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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank You😊
And i will add u all😊
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HI ADD ME TO YOUR PM LIST

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loved it.....could u plz make a index so it would be easier to find where u have updated...plz update soon...
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nice concept
continue soon................will be waiting for the pm.................
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Originally posted by: --ANGEL--

loved it.....could u plz make a index so it would be easier to find where u have updated...plz update soon...

How do i do that?😊
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Episode 3

I was so relieved to be home.It had been a very tiring day and I just wanted to spend sometime on my own thinking about it.But how could that happen? Just as I was about to creep upstairs,Mum stopped me.

Mum:Beta,how was your day? Come sit,tell us all about it.we were all waiting for you.

Geet:Mum,im tired!

Mum:geet!

Geet:Fine.it was ok,I suppose.I made a best friend,anwesha.But there were also some people who don't seem to like me.

(SHE IS LOST IN HER THOUGHTS,THINKING ABOUT MAAN'S BEHAVIOUR)

Mum:Don't worry,everything will be fine.Now go rest.I'll go tell everyone else.

(SHE KISSES HER FOREHEAD)

Geet goes upstairs to her room and sits on her bed.

She gets out her books and starts doing her chemistry homework.Trapped in one of the pages is Maan's notes.She picks it up.

Geet:How did this get here?

She remembers her and Maan working together.

Geet:He must have left it by mistake. I should give it to him but im too scared to go infront of him.Babaji,What sort of problem is this?I don't know why I feel I read in his eyes that he wants me to stay away from him.What to do? No,I must give it to him.I'll do it Tomorrow.

Scene Change.Geet walking in college.

Geet:Where is he?

Anwesha Comes.

Annie: Who are u looking for?

Geet:That'Maan left papers in my book.I need to give it to him.

Annie:Oh,I'll help u.

Geet:No,u go to form,I'll meet u there.

Annie:Ok

She Leaves.

Geet gets a text.She is looking down at it and Maan passes by her.She looks back up.

Geet:Why did I just feel as if Maan went past?

(SHE TURNS AROUND AND SEES HIM)

Geet:Maan! Wait!

(MAAN STOPS AND LOOKS AROUND.HE SEES GEET AND ANGER FLASHES ACROSS HIS FACE.)

Maan:What is it? Why do u always look for excuses to talk to me?I'm not interested in you,Understand? First,u sit in my seat so I'd have to tell u to move and then u deliberately fell so I'd have to catch u. And now this.Other guys might be interested in u but I'm not.Understood?

(GEET STANDING THERE CRYING)

END

Please comment and tell me ur thoughts.Hope u liked it.😊😊

Part 4
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maaaaannnn 😡 ye kya kiya bechari ka dil torr diya 😭

nice update hun!

continue soon

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Originally posted by: tere_liye_10

How do i do that?😊


keep editing ur first post ... where u have written the summary .. whenever u update just add the chapter number and page number on it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb updates... interesting storyline... plz add me to yr pm list...

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