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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
maan was so rude 😡........... poor geet 😭....... thanks for PM n update😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Episode 4

Geet standing there crying. Maan looking at her.

Maan: Why are u crying? Did u find the truth bitter?

Geet: if it was the truth,then I would have felt bad. But im just thinking why I tried to help someone as arrogant as u.I had ur notes from yesterday,I came to return them.I thought you'd need them. BTW,You really need to learn about understanding people because what u think is all wrong.

(SHE WALKS OFF)

Maan: What have you done, Maan? You shouted at her for no reason.

Scene Change.Geet in girls toilets crying.

Geet: What does he think of himself? That he'll keep saying anything and I'll stand there quietly and listen to it? No MSK, Geet Handa is not like that. She knows how to fight and she will. But why does he act like that in front of me? When he turned around and saw me, I'm sure I saw anger in his eyes. Why does he hate me? What have I done?

(THE BELL RINGS,SHE LEAVES)

Scene Change.Geet walking With Annie.

Annie: Where were u this morning? U didn't come to form?

Geet: That' I didn't feel well.

Annie:your'e better now though?

Geet:Yes

Annie: that's good!

(GEET IS LOST IN THOUGHTS OF THE MORNING AND HER ENCOUNTER WITH MAAN)

Annie: Geet! Geet!

Geet:Huh?

Annie: You're not hiding anything from me are you? You do know you can tell me anything. I consider u my sister.

Geet: What will I hide from u?

GEET SELF THOUGHT: I'm sorry Annie, but I'll have to sort this out myself.

(THEY CONTINUE WALKING, MAAN APPEARS, CALLS GEET,GEET IGNORES HIM)

Maan: How do I sort out my mistake? She doesn't even listen to me.I I had controlled my anger,I wouldn't have this problem today. But I will make this right and that's MSK's Promise.

Scene Change.Geet in form.

GEET SELF THOUGHT: Huh! What did he think,he'd call me and I'd go running to him? No,I wont do anything like that.

(MAAN WALKS IN,GLANCES AT GEET)

MAAN SELF THOUGHT: Maan,nows your chance! Forget your ego for once and just apologise.

(HE WALKS UP TO HER DESK)

Maan:Ermm'That'.I '.-

GEET SELF THOUGHT:Looks like hes come to apologise.Afterall,he realised his mistake,didn't he?

Maan:I'. I want to sit here.

Geet:What?

MAAN SELF THOUGHT:What have u done,Maan?

Maan: Are u deaf? I want to sit here.So move.

Geet:Excuse me.Are you blind? Im sitting here.

Maan: So? Go sit somewhere else.

Geet: And why should I do that?

Maan: Because I said so.

Geet: You know,u have a big misunderstanding of the way the world works.Everything cant happen the way u want.

Maan: Really? Because that's what happened so far in my life.

Geet:Really? Then,today you are going to get a big shock because I'm not going to move from here.Im staying here.

Maan: Ure not going to move? Youre going against MSK?

Geet: Yes,Im going against MSK.What will u do?

(MAAN SHOCKED,STARING AT HER)

END

Please Comment😊

Part 5
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
awsome update..supreb.
love the last convo..
do continue plz.
thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: shah10

awsome update..supreb.

love the last convo..
do continue plz.
thx.

Thank You😊
Episode 5 Should be on 2moro😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
uff ... tauba hai ye MSK ki to ... ye bhai sahab sorry kehnay gaye thay magar itnaaaaa bara attitude jo hai ... arrgh...

loved the way Geet backfired ... yehi sudharay ki is dusht danav ko 😆

thanks for the awesome update hun!

continue soon

love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
awesome update... keep up d good wrk huni!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mchopra

Thst gonna be fun..hehe

Oh Yes,its going to be VERY fun😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Hahaha...nice one...a tit-for-tat to Maan...he should know the taste of his own medicine some day...I loved the way Geet stood her ground....good update Sara...and its shocking to know u r 14....kids these days...I 'm finding all the kids on IF alone...some is 12,some is 14 n some is 15....At 24,I'm feeling rather old now😆....nice name,Sara 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Hi Sara!! =D just read your FF and i just love it!! Can u please add me to your pm list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

awesome updates

pls pm me ur next part

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