret what he did later. So, the letter was from him. What if he doesn't realize that he wrote it just then? I bet he would be filled with jealousy, and not know why. I mean, she is just a girl, right?Just the niece of the woman he loves. That answered my question from before. Finally! T talked back to Natasha! I liked how she was rebellious. I mean, she talked back to the Majesty, and she kicked Natasha's ass!

Thanks sweetz. How have you been, baby?

Abhay will not know that he has written that letter and he will become obsessed with the idea of finding out Piya's mystery guy. He will think he is concerned but he will know that he is dealing with a man's emotions. On top of that Piya's secret meetings with Sam, Misha , Zeenia and soon, Kabir to stop Abhay from reaching the ring will frustrate the hell out of him. Maithli is going to regret doing what she did.

T is the future rebel and Bolshvas will be sorry that they ever found her. 😆