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Posted: 14 years ago
what has geet chosen to wear as such......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was awesome...want to know what geet has chosen...update soon
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part 42
nice part.................wonder what Geet has chosen...............cont soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part........but me wondering wat geet cud hav chosen..........continue soon.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
i luvd ur ff..........waiting 4 next...........
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Its very unfair now only thing can be done is to wait wait untill the next update........besides....nice one......Please updatde sooon
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😳You'll have to wait till 2moro😆
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I am going to be changing my writing style.Pls tell me what you think of it.Sorry for the delay.

Part 43

A LEAP HAS HAPPENED.IT IS NOW 2 DAYS FROM THE WEDDING AND THE MUSICAL CEREMONY IS TONIGHT.GEET SLEEPING.

Meera:Geet!!! Wake up!!

I rolled over moaning.Urggghh!!! Why couldn't she leave me alone and let me sleep,idiot? Not that I don't like her.Dont get me wrong,I love her.Shes amazing.But very annoying!!!

Geet:Meera,Let me sleep.

Meera:Are you stupid? Do you know whats happening today?

I knew it.Shed probably got some stupid idea in her head in the night and now she wanted to do it.And I knew exactly what day it was,The day of the Sangeet.so her idea would revolve around turning me into some kind of Barbie.But I wasn't having it!! No way!!! Not after what shed made me go through these past 8 days,Never!!! Just the thought of it made me wince.

IT GOES INTO FB MODE.VOICEOVERS ARE DONE BY GEET.

1ST DAY.

The embarrassment of her catching me and Maan together in that hallway.Urgghhh!!! Then her blabbing it out.

2nd Day

Her teasing me about my family plans,Infront of him!!

3rd day

Our so called shopping trip.Where she bought me night gowns and wanted to take me into a Ann Summers Store😳

4th day

Her and Maan discussing ways to get me loosened up.Her idea was just'

5th Day

Practise for the Sangeet.Her song choice was OTT.Very!!! She has Problems!!!

6th and 7th Day

Hmmm'.Nothing too bad.I suppose.

And today,Well God Knows!!!!

Someone was Tapping me,I was sure!! But I was in my dream world and didn't care.Hmmmm'.Only 2 days left.I don't know why,Im really excited for the wedding.Even though its nothing big but still.Knowing In a few days,I'll be his its'. Hmmmm'. Wait a minute.Why am I dripping Wet?I woke up with a shock and saw meera standing over me.

Geet:God Meera!!!

Meera:Finally,The bride is awake.We need to go the parlour.

Geet:We are not going anywhere.YOU can!

Meera:please!!!

Geet:After everything? No way?

Meera:Urghhh!!! Fine!!!!

It felt so good to finally get my own way.It had been a long time since that happened.Somewhere in the process of falling in love with Maan,I had lost that part of me.The stubborn Geet had gone.And I wasn't liking it.But thinking about Maan just made me more nervous.God,I was missing him so much!!! When will tonight come? I mean I know he HAD to go but still'Couldn't he have seen his cousins kid some othertime? Not now? The distances were killing me,literally.I longed for him,To have his muscular arms wrapped around me and to be able to breathe in his heavenly Scent.To just go into another world hugging him'Well,perhaps a bit more than hugging.Just maybe.I lose it when I talk about him,Seriously!!!

Meera:Youre thinking about Maan,right?

Was it that obvious on my face? There was really no point in lying but still,I would try.It would be too bad to admit it.

Geet:No,I was just thinking about'ermmm'My outfit.

Meera:Youre still wearing that on? Youre making a BIG mistake!!! I mean,I'd love it but u wont.I know.

Geet:Oh Shut Up!!!

Oh Shit!!! Meera looked really hurt.But to be honest I was tired of everyone going on about my wedding outfit and how I wont like it cos I've never worn something like that on before.But the truth was,Ive never seen it myself.That day,I just pointed at a random outfit and didn't even look.Oops!! And now,I was thinking I'd made a big mistake!!! Now,I had to figure out how to solve it!!!

END

Pls tell me what you think of this writing style.Please Comment.😳😆

BTW,AN ANN SUMMERS STORE IS A PLACE WHERE U CAN GET SEXTOYS ETC...FROM😳
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it but y is geet so fussy over her marriage only
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poor geet n her confusion..😆😆😆😆 nice one.. continue soon

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