AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Ritz93

Wow Poco, amazing thing your update did.

First, Samisha dance-cum-cold-fight brought the smile on face. Then Abhay-Tracker dance widened that smile. Pia's attitude made it almost a grin, and I was laughing by the time, Abhay forced Pia to dance. 🤗

Abhay-Pia walk was true romantic. And Kabir's kiss to Anushka almost made me forgot what Anushka is going through. Well, her mood doesn't seem to matter to me anymore.

I am glad that you liked the update. I enjoyed writing this part for the gang as they all were happy and Sam-Misha are no longer behaving like cats and dogs. 😆... for me, Abhay-Piya in my fanfic are the stuff that fairytales are made of. Oye, why doesn't Anushka's mood matter to you? 😲

**Ritz takes a deep fresh breath and is rejuvenated**😊

It was truly refreshing to read your update after reading/ creating Abhay whiplash posts at the Forum. 😃

You know, I was going to request you to add a bit of romance in this update. But by the time I posted it, your update was already there and then I removed my request.

Luck by chance - this made me the first one to comment. 😃

Awww.... viewers connect emotionally to Abhay , so there is whiplash. When he makes up for everything , everyone is going tp fall back in love with him. Don't worry. I am glad i wrote exactly what you wanted.

Originally posted by: ssshh

its reallly superb chapter👍🏼. a love between abhiya and a mannerized argument between samisha"superb"👏,poor anushka,she has to betrayel abhiya;s trust and separat them.i like little bit jealousy of misha.😉 poor kabir got gift for his daring.😆

Thank you. Sambhav and Misha are learning to be civil to each-other and Abhay-Piya are just living their dream until tragedy strikes. Anushka has no choice but you never know , this separation might work in favour of Abhay-Piya. Misha is forever jealous , its just that she turns it into anger. 😆...Kabir ne kaam hi aisa kiya, chaanta to padna hi tha. 🤣

its amazing that how could u creat such a beautifull emotions in fiction,i can't imagin a little bit of it😊.i was eagerly waiting ur update,where were u? still i m doing my exam preparation bt whole day i was waiting for ur update.😛

I am so sorry, baby. I was busy with my office work but i promise i will update every day now , no matter how small or big an update. But hey, prepare for your exams well, do well and make us proud. 🤗

poco,how can ahbay redevelop his feeling for piya,b'coz he will treat her a little kid and decendent of his beloved maithli😲,i hope maithli will not make more fun of piya's situation😔.will samisha help piya for getting back abhay😃,i hope b'coz misha will help her friend and somewhere its needful for sam and its clan ,

i hope it will help samisha closeness😍😳,where T will become "kabbab me haddi"😈.

Vampires here don't treat anyone like a kid. Or anywhere. They are not old - they are just immortal who have stopped ageing. So, Abhay will not treat Piya like a kid at all. He will treat her like a girl only. Maithli will be too besotted and busy with Abhay to make fun of Piya. Don't worry. 😆....Misha and Sambhav will try to help Piya but how , who knows. T will start directing her emotional energy towards Sam now , as ordered by the Majesty.

i m waiting ur next update,i know i m impatient girl😃

Originally posted by: AbhiYa_luver

Yes! I can work for Daksh's doppelganger! 😆 If Anushka knows that Zeenia is going to crush her reputation, why did she pick her? And is there away to get promoted from lower orders into higher one?

Oh Lord! Okay, i will get Daksh's doppelganger for you. 😆.....Arre, Zeenia is just naughty , not a vixen.😆...and Zeenia is the most trusted Keeper and she can protect Piya, don't worry. 😳...i didn't get your order question. 😕

Finally! SaMisha are being civil to each other, if not for their own, but Abhay's sake. I hope that they can stop arguing someday. 😍 Abhay is so sweet! When he sees that Tracker is sad, he goes over and dances with her! AbhiYa can not even imagine what is going to happen to them! So is Anushka going to erase Abhay's memories first or go to the underworld first? Now that you mention it, Abhay-Piya are kind of like a fairy tale sometimes. So, exactly whose minds can vampires read? I still can't believe that Kabir had the guts to kiss Anushka! 😆 But he deseved to be slapped. He should have asked for permission to kiss her! I'm glad Anushka's going to come back with a bang!

If SaMisha stop arguing , then , how will they be SaMish?😆...Anushka will manipulate Abhay's memory first and then, leave for the underworld. Vampires can read anyone - all normal human beings and creatures but not witches and warlocks as their psychic powers are stronger. 😊....Kabir is gonna go into a swing because Zeenia is going to flirt with him.

Originally posted by: sanjna4

i really like d way you represented d feelings of anu and kabir.....they compliment to each other......i know anu is goin thru tough times bt still she cant hide her feelings foe kabir......

i ws jst wandering that majesty in bolshavas is abhay's real father and he is powerful........ as being son only abhay can fight him...... thats why he is so special to others...????

nd ya pia and abhay moments were indeed romantic jst lyk a fairytale........

nice update poco and plz keep updating it soon

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

I am glad that you liked the update. I enjoyed writing this part for the gang as they all were happy and Sam-Misha are no longer behaving like cats and dogs. 😆... for me, Abhay-Piya in my fanfic are the stuff that fairytales are made of.Oye, why doesn't Anushka's mood matter to you? 😲