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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: .PINK.
Liaba u dunno how happy I am
dat u finally updated

when I saw ur pm I waz like "YAYYYY"

I love this FF tonzz n tonzzz

ok so this part waz aMaZiNg

so Mayu tookNupur to some place

which she loved

n then they had fun there

danced

and then wat in wat just happened??

Mayu bringzz bangles n sindoor for her

n she throwzzz it??

hailaa kya se kya hogaya??

I thought she liked him before

when they both sed to each other

I love u

anywayzz this part waz gr8

do continue it soon :)

❤️Linu

Aww... Thank you soo much... I'm glad u liked the update... 😳

Well the part is divided in two parts. a present and past... the part in italic was supposed to be the past...I thought it would be clear... well I'll making a bit clear next time...

To know what happened keep reading.. 😉 I'll update soon...

And thank u for the lovely comment...🤗

-Laiba

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: sizzlingsehr
heyyy laiba
awesum update
buts its soo confusing
why this sad song at the end
who is it?????
lotss of confusion😆

give fasdt the solution yrrr

btw lovely update
loved ur ffs
nd song was 👏

Sehr... Thanksss.. 😳

I know, i know... 😆

It's the Dooriyan between them... 😛 Okay i didn't tell anyone else i'm telling u...

it's...

A man...😲 🤣

Well u soon get to know soon.. 😛

thanks again...

I'm glad u liked it, was so confused about the song...

Thanks for the lovely comment... 😳

-Laiba

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Oops sweet past but senti present
Nups wont rest in peace until she gets teh answers she want

Update soon

Nicely writen

Yes... a very sweet past, and the present is bitter some because of the past and some in the present...

Well she just wants some things cleared. some unanswered questions...

Thank you... 😳

& I'll update soon

-Laiba

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: vampire_girl
hey laiba🤗
glad to see your update...i was actually waiting for your update...😳
it was awesome...you are an awesome writer👏
you surely know how to increase the curiosity ...😆
ok let me guess..its a bad habit of mine but still i would like to guess😆

maybe nupur loved someone else and got married with mayank forcefully
aww....pata nahi meri guessing ki addat kab jayegi, par aaj tak kabhi meri guessing sahi nahi hui🤣
hopw is bar ho jaye😆

but the update was really awesome
and the song was just so nice😊
it was perfect
continue soon

love
tasfia

Tasfia... 🤗 aww... u were actually waiting...

Thank u soo much... 🤗

Well what can i say many guessed like you, all i can reveal for now...

Yes she loved someone..

& Yes she got married

Yes there is a Mayank in the story....

So yes partially u were right... 😆

I'm glad u liked it, was so confused of the song selection...

Thank u for the lovely comment...

.Laiba

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: shafyyy

hy..

fantastic update..

mindblowing...

Thankss... glad u liked it... 😳

Originally posted by: ...Mitali...
great update 😛 hey how do u write so well😉

Thanks... I'm happy u liked it... 😳

I don't know, i read a lot of "well written" ffs and they really inspiring and you can learn a lot...

I have my 3 favorite writers which ffs i read regualry...Nd i learn a lot from reading these...

Neela's (sharneel) My all, all time fav writer...

Sajjal... (-Sajjal-) Dosen't need words,,,

& Kinza..(-Mehak). what can you say, jitna kaho gaye utna he kam...

By reading ur writing skills do improve... 😳

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma
wow laiba the storyz gettin really interesting!
awesome!!

do cont soon n thnx fr d pm😳

Thankss...glad u liked it... 😳

I willl soon...

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
nice update
add me in ur pm list

Thanks... glad u liked it... 😳

& i will

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali
well dont have any idea who's her husband. i wish its mayank and slowly she accepts him.

It could be him or anyone else... well what the story seems like it's not at all like it... but to find out read on... 😳

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
intreseting ...i didnt get nupurs reaction....but the flashbacks were very sweet

The past is always sweet... Well its confusing, and u will get it slowly... 😳

-Laiba

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-
hey Laiba..
Congos 4 ur new ff..🥳

i'm sorry .. i cudnt read ur updates earlier...

nups ws forcefully married 2 mayu..

hmm... interesting...😳

luvd it...

Thanks...

No problem, read when u can...

Well she got married to someone... Forcefully can't be the exact word but something like it...

I'm glad u liked it... 😃

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-
oh god... part 2 made me more confused...😕😆
who's d man.. Nups luvd & whom she's married 2?😕

Laiba ji... jaldi update kejiye..

i just cant wait 4 mystery 2 unfold..😆

Confusion is my forte.. 😆

There 2 men... thats what i can say....

Okay Supriya Jee I will soon... 😆😛

It will soon, i don't want this ff to be too dragged maybe 10-12 parts only...depends on the pace...

-Laiba

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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Hi Laiba congorats ur fist FF
i just fond ur FF 2night
n it's interesting part 1 was amazing n part 2 olso was lovely
n nups n her man were romantic the dance n everything
but bit confussing 😕 plzz add me ur pm list i wouldlove to read more

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: RUBA-SIDDIQUI
awesome part
liked it
continue soon
thnx 4 thnx

Thanks... I'm glad u liked it...😳

I will cont. soon...

Originally posted by: mahakmev
amazing

Thanks...😳

Originally posted by: Alisha-MJHT
Hi Laiba
I just read the first 2 parts - awesome FF!!
Can't wait to read more
Please continue soon and please add me to your pm list

Thank you... I'm glad u like it.. 😳

I will add u, and update soon...

-Laiba

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!

I will update soon, next week or sooner... 😳

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-
reserved

Will be waiting for ur comment... 😳

-Laiba

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: AmyArTiMayUr
Okay im sooo sorry for the late reply...but at least im not reserving and then not unreserving also😆😆 so just to remind you, you have to edit your reserves on my writing😆😆

The update....wow....it was sooo beautifully described...esp the flashback seemed so beautiful😃😃

Its confusing considering the men are more or less nameless😆😆

I am assuming she loved someone else and then was forced to marry Mayank or something???😕😕

Whatever...its real interesting so plz plz plz update soon😃😃

*Looks away* *Trying to Ignore the first line* 😆

It's okay... well for me it is.... 😆 No, i did actually read the first part and i edited my comment right?

If not then i'll do it either tomorrow (today) or on sunday pakka...

The past is supoosed to be sweet and romantic... 😳

😆 Don't worry they will get names soon....😛

what is with everyone guessing the same is it so predictable... If so i'm sorry to say it's nothing like that, well in a way maybe but not directly...

She married a human being...I can assure u that... Not an item or "something" as u said...😆

I'll update very very soon.. 😳

Thank u for the lovely comment...😳

and finally the last comment... 🥱

-Laiba