AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

gr888 part poco as always.......it seems i always lost myself in the world of ur supernatural story....it feels like everything is going infront of my eyes so real n supernatural.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

i felt reli bad for danish😭 bt actually v av to pay for our sins n he is doing the same😡...i wish one day natasha and maithili both would pay a heavy cost for their 100 of wrong doings!!🤢🤢😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

sambhav...i m aving confused emotions for him😕😕😕......on one hand i m feeling bad for d gud person somehwere staying inside him😭😭 and on the other hand i agree wid maya's words😡😡

awwwwwwwwww...abhay-anushka's convo was damn sweet...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳........n this new abhay is superb cute😳😳😳😳😳😳.......i just lovd the whole scene b/w anushka-abhay-piya......i wish anushka finds out some other way to deal wid this maithili's natsha thing....

such a rocking part poco!!!😊😊😊
update soon!!
luv
heena😊😊

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sushmita

@tantrums..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

god its coming....anushka is going to cutt abhay from his best memories (surely not forever!!)..... luvd piya and abhay 's exchange and also anushka's emotions ...the guilt of parting them....the trios hug was so cute and full of love and warmth..!

cuming to sam .....well maya has givn him the warning ... he wud be at his weakest and i suppose that tie misha is gonna understand him and may be help him out....thats how their bond wud develop ...though i think sam wud eventually hav to choose btw misha and T in near future...

now cums danish....i really pity him now....i know wht he did to maya but now he seems so vulnerable...... i think he might go to kabir to change him into a vampire but thn change his decision ....after all y to drag innocent bro in this never-ending mess....Natasha ..... hate her ..... as for T i suppose she wud follow the majesty's order but evry time she wud try to let the human in her stay...i can sense it.... she might be doing according to whts in her traits but a moment wud cum whn the human in her win over the monster in her and she wud help abhay nd piya .......!

again poco ....... luvd ur writing!!

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

😭guys these are khusi ke asansu ! i just loved abhiya😳

poor anushka how will she do this...

and sam what's maya up to?and why was sam crying what he has to do with T?he never cared for anyone except his clan and himself so what now?

update soon........

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Neetz

@.Jane..

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Congrats on the new thread, Poco and thanks for the link!🤗

Res!😎

-Edited-

We got two updates at once?😕 Anyhow, good for me😆 😆

So about the first update, omg, I actually cried reading the last paragraph!😭 Seriously, the way you make us feel for every character, the way I can identify with everyone's pain and suffering whether I like or dislike that character, it's so amazing, it's not even funny! Jeez!! How do you do this, Poco, seriously?!! 😭 😭 😭

And Natasha is SOO MEAN!😡 😡 She wants to drag Kabir also in this big bad world, where he doesn't belong!😡 I agree her nature is to be evil, but it won't kill her to spare a few people from her evilness😡 😡 😡 And ya, she's actually comparing a mortal T's snootiness to a Bolshva T's evilness🤔

And T, she's slowly leaving her human life behind and like you said, whatever little humanity is left in her is also ebbing away. Btw, do Bolshva's become emotionless sooner than the Czens? Because T is already stopping to feel anything slowly but Danish still feels. Forget Abhay, he will continue to feel for the next 472972801072172839 years and even after that!😆

Btw, can't Danish be cured of the Huraan the way Abhay was?? Or is it too late in his case?

Totally emotionally packed update, omg! We saw such a contrast among all three of them, how all three handled the situation in different ways! Anyhow, books calling now. I was suppose to be here for only 10 mins but it exceeded😛 I'll be back to catch the next update in an hour😃

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Omg, Maya made Sam dream all that, right??! Sam would never chose T over Misha no matter what, would he? Please say, No, Poco😭 😭 😭 And wait a sec, Maya or no Maya, does this dream mean he'll have to make a choice between the two in the near future?? In what sense?? Like, merely picking sides or something else?😲 😲 😲

And gosh, this is going to be so tough for Anushka! I mean, she's seen Abhay suffering for centuries put together! And now, seeing him so happy after more than a lifetime, it'll be next to impossible for her to take this away from him! After literally a forever of dark existence, he's finally seen light now, he's started hoping, Pia has made him hope and made his life beautiful again. Yes, we can see how Anushka is heartbroken at the thought of ending all this! Omg, they're so happy together😭 😭 Arrghhh!! I hate Natasha and Maithili😡 😡 I don't want to hate Maithili because we've seen a kind streak in her but I can't help it I'm just waiting for Anushka to strike back You know, I was actually sobbing like a baby when Anushka went and hugged AbhIya😭 😭 😭 Poor her!! Abhay places blind trust in her despite the Maithili fiasco, how will she do it?? It will take every ounce of her witchy powers to condition Abhay😭

Continue as soon as you can, Poco! I know that the update will be depressing but the wait for it is even more depressing😛

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
awesome update.......................why do they want kabir to change into a vampire?....................the storm is approaching

Thank you. The Bolshvas are just playing naughty , actually. They want the help of Czens but at the same time they can't stop their evil deeds. Danish is being asked to turn Kabir into a vampire because Bolshvas have a doubt on Kabir's bloodline and they want to find out if they are right.

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Sanjna

@--sunshine--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

congrats 4 completing 1st book and i am eagerly waiting 4 next update,..........

nd plz do something abt anushka making abhay to forget abt piya...

m gonna hate that part if he forgets abhay.....😊

nd keep continue ur gud work

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
gr888 part poco as always.......it seems i always lost myself in the world of ur supernatural story....it feels like everything is going infront of my eyes so real n supernatural.....👏

Thank you, Heena. I am glad that you enjoyed reading this part. It is fun only if you can feel it and visualize it, so thank you once again.

i felt reli bad for danish😭 bt actually v av to pay for our sins n he is doing the same😡...i wish one day natasha and maithili both would pay a heavy cost for their 100 of wrong doings!!😡

Actually, if you look at it with an objective perspective , there is no reason to feel bad for Danish. Natasha and Metz? Maybe. At least , Natasha should. She is the fiercest Bolshva around but she doesn't know T's potential yet.

sambhav...i m aving confused emotions for him😕😕😕......on one hand i m feeling bad for d gud person somehwere staying inside him😭😭 and on the other hand i agree wid maya's words😡😡

Sambhav is , well, you get a headache trying to judge him. Even , i cannnot. 😆

awwwwwwwwww...abhay-anushka's convo was damn sweet...😳........n this new abhay is superb cute😳.......i just lovd the whole scene b/w anushka-abhay-piya......i wish anushka finds out some other way to deal wid this maithili's natsha thing....

i love this Abhay too. So adorable!😍

such a rocking part poco!!!😊😊😊
update soon!!
luv
heena😊😊

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shruthiR

@shruthiR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

It was a very nice chp.Oh God! I just hope Danish doesn't change poor Kabir into a vampire.Sam's dream was whacko!😲Although it was unreal,how could he pick T over Misha!😡😕Anyway,I feel sorry for Anushka,poor girl! I hope there is some other way out of this.I wonder how things are with Panchi at Daksh's place after she got cut by those knives.Looking forward to the next chp and update soon😊

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sana

@arhi.sarun

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

that was so so good
cont soon
love this part alot

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smile843

@smile843

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

What an absolutely amazing, mind blowing fantastic well written FF..

i feel extremely addicted to this FF, the way i have never felt for any of the stories read before..

this one is really really a different from all... absolutely all of them i have read till date.. and i include even big name novels in it..

you are an awesome writer and i hope u put good use of ur talent..

i wish PKYEK creatives notice ur FF and call u for writing their story..

ur story is far far far better than wats going on there..

since i started readin gthis one, i am so much into this story that i have forgotten the difference between real story and this one..

i feel the real piya from tv also loves her abhay that much only.. but then things change wen i see indifferent behaviour of piya on the tv towatds abhay.. i keep mixing daksh and Sid.. wen they were showing panchi sid convos, i was thinking and waiting for moments wen they ll show that suspicion of panchi on why Sid isnt saying that he knows the Raichand family, since panchi had seen their pics in it...

i am not too good at writing.. but just one word for you.. you are FABULOUS WRITER..

I really hope you get much much more appreciation for ur work..

you truly deserve it..

Congratulations on completing over 150 pages of this thread.. :-)

I am so happy and thankful for the moment i decided to start reading this FF..

Thanks a tonnes, a millions for writing this and i wish this FF continues for many many many such threads...