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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 35

MAAN WAKES UP.ITS 4 OCLOCK

Maan:Geet must still be asleep.Now who do I talk to? Im bored.I got it.

HE GETS UP AND LEAVES.HE ARRIVES IN GEETS ROOM AND CREEPS IN.HE GOES AND SITS NEXT TO HER ON THE BED AND STARES AT HER.

Maan:Im so lucky,I got such a beautiful fairy as my life partner.

HE STROKES HER FACE AND BRUSHES STRANDS OF HAIR OFF HER FACE.GEET MOVES AND HOLDS HIS HAND AND SLEEPS ON IT.MAAN PUTS HIS HEAD ON HER ARM AND CLOSES HIS EYES.HE GOES TO SLEEP.

SCENE CHANGE.GEET WAKES UP,ITS 9 O CLOCK.SHE STRETCHES AND SEES MAAN THERE.SHES CONFUSED.

Geet:Maan? When did he come? Oh god,what if meera sees him? She'll never let me forget it.What do I do now?

SHE LOOKS AT MEERA SLEEPING.

Geet:It looks like shes sleeping,maybe by then he'll be awake.No,no I'll wake him.

SHE REACHES HER HAND OUT TO SHAKE HIM BUT STOPS.

Geet:No,he looks so cute when he sleeps.How can I wake him?Ill leave him.

SHE SMILES AT HIM.

Uncle:Geet!!! Geet,wake up!!!

Geet:Oh god,wat do I do now?

UNCLE STARTS COMING UPSTAIRS.

Uncle:Geet!!!

GEET LOOKS AROUND IN PANIC.SHE GETS THE BLANKET AND COVERS HIM WITH IT.UNCLE COMES IN AND SEES HER CVERING HER SOMETHING.

Uncle:Geet,wat are u hiding?

Geet:Hiding? Nothing.Wat wud I hide?

Uncle:Show me.

Geet:N…Noo.

GEET ST:OH GOD,WHAT DO I DO NOW?

Geet:That…No,Its Meeras… Private stuff…Girls stuff u know.I didn't want her getting embarrassed so..

Uncle:Meeras so lucky she has u.But she should look after these things herself,youre not going to be here forever.Ok,ur mum called so I came to call u.Ring her later,Ok?

Geet:ok

HE WALKS OVER MAANS HIDDEN BODY.GEET WINCES.

Uncle:This is so hard.What has she got there?

HE LEAVES.

Geet:Pheww!!

SHE RUNS OVER TO MAAN WHO IS WIMPERING.SHE STARTS KISSING HIM EVERYWHERE.

Geet:Are you ok? Youre not badly hurt are u? Why did u even come here? Wheres it hurting?

SHE STARTS KISSING HIM AGAIN.MAAN PULLS HER ON TOP OF HIM.

Maan:You care about me so much? You cant bear to see me in pain for even a second can you? But don't worry,im fine.The joy of knowing how much you love me outdoes the pain of being stepped on.

GEET HAS TEARS IN HER EYES.

Geet:I cant bear to see u hurt,it feels as if im hurt not you.I love u more than my life.More than anyone else in the world.I never believed that love can happen at first sight,that love is the biggest relation in the world,bigger than every relation.But now I do.Because of u,Just for you.

SHE SMILES TEARFULLY.

Precap:Maan-Geet Kiss.😳

😳Ooh La Laa!!!😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
ooohhhhh.....the precap sounds interesting...plz update soon....loved geet hiding maan....
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update ..cont soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Pyaar Ka Woh Pehla Ehsaas Is a love story with a difference.It isn't a classic Cinderella story where theres a happy ending,there might be but there might not be,That will be decided later.Its a story about how love hurts,The pain you have to go through and the sacrifices you have to give to get your love.Its about realising that true love can never be forgotten and love isn't just about getting,its about sacrificing aswell.Its about Realising that yes love is magical but it can also be the most torturous feeling in the world when you don't get it.Every story has 2 sides and I would like to explore the less familiar,more painful side of it It will be explored through the lives of Geet-Maan-Annie.3 completely different people with different expectations from their life.What will happen when their worlds collide? Can worlds of Regret,Anger and Hope come together?.Thanks for all the support so far.😆

Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow lovely update... cant wait for the kiss..😉😉. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
the last dialogue of geet was soooo cuute!! i just love it!
thx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice n funny part.............uncle also has great timiings...........continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!!! really loved it!!! loved geet's concern 4 maan!!! they truly love each otha!!! interesting precap!!! plz update it as fast as u can!!!
keep up d good wrk!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks for all the comments😊

Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear......is geet married before to dev??

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