~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan)

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iluvblue0812

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

PART 13
Geet- Uhm, mujhe Maan se koi zaroori baat karni hain, hum abhi aaye.

Geet and Maan go to the side towards the bathroom.

Maan- What is going on? Main tumhara boyfriend kaise ban gaya hoon?

Geet- Maan, dekha na, vo kaise puch raha tha agar main single hoon, eska matlab hain ke vo mujh par line mar raha tha.

Maan was totally blank. Geet punches him on his shoulder.

Geet- Dude! You're a guy, you should understand this!

Maan- I do, par tum to bahut detail mein chal jati ho.

Geet- Whatever, bas please mere boyfriend bane ki acting karo nahi ta mujhe unke saath nice rehna parega aur saath mein uske disgusting personal questions ke jawab dene parege.

Maan- Ah, to vo client ka beta hain to tumhe nice rehna hi parega.

Geet- Han! Aur aap to mere boss hain aur dost bhi hain, en logo ke sahmne to hum log acting kar sakte hain, yeh to hum charo ke beech ki baat hain, haina?

Maan- Han.

Geet- To karenge boyfriend ki acting?

Maan sighs. Maan- Han.

Geet- Yes!!

Geet hugs Maan in excitement.

Maan also hugs her and he touches her bare back. Geet punches his shoulder.

Geet- Eh, yahan acting mat karo. Vahan jakar karna.

Maan- Han par rehearsal to karni paregi.

Geet- Arey vah. Aap to bare flirty type nikle.

Maan smiles.

Geet- Maan, ek baat batao.

Maan nods.

Geet- Aap jiaada smile kareya karo.

Maan- Kyun?

Geet- Kyun ki aap mere boyfriend banne ki acting kar rahe ho aur main nahi chahti ke mera boyfriend sadu rahe.

Maan- Kya? Tumhe lagta ke main sadu type hoon?

Geet- To aur kya? Jab pehli baar mile the, tab bhi aap mujhe sadu lagte the. Ab bhi sadu ho.

Maan- Accha Geet, Yeh baccho ki baate chodo, vahan vo log humara wait kar rahein hain. Chalen?

Geet- Han.

Maan walks in front of Geet.

Geet- Maan! Yeh aap kya kar rahe ho?

Geet goes up to Maan and holds his hand.

Geet- Aise jana, hum couple ki tarah lagenge.

Maan grips her hand and they go to the table and Maan pulls the seat for Geet. Geet looks at Maan.

Geet- Thank You.

Maan- No problem.

And he kisses her forehead. Geet was impressed.

Mr. Khanna and Puneet look at them.

While Mr. Khanna and Puneet talk, Geet whispers to Maan- Maan, acting to aapki kamaal ki hain!

Maan smiles.

Mr. Khanna and Puneet talk to Geet and Maan and they have a good time during dinner.

Geet- Maan, maine dessert khana hain.

Maan- Han Bolo Geet, kya khana hain.

Geet- Chocolate Fantasy.

Maan- Ok.

Maan calls the waiter and orders a Chocolate Fantasy for Geet. The cake comes and Geet gives the first bite to Maan to look like a real couple. Geet eats the cake and her face is covered in chocolate.

Maan- Geet, tumhare face par chocolate laga hain.

Geet tries to take it off, but she can't. Maan takes it off for her by using his hanky. They looked so cute! After a small talk with Mr. Khanna and Puneet, they decide to leave.

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Precap- Rain!!!!!!!

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Amazing updates. Thanks for the double treat.
Yaar geet na kamal di larki hai lol,loved the way she conviced maan to be her boyfriend. Shes too good.
Cant wait for the rain update.

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Awesome updates

Loved them both

Cant wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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known

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

thanks for two update in one day both parts hilarious pls cont soonnnnnn thanks pm

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Shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

WOW
Amazing updates
loved it
superbb parts
haha maaneet faking dating
lolz..soo cute
and maan all fida over geet
loved it
continue soon
plz love the precap
want a romantic rain sequence with a songg hehe
cont soon
thank u

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Durga

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

wow tat was really good yaar

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iluvblue0812

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

PART 14 Geet and Maan go outside and its raining.
Maan- Arey! Barash! Geet, main abhi valets ko kehta hoon ke vo humari gari lekar aaye.

Geet was smiling by looking at the rain and just nods. Maan goes to the valet. When Maan comes back, Geet wasn't there. He started looking around and suddenly he saw her in the front dancing in the rain. She was wet. Her saree was wet and he saw her bare stomach and her hair was wet and it perfectly fell on her face. She was laughing and smiling. Maan was totally mesmerized by her. Geet looked so beautiful. When Geet saw Maan, she stopped.

Geet- Arey! Vahan kyun khare ho? Yahan aao! Dekho kitna maza aa raha hain!

Maan- No Geet. Mujhe barash se sakt nafrat hain. Yeh chikar, gila gila gand. It's disgusting.

Geet- Haye Rabba! Aapko barash se nafrat hain?! Vo bhi SAKT nafrat?! Yeh to bahut buri baat hain.

Maan stares at Geet.

Geet- Barash ek bahut khubsurat cheez hoti hain.

Maan- Khubsurat? What nonsense.

Geet- Nonsense to aap ho.

Geet continues to enjoy the rain.

Geet whispers- Aaj to aapko barash mein aana hi parega.

Geet pretends to fall.

Geet- OUCH!!!! Haye rabba.

Maan runs towards Geet.

Maan- Kahan chot lagi hain?

Geet- on my foot.

Maan looks at her foot and examines it.

Maan- Yahan to kuch nahi hua.

Geet smiles and pushes Maan on the ground and lies on top of him.

Geet- Pata hain! Bas aapko barash mein lekar aana tha!
Geet gets up and tries to run but Maan holds her saree pallu.

Maan gets up and pulls Geet close and holds her from behind. Maan puts his hand around Geet's waist. Geet was totally lost and closed her eyes.

Maan whispered in her ear- Mujhe barash mein lekar aane ke liye itna natak kyun kiya? Tumhari liye to main kuch bhi karlunga.

Geet smiles.

Geet- Eh fake boyfriend, aise kyun bol rahe ho?

Maan- Kyun ki main tumhara fake boyfriend nahi hona chahta.

Geet- Matlab?

Maan tightens his grip around Geet's waist.

Maan- Main pehli baar ek larki ko aise keh raha hoon. Geet Handa....... I love you.

(MAAAAAAAAAAHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

Geet opens her eyes to see if this was a dream. IT WASN'T A DREAM! It was reality! Maan Singh Khurana just said I love you to her!

Geet- Sach?

Maan- To kya jhoot bol raha hoon?

Geet smiles.

Geet- Lekin hum to abhi abhi mile hain.

Maan- Par mujhe aisa lagta jaise main tumhe 10 saal se janta hoon.

Geet smiles.

Maan- Geet Handa- Mujhe tumse se pyaar ho gaya hain. Jab tumne pehli baar meri gaari roki thi, tab se. Tumhari yeh aadate, baccho jaisi baat karna, kisi ki baat na sunni, tumhari khubsurati...mujhe fida kar diya. Tum sach bol rahi thi, tumhara kamaal to boss par bhi chal peya.

Geet turns around and looks into Maan's eyes.

Geet- Fir se bolo.

Maan- Kya?

Geet- Vo 3 labz.

Maan- I love you.

Geet- Fir se.

Maan- I love you.

Geet- Fir se.

Maan- I love you.

Geet- Aapse main yeh 3 labz har roz sun sakti hoon.

Maan smiles.

Geet- I love you too.

(MAAAAAAAHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

Geet hugs Maan and Maan hugs her back and it rains on them!!

While Geet and Maan were hugging each other, Maan says- Ab zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi aur har raat tumse khatam.

Geet has tears in her eyes.

Geet- Ab zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi aur har raat aap se khatam.

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Precap- Enjoying life as BF and GF.

Hey Guys! I know I rushed through Maan confessing his love as well as Geet but I just thought that it was a perfect moment! I hate to wait till the 40th part for them to confess!! LOL...So I just skipped to the point and now I guess that we get to see cute love scenes between them!!!!! I hope you guys liked it! Thanks so much for the love!!!