Madly in lov (Mjht os) the end

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys i m writing an os on mayur it would contain 2 max 3 parts so without wasting time lets start...
Intro
Nupur n gungan bhushan r sis n they belong 2 very rich family. They r totaly opposite 2 each other. Nupur hv a lot of atitute, she is too much bubbly, when she decides that she want something she makes it sure that she do get that on d other hand gunjan is quite, down 2 earth girl n ofcourse very studious bt 1 thing is common in both of them that they r gud at heart.

mayank sharma is d only son of shilpa sharma n they hv a very establied family business.

Samrat shergill is also d only son in his family d belongs 2 middle class family.

They all know each other since colldge times.

Part 1..( do read intro first)
Nupur sitting on a chair in balcony n remembering d days when she ws dam happy in her lif. She toughes her bally n says"i sory baby bcoz me u too hv 2 suffer along with me" with some tears on her cheaks..

Flashback
It ws d day of celebration. Why? Bcoz it ws engagement of mayank n gunjan. Yes, u heard right gunjan. Mayank used 2 like gunjan n gunjan too lik him afterall they both hv same taste ie ofcourse books so mayank proposed her after their colldges n she too said yes. N this how they came 2gether. Every1 ws happy in their family abt their marriage except 2 person ie samrat n gunjan. They both r bst frds n know each other very well. Nupur knows abt d feelings samrat is hving 4 gunjan bt she never told 2 gunjan bcoz she thought that it cn creat problems b/w sajan so stay quite bt she couldn't bear her own feelings 4 mayank. She lovs him from d colledge days. He ws d most handsom boy in d colldge n d killing smile he hv makes her more n more mad 4 him. His most well build body, his voice, his style hd done a unknown magic on her. She wants him on any cost bt nt on d cost of happyness of her own sis, never ever. So she never disclosed her feelings more over mayank ws never intrested in her. She ws d diva bt nt of mayanks type mayank likes d simple girls lik gunjan. 4 him she ws jst gunjan's sis, he do nt lik her much as he knows that she hs a lot of atitute moreover she is too much on d sky being a diva of colledge.
Days were passing nupur ws controling herself so that she do nt break up. She used 2 cry alot when she is alone n geting mad for mayank. If gunjan is nt her sis then may b she hd done something 2 stop this marriage bt she thought that gunjan loves mayank so she didn't done anything n beared d all pain. With same pain samrat also going though bt he ws nt that mad lik nupur.
Finaly day of marriage arived nupur is helping nupur 2 get ready n they r talking 2 each other when gunjan asks
G. Di ye pyar kase hota hai?
N.(confusingly) muje kya pta hoga...tuje zarada pta hoga akhir tu mayank se jo pyar karti hai.
G. Nhi di main mayank se pyar nhi karti bs usse pasand karti hoe
N. Kya? (with a ray of hope)
G. Ha di, bt don't wory shadi k baad pyar bhi ho jayga.
N. Tho jb usne tujhe propose kiya tune mna kyun nhi kiya.
G. Kyunki wo mera bst frd hai di usse mna kase kar dati vase bhi kisi na kisi k sath tho shadi karni hi thi tho apne bst frd se kyun nhi(says simply)
N. Tho tu ye shadi todh kyun nhi dati gunjan
G. Kyun mazak kr rhi ho di, mane kha na shadi k baad pyar bhi ho jayga..don't wory
N. Main mazak nhi kr rhi gunjan i m serious.
Gunjan gets too much shocked after this n nupur tells her every thing that how much she in lov with mayank n gunjan jst can't believe this.
N. Dekh gunjan mujhe lagta tha ki tu mayank se bohat pyar karti hai islea aaj tk mane kuch nhi kha bt aaj jb mujhe pta hai ki tu mayank se pyar nhi karti tho main mayank ko nhi kho sakti (n she cries alot n thoughout all d pain she ws going though all these days)
Gunjan ws nt able 2 see such condition of her sis n she gets ready..
G. Di plz ro mat. Main apko is halat mae nhi dekh sakti...plz di plz..bt hum ab kya kr sakte hai baraat tho derwaze pr aa gye hai.
N. (n nupur realised that she hd hoped so much) ab kuch nhi ho sakta gunjan kuch nhi., with tears in her eyes
G. Ek kaam ho sakta hai di...n they watch 2 each other with empty eyes.

After half an hour all were seem buzy around d house. Mayank ws in d mandap n bride ws called by pandit ji. Samrat ws asked 2 call gunjan n nupur from upper room. Samrat moves n reach 2 their room n knocks.
In side d room gunjan ws busz 2 make bride 2 nupur. They were dam scared bcoz of this n as d door knocks gunjan puts pallu on nupurs face covring it n hide herself in washroom. Nupur opens d door n samrat is their.
S. Hi gunjan tumhe neeche bulaya hai...(while watching out around d room he says) he says where is nupur.
Nupur points 2wards washroom.
G. Ok..so i think we should move. He holds her hand gantlely n ws abt 2 more when his eye stoped on a frdship band which ws in her hand, how cn he 4get this ? This ws d same band he gifted 2 nups so sensed something wrong n without wasting a sec he opned her pallu n he ws dam shocked 2 see nupur. S. What d hell nupur tum yhan kya kr rhi ho?
N. Who main mayank se py..aa..r..
S. Oh mayank so mera shak sahi nikla tum mayank se pyar krti ho. Bt tum esa kase kar sakti ho wo bhi apni behan k sath. Main tumhare halat janta hoe akir main bhi gunjan se pyar karta hoe bt...kher chodo...with a moist eyes
N. Bt sam sunu tho..
S. Nhi nupur ye galat hai, main neeche ja kr aunty ko sab kuch bta rha hoe.,n he ws abt 2 move when gunjan comes out of washroom, she hd heard all their conversation
G. Roko samrat...n samrat stops n a other shock on his face n he moves around. Tumhe mare kasam hai tum kisi se kuch nhi kahuge.
S. Bt gumjan..
G. Ye di or mera donu ka decision hai so plz..
Sudenly they some footsteps outside n imediately gunjan again puts pallu on nupurs face n hide herself again in washroom n samrat is standing lik a statue.
Gunjan's mom. Beta itna time lga diya..where is nupur
S. She is in washroom aunty i think we should move.
Gunjan n nupur both takes a deep breath that sam didn't said anything.
Gunjans mon take her daoughter 2wards mandap. All mantra starts. All rasams of jay mala, kanyadan, farays with kasams n all happen. Finaly mangal sutra is tied in nupurs neck by mayank n when d time of sindoor comes samrat intentianly swith offs d lights n bcoz d mantras can't stop in b/w pandit ji says 2 put sindoor as this last rasam ws left n so in dark no one ws able 2 nupurs face n a new relation beganing ws started. They bcame husband n wife...THE WERE MARRIED..

INDEX
Part 1 - pg 1
Part 2- pg 2
Part 3 - pg 4
Part 4- pg 6

Part 5 ( the end) - pg 7
Edited by arjunkidiwani - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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itz gr8
do continue it soon
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lovedd it but scared of what will happen?osom update
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awesum OS yaar.......plzzzz continue........
m shockd wat will happen next.......😲......
i hope gunjan ko bhi samrat se pyaar ho jaaye......😳.....
cn u plzz PM me wen u continue?
i'd b vry thnkful 2 u.......
plzzzzz update soon & dnt 4gt 2 PM me.......
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hey.........it was grt.
loved it.
update soon.
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it was nice start dear
loved it
love the story line-its really very interesting
do cont it and plz pm me
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tht was soooooooooo awesomeeeee plzzzzzzz add me to your pm list
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part 2
They were married. Mayanks mom wants 2 see her bahu so she opned d pallu of nupur n shocked 2 see nupur. On this mayank too got shocked n nupur's parents just cant beleive dat this is nupur. Nupur is being questioned by every1.mayank ws nt ready 2 except this marriage, he ws so much angry that nupur got too much scared n ws nt able to explain anything. 2 defend her sis gunjan came out n told every1 that she doen't wants 2 marry mayank becoz she loves samrat so she asked nupur 2 sit in mandap. Nupur tried to explain d actual thing bt gunjan didn't let her 2 say anything..mayank ws nt still believing on all this crap as he knows gunjan n nupurs nature very well so he asked gunjan that if he loves samrat so much then y dont she marry him right now right here. Gunjan know mayank is asking her 2 do this 2 know d actual truth so she says her 4 d marriage n seeing d atmosphere around samrat too get ready. At such situation gunjan's parents ws also helpless so they made marry 2 gunjan n samrat in d same mandap. Their both daughter's bidai is done. Samrat took gunjan along with him n mayank don't want 2 take nupur so he left alone n nupur ws gone along with mayanks mom.
When sajan reached 2 their home.
Sajan bedroom
G. Sory samrat situations itne critical ho gye thi ye hame ye shadi karni padi or tum bevajah hi fas gae. Mujhe nhi pta tha ki mayank ye...samrat stops him n says
S. Its ok chashmish...mujhe koi problem nhi hai. Tum tho jan hi gye ho ki that i lov u. So don't wory main tumhe kisi cheez k lea force nhi karuga.
G. Samrat i jst need some time...mane mayank se kabhi pyar nhi kiya bcoz main shadi k baad wale pyar pr vishvas karti thi. I promise samrat i'll try my bst 2 make our relationship successful.
S. Me too...n they share a small hug.

Mayur bedroom
Nupur ws waiting 4 mayank n she ws hoping that may b mayank will except her. Mayank entered in d room n he ws too much drunk. Aftr watching such condition of mayank nupur goes near 2 him 2 give support bt he ushes her away
M. Jst go away i don't need u
N. Tears rolled out from her eyes bt she ws prepared 4 it.
M. Y did u do this? Says with anger. I don't lov u n never ever will do...so jst get out from my lif.
Nupur ws nt able 2 react on these words of mayank n she ws fixed on her place.
Mayank ws so much drunk that he lost his senses n fall on bed. Being his wife nupur helped him to adjst on bed, she removed his shoes n covred him with blanket. She knows she hs no right 2 sleep on d same bed so she sleeps siting on d floor with support of bed.

Next morning
A new beautiful morning 4 sajan bcoz they were trying there bst 2 give 100% to their new relationship.
D same morning ws nt gud 4 mayur bcoz mayank ws avoiding nupur's presence completely, he is nt caring abt her n she is geting hurt bcoz of this nt expressing her pain.

On d breakfast mayanks mom told that she need 2 go new york 4 d bussiness meeting n 4 atleast 6 months she will busz there bcoz of a new project.
She also orders mayank that he hv 2 take nupur 4 pagh-phere to her home 2day n mayank ws nt able 2 say no 2 her mom

They were in car. Nupur is siting beside mayank trying 2 talk with mayank bt he wasn't intrested 2 talk 2 her... He ir driving in a fast speed n nupur is getting scared.finaly they reached 2 nupur's parents home. Nupur come out from car n ask mayank also if he cn come along with her so dat her parents get some satisfaction bt mayank again scolds her n ask 2 go alone. After nupur leaves mayank realize that he must also bcoz respect mr n mrs bhushan alot so he decides 2 go in 4 them.
When nups enter in home he watch that sajan is already there n gunjan is geting alot of scoldings from their father she ws nt able 2 bear that n reveals all d truth in front of their parents how she forced gunjan 2 back off from this mariage. Mayank overheard this as he ws standing on door n boiling with anger he left from there, n no1 noticed him. When truth came out nupur's father broke all relation from nupur n asked her 2 get out from house. 4 him his one daughter ws dead n d doors of their house r always close 4 her. Nupur's mom, gunjan n samrat tried there bst 2 make him understand bt he is nt ready 2 forgive her at any cost. Nupur also asked sory crying badly siting on her knees bt no use finaly she left from there.
On d other hand mayanks anger ws on hights. He ws drinking in bar n contently thinking hw 2 take revenge from nupur n finaly he decided something.

Mayur bedroom
Nupur hd came back. Mayanks mom also left 4 new yolk...she ws alone n very broken. Mayank came back at 10 pm.
M. Enters in d room n watch out nupur...she ws looking weak so mayank asks 'did u hd food'...nups ws quite surprise at this question bt she kept silent n says 'no'
Mayank asks a servant to bring dinner in d room. Servant do as he says. Mayank take a plate of food n go near 2 nupur n says
M. Ye lo nupur kuch kha lo otherwise weak ho jaoge...nups ws nt beleiving that mayank is actuly talking so peacefuly with her then he continues.
Dekho nupur kl raat main bohat gusse mae tha islea kuch zayada hi bol diya. I m realy sory 4 that...he makes her believe that he is actualy feeling sory n makes her eat n they both hv dinner. After that mayank says
M. Cn we start our relationship from a new beg nupur. At this nups hugs mayu n says 'yes'
Mayank thinking with a devil smile 'bohat shok chadha tha na mare wife banane ka. I promise nupur tumhe apne wife zaroor banauga. Tumhare lif ko heaven banauga or fir usse hell mae convert karuga...i promise u that nupur...i promise

Next morning nups is thinking usse apne new lif ki starting kisi jhoot k sahare nhi karne chahea so she decides to tell every thing 2 mayank. Bt hw she thinks. Sudendy she get an idea she takes a pen n a paper from her purse writes all d truth dere n puts it in mayanks fav novel. Then she ask mayank 2 do watch out a letter she put in d novel. Mayank go n watch out d letter in witch what qualities nups want in his husband ws writen. Mayank read it with disbelive. Actualy in hurry nups 4got 2 see on d pg she is writing truth on its back also something is writen. It ws nothing bt jst a game pg that nupur hd played with her frds that qualties she wishes 2 hv in his husband. Mayank didn't read what ws writen other side of pg n kept that in d same novel. After sometime nups asked ab d letter n mayank said that 'don't wory i hv decided 2 except u d this decision will never charge. Nups get happy that mayu is ready 2 except her aftr knowing truth also n she hugs him.

Mayur n sajan lif ws going normal. They started knowing each other, they started fighting n joking with each other on small small issue n a new bond started b/w them.
Samrat started fliting with gunjan n gunjan also used 2 lik this. She started liking him or we cn say she started loving him.
On d other hand nupur ws living in d world of her dreams where mayank truly loves him lik anything. Mayur n sajan 4geting all d diffrences again started their new frdship n with a blink of eye two weaks passed.

Mayur bedroom
Mayank hugs nupur from back n says
M. Hi jaan...
N. Kya baat hai janab ka mood bohat accha hai
M. Baat hi ase hai..
N. Kyun.,kya baat hai?
M. I hv taken 2 weaks holiday from my wory.
N. Holidays... Bt kyun?
M. Oho mrs sharma hmare honymoon k lea or kis lea...at this nupur cheaks got red n she started blushing
N. Chudo na mayank...says trying 2 relief herself from mayanks arms as she don't want 2 show her red cheaks 2 him.
M. Aray where r 2 going i need ur signature on some paprs
M. On Our marriage certificates n on some documents for applying vica. Aftrall unhe proof bhi tho dena hai na that u r mrs. Sharma
N. Kha hai papers?
M. Here...says passing 2 her...then again he holds her from back. His hands r on her tomy holding very tightly, his lips on her neck continuesly kissing. Nupurs heart beats were increasing. She in nt able 2 concentrate on papers. Then he says 'wase tumhe pta hai na honymoon pr kya karte hai..'. Nups blush more then he adds 'nhi pta tho i cn also giv u a small demo''..
Nups hits him playfuly n says 'koi zaroorat nhi hai' n sings all paprs hurryly n runs from there n mayank shows a clever smile while holding that paprs.

Sajan house
G. Aa gay tum samrat ?
S. Yes chashmish... Kya baat hai tum bohat kush ho?
G. Ha samrat di or mayank honeymoon pr ja rhe hai. Aaj hi unse baat hoe wo kl hi london ja rhe hai weaks lea.
S. Realy that means mayank ne ye relation except kr lea hai...thats great na
G. Ha...
S. Hey i got an idea kyun na hum bhi honeymoon pr chale...
G. Kya? Says blushingly
S. I mean if u dont mind
G. Ofcourne nt samrat...kha le ja rahe ho? Smilingly
S. Kahi foreign tho nhi le ja sakta...so lets go 2 Manali...what say?
G. Great...

Mayur n sajan next days goes out of mumbai 2wards her destinations


I 'll edit later
Edited by arjunkidiwani - 14 years ago
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very very nice update.............
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awesome update dear!

continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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