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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

it was such a cute update

i loved AR's convo
it was ausum
loved the way they met
wonder what will happen wen armaan
will come to noe ki he has to protect ridzy only
update sooon
nd thnx fr d pm

thnx dear...

n u'll get to know...

wat will be armi's reaction...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharonyaqoob


hey anu...awsome part..misssing AR even more...do continue soon...thankss alot for the pm...Love,Sharon...!! .

thnx dear...

i also wrote this...coz im missing AR soo much...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

hey

it was an awsome part...

n why do u write that u r a bad writer??

u r an awsome writer dude...

cont the ff soon

aditi

thnx dear...

awww...should i take it as a compliment...😉

well thnx buddy...

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Posted: 14 years ago

NOTE...


a big thank you to all those...

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Thnx alot guys...


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Posted: 14 years ago


Ok guys,...im back wid another part...


PART 5...



Recap: AR meeting...n a basket ball match...





With that both move out from the court n turned towards their different path…wich are about to become one…….as she is the one…whom Armaan is going to protect…….


They both went home…unaware of the fact…that someone was there keeping an eye on them..seeing them together…

Man: hello boss..yes she was playing wid kids..when one guy came there a bit bickered wid her..played n left then..

Boss: ok…get the info abt the boy…n keep an eye on her…I don't want any problem…did u get that… 'a bit angered'

Man: yes boss…

Armaan went home..thinking about Ridhimaa all the tym….n entered the room.. n saw Atul already up…n rubbing his eyes..to get rid of the sleep wich was still in his eyes..

Armaan: hey gud morning bhai..aacha hua aap uth gaye,…chaliye uth jaye..mein fresh ho ke breakfast banata hoon…

Atul: hmm…'still lazing not wanna get up…as he slept late..thinking abt the gal he saw yesterday… 'Anjali'

Armaan went for shower…n when he came back..Atul was having his laptop on..n doing something..

Armaan: bhai..go n fresh up na,….we'll be late otherwise…mein breakfast banae jar aha hoon..

'well they r FBI officers…always on one or the other mission..cant rely on hotel food or take aways only na…so they knew how to make food..n set the days..that who will make the breakfast…'

Bhaiii…get up…………. 'now he was slightly getting irritated……..

He turned to go..when he heard the voice…. 'BABU' n he turned to see where it came from…its his mom n dad voice…but they r not here..nor the cell fone rang..where the hell the voice came from,…he was confused…n looking around when Atul called him…

Atul: Babu idhar…….. 'he ppointed towards the Lappy…'

N their they were…they were connected through skype……

Armaan: mom dad……….'he was having the big dimple smile…'

Kash: gud morning bacha's…kaise ho aap dono……….

Armaan: we r fine mom…aap dono kaise ho…missing u guys already…

Atul: me to……..

Sujal: awww..mele bache..we r missing u too…so wats going…tum logon ka kaam kaisa chal raha hai….

Armaan: ek dum mast dad ….

Atul: slaaped on the back of Armaan's head… oye idiot..pori detail mangi hai…

Armaan: oops..sorry..'bitting his tounge…'

Atul: dad…hum Sanjeevani gaye thae..aur sab se mile…

Armaan: aur pata hai..ek pagal mere peeche lag gaye…pata nahin kis ne usey doctor bana diya…use tu mental ward mein hona chahiye tha..

Hearing him all laughed loud….n teased him,,…of being liked by a doctor in disguise also…

Atul: ok coming back to the point…

Kash: arey tum log kya kaam ko le ke baith gaye..

Sujal: kashish its important u know na… 'n she nodded her head in agreement..'

Armaan: dad..hum wahan gaye thae..sab se mile…bas who Ms. Gupta's se hum nahin mil pae…waise tu unka ghar yahan se dekhta hai…but it's the side..tu agar koi garden mein ho,…tu hi nazar ayega warna nahin..

Atul: dad hum ne do officers ko bhiunke ghar ke samne raat ko security dene ke liye appoint lkar diya hai….they'll always be there in nite..aur morning mein hum unke saath hi rahein gae..

Armaan: dad I don't know..but I think koi aisa insaan in sab mein shamil hai jo in gupta's ko aur sanjeevani ko bohat ache se janata hai…….

Sujal: ok guys….gr88 job…I knew it ke tum log bohat ache se yeh kaam karo gae..isliye mein ne tum lgon ko yeh case handle karne ko diya..

Acha now u guys have to do one thing…abhi tumhari hospital mein report karne mein tym hai…so u guys go to the head quarters…n report to ur senior officer..

Armaan: goddd…no dad…I don't wanna meet that..mooodi..

Atul: Armaan…he is Abhimanyu modi ok…n he is my very gud friend…

Armaan: haan tu aapka friend hai na…I tu just…don't like him at all…Mr.Attitude..

Kash: but Armaan…uski fianc to tumhare sab se ache friend hai…when all u guys were in Medical school…

Armaan: I know mom…Niki meri best friend hai…but that Mooodi…I don't wanna see his face also..pata nahin aapne aap ko kiya samjhta hai…n that Niki..i don't understand..how she feel in love wid that creep…n now want to get married to him……….This man has really spoiled that gal's mind…..

[Actually they all were together in medical school…Armaan n Nikita were juniors to Atul n Abhimanyu…n the four of them joined FBI…Armaan never liked Abhimanyu..they always have something or the other b/w them..n when Abhi n Niki declared they r in luv…Armaan was the most shocked one…that his best friend luv Abhi……actually no personal grudges..at that tym it was all bcoz of the looks…who get the gal in the college…n who is better in looks…though Abhi always fails in front of Armaan…but still didn't stop taking pangas…n same goes wid Armaan…he get the gal…but never gets to the point where he break her heart…coz he knew….special one..will be special one…so mainly Abhimanyu n Atul r the senior officers where as Armaan n Nikki juniors…..]

Hearing him was fun for all…he just keeps going on n on…

Sujal: ok Armaan..bas…now go…n report to him…he'll help u further in the case…n I don't want any problems b/w u two..did u get that… 'Armaan made bad face…n rolled his eyes..' did u get that Officer Armaan Malik….

Armaan: yes Sir…

Kash: ok chalo ab kaam ki baat choro….get ready warna first day hi late ho jao gae…n try to keep ur records clean in front of Dr.Shashank…warna tum dono tu gae…n told Abhi n Niki also…ok..

Atul: yes mom…ok chalo bye…

Armaan: bye mom…

AA: luv u…

SK: bye..luv u too……

Wid this they got up n got ready to report at the HQ...had breakfast….n zommed out on their car…….to met..Abhimanyu Modi n Nikkita Malhotra..

*in the office*

Armaan n Atul entered the office…n told about their identity…n were now..sitting in Officer Abhimanyu Modi office..waiting for him..as he is in some important meeting…

They heard a voice n turn around to see a beautiful girl dressed in a very causual way…jeans n top…short height…but mind extremely sharp….n voice…really sweet…her nature really caring…she is really charming…n a beauty one die for……..she is Nikkita Malhotra…soon to be Modi…….

Niki: Armaan…Atul…

Armaan: Niki…. 'n hugged her…' kaise hai I missed u sooo much…

Niki: coming out of hug… tum tu rehne hi do..i know kitna miss kiya… hi Atul..hw r u…

Atul: ek dum perfect…. 'Giving her sides hug…'

Niki: coming out of hug…. Ek baar fone tu kiya nahi….missed u.. 'she said making a bad face……..'

Armaan: aawww…I really missed my best friend………. 'again taking her in a hhug…but were separated by someone…'

A man…well build body…sharp features..wid a glasses on……none other than…Mr. Abhimanyu Modi..

Abhi: excuse me…yeh kya ho raha hai…tum log door se baat nahin kar sakte kya..

Niki: Shut up Abhi…ok..he is my best friend,….

Abhi: so wat that doesn't mean u have to hug him always..

Armaan: oye moodi…shut up ok…….

Abhi: wat shut up hann.. 'moving towards Armaan…' don't forget she is my fianc…so stay away samjhe..

Armaan: so u also get to know…n put it in ur tiny brain she is my best friend… 'towering on him…'

Abhi: u…..' he also towered on him…while the other two were looking at them..thinking wats goona happen next……'

Atul: just shut up both of u…hum yahan kaam ke liye aye hain…tum logon ke is fazol ke jhagrah ke liye nahin…so behave ur self guys..

Niki: Abhi..Armaan…get ur seats now…….. 'she shout on them….n they knw…when she shouts…n gets irritated…means..tym for trouble…so they like obident kid took their place n started discussing…'

Abhi: Coming back to work guys…we r working on this case..Ridhimaa n Anjali…daughters of Shashank Gupta n Padma Gupta….someone is behind them…the reason known till now…their wealth n property…the hospital Sanjeevani is on their fathers name..which he will transfer on both the gals name..on their coming b'thday…….mainly Ridhimaa's birthday..

Armaan: Ridhimaa ki hi b'thday pe kyun..

Atul: same as wat im thinking..

Niki: Ridhimaa ki b'thday pe isliye…coz she is he papa's princess..ghar mein choti hai,…tu sab bohat pyaar karte hain…n both the sisters have a difference of few days in their birth days..

Anjali is 7th October n Ridhimaa is 15th October…Anjali is a year elder than Ridhimaa…but both celebrate b'thday on a same day…so that day can be a day of trouble..

Armaan: I don't know but I think someone from Sanjeevani is doing this..

Abhi: even I agree on this point…someone from their family or close relative..

Atul: family mein se thora mushkil hoga…the Gupta's are… Naintara Gupta [Nani], Shashanak Gupta, Anikeet Gupta , Padma Gupta , Anjali gupta n Ridhimaa Gupta…

Anikeet wife has left him…he is a divorcee…wife died few years back…has a son named Amit Gupta…n a daughter in law..Sapna Gupta….but they lived in London…n have no such contacts wid the Gupta's…what happened…why they got divorced…no one knows…….. so I don't guess family mein se koi in sab mein involve hai..

Abhi: but kuch tu hai Atul…someone is there…may be friends..

Niki: waise tu we r working wid them…n I don't guess their friends r involved in this…

Armaan: wat abt that Dr. Rahul…we can suspect on him…

Atul: Armaan…he behaved rudely doesn't make him a suspect…

Abhi: he is rite Armaan…n now guys…we have to work on this case…wid open eyes..ears n mind..this case is really tough….coz who is behind this we don't know..

Whenever there is any problem…immediately report to the HQ…u r having ur guns wid u…carry them wid care…no one get suspicious about u….dont below ur cover at all…under any circumstances…don't do it…they don't know at all that FBI got involved in this…so try to behave as normal as u can….did u get it…..

Niki…try to get close to the gals as much as u can…coz that would be easy for u to protect them..

Armaan: I have appointed the officer for the security at nite…n we have to report chief [Sujal Malik] also…or not now…

Atul: we'll give him all the details related to work…n hw it is progressing..

Abhi: ok guys…here we'll end this meeting now…so all the very best every one…n try to keep eye on all…n get ready to face…Dr.Keerti………

Niki: yes…Dr.Hitler…………

N they all laughed hearing her…saying Dr.Hitler…n making bad face…n soon all left for Sanjeevani..

*Sanjeevani*

Armaan n Atul were on tym…but if they late for a minute…they r gone……Armaan parked the car…n Atul rushed inside..as the car came to halt…Armaan also ran behind him..n he was in so much speed…that didn't saw the person coming from the other side……..n Clash…………

They both bumped into each other……..wid that person under Armaan…….when Armaan opened his eyes to see…who it is…he was shocked to see the gal……she is the same gal he met today in morning……..Basket……..

Ridhimaa had her eyes shut tightly…all she knew she ran fast…as she don't wanna be late n get scolding from Dr.Keerti n then she bumped wid someone really hard…n the next moment she was on the floor…wid that person on her……….as the words registered she opened her eyes to see..the beautiful oceanic greyish blue eyes..looking into her green almond eyes……..

Armaan was looking at the beauty beneath him...her beautifully shaped face…her nose…her cheeks…her rosy pink lips…n then suddenly she opened her eyes…frowned…..n then looked in his eyes…n got lost…both were oblivious of the world…n wats going on around them…….

Ridhimaa was looking in his eyes…his handsome features…but she know…his eyes were the most standing out…boring into hers……..his hairs coming on his forehead……..she felt the moment of his hands near her cheeks…he was removing the hairs..which were blocking his view…feeling his touch..she felt something burned inside her…or the current passed from her body…..n same was wid Armaan…..

A sudden brake applied somewhere in the parking lot…brought them out of the trance…Ridhimaa looked at him confused…Why he lying on me…n then it clicked…she bumped into him…….Mr.Loser…..

Ridz: excuse mister…well u plzz get up……

Armaan: kya karon mann nahin kar raha…

Ridz: oh hello mister…sab dekh rahe hain..aur tumhein sharam nahin ati…pehle mujh se takrae[bumped] aur phir mujh par hi gir gaye……..

Armaan: hmmm…'thinking' agar chaho tu mujh pe gir jao……..

Ridz: what the ****…oye hello mister…utho..itne mote ho..mein marr jaon gi…….

Armaan: tum ne mujhe mota kaha…

Ridz: kaan kharab hai kya…haan mein ne tumhein mota kaha…ab hatoo…arey hattooo…'she tried pushing him…but he was really heavy to push…'

Armaan: yo Basket……yeh mere muscles hain u know body building…samjhi……aur mein nahin tum moti…..

Ridz: tumne mujhe moti kaha…u dumbo……

Armaan: oye mein tumhein dumbo lagta hoon…miss moti…….

Ridz: tumne phir mujhe moti kaha…

Armaan: haan kaha tu……..kya kar lo gi... waise Basket…tum yahan ilaaj [treatment] ke liye aye ho…

Ridz: treatment kis cheez ka……

Armaan: arey apni ankhoon ka….dont worry im sure…yahan tumhara treatment ache se hoga……

Hearing this made her angry n furious…she caught him off guard..n pushed him really hard…..n he fell on the floor……she dusted her clothes…looked once again towards him wid anger in his eyes…….n left saying Loser….n many other curses for him..

Where as Armaan left laughing…seeing her getting sooo furious……..when he got up n dusted his clothes…his eyes went on something on floor…he picked it up…….it was a bracelet…….wid R initial..

N he was pretty sure…it belonged to Ridhimaa…he kept it in his pocket…n went to report for his duty….

On the other side…Atul went to the locker room…introduced himself wid everyone…Rahul..Muski…Niki…all become his friends…where as Anjali gave him a little attitude…..

N he felt dejected…he thought he'll impress her…by giving her a rose plant named Sonali….but it didn't work…where as all the others…accepted his lily plants……his Rita..Meena…n Aditi……….his lil babies…….

Hearing the announcement they all went to the nurse station..where Dr.Keerti will give them their duties…Atul looked towards the door…to see where Armaan is left…he was rite behind him…n then he saw..a gal running towards them…as fast as she can….n Armaan also after her………..

Dr.Keerti: gud morning doctors…jaisa ke mein ne aap sab ko bataya tha..aaj se humein tu naye[new] interns join karein gae…here they are..

Dr.Atul Malik…n Dr. Armaan Malik….so all of u introduce urself plzz…

Rahul: hi im Dr. Rahul Garewal..

Anji: hi im Dr. Anjali Gupta… 'hearing her name..Atul n Armaan looked at each other..'

Muski: Saasriyakal ji,…oh ji mein hoon..Dr.Muskaan Chadda…. 'Armaan n Atul..shared a look again…Atul impressed n teasing towards Armaan..n he irritated…'

Niki: Dr. Nikita Malhotra…

Abhi: Dr. Abhimanyu Modi… 'ur senior doctor…'

Ridz: Dr. Ridhimaa Gupta……. 'seeing her Armaan eyes popped out…so she is the gal…he is going to protect…it will be fun…n looked wid a smirk on his face towards Ridz…who gave him an annoyed look…'

Dr.Keerti: ok doctors so ur duties are..

Dr. Nikita…aap Dr. Abhimanyu ko assist karengi ek surgery mein…

Dr. Rahul…AIDS ward…

Dr.Muskaan….kids ward…

Dr. Anjali n Dr. Atul…Path lab…..

Dr.Ridhimaa n Dr. Armaan….General ward..

Aur agar kisi ne..koi bhi ghalti ki…tu uski punishment…Rectal exams…….Am I clear………..

All: yes mam….

But Ridz was in shock………duty wid this loser…where as Armaan smiled………..get ready for the fun Dr.Basket…………n gave her a cute n sweet innocent look…which made her agitated……n she left cursing again…but Dr.Keerti this tym…for giving duty wid Mr.Arrogant……..



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Posted: 14 years ago
yay im first! and i beat pms! yay!

anyways part was super AMAZINGGG

LOVED ITT

cont soon pleasee
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey anumeha

great part dear...

aww... atul being a fbi agent is still a plant freak.. and anjie giving attitude... aww... just like old times...

n abhi jealous of armaan... too good yaar...,.

n nikki is so cute...

n AR to yaar ultimate hai... kahin par bhi kaise bhi shuru ho jaate hai!!! but i think thats why we love them so much...

love

aditi

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey love the part
it was awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey anumeha it was an ausum update
armaan and abhi fighting like kids lol
the small yet cute moment b/w AR was superb
so finally armaan knows whom he hs to protect
lol AR hv duty togther that wud be fun
update super soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey buddy hi
osum par
tarman and riddhima nad their fights
then abhi and arman
nice update
thankx for the pm
continuee soon
lov maria

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