TILL ETERNITY [MAANEET FF] PART 10 PG 42 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Tishuu

roops

nyc going yaar
but i am soooooo confused now
soch soch ke dimaag ghum raha hai

aree tishuu isi liye tho kal dimaag ghom gaya tha
patha nahi chal raha tha kese likho
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Sounds like u gonna make me cry....... Maan had a frnd her name was geet ryt nd now he named her daughter geet..... Nd geet is already dead???????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
sounds interesting pm me when ever u update
thnx 4 pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
thats awsome one yaar..who is that her ???
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
awesome, beautiful update. loved it.
it's different and interesting.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

I think you should not

Discontinue this..

lol yeah! continue! loved it!!!

and thanks for the PM!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
PART 2
The scene again comes back to d room where MAAN was telling GEET d story n he started it again-
"Whn I was 5 yr old MOM n DAD came back home with a small beautiful 3 yr old girl who was crying n asking MOM 'aunty whr is MAMA?I want to go to her n sleep in her lap' n starts crying even more loudly n seeing her I ran into my room n came back with a big chocolate n told her he will give it 2 her if she stops crying n becomes his friend.Seeing d chocolate she stopped crying n also became my friend.From tht day there was no looking back n v even shared d same room n bed n she had become my ANGEL n i had become her PRINCE.
In some years ,she had become my best friend n v also used to go to the same school. We never felt d need of another friend as I was her only friend n she was my only frnd.
Then on her 15th bday she got to know d reason y she was brought to KHURANA MANSION n hw in d luv frm MAAN's MOM n DAD n frm MAAN she had completely forgotten about her parents.She got to know the dark truth tht her parents were murdered by her own uncles for theirproperty n MAAN's DAD being her father's best friend had brought her to KHURANA MANSION to save her frm her uncles who were also planning to murder her.Hearing d truth she was completely shattered n started being seperate frm all of them except MAAN.She would often cry on his shoulder n he like always used to console her.
Bt after 3-4 months ,she started to cheer up a bit n started to live her life feeling tht she had my MOM,DAD,DADI n most importantly ME.
Nw she was 17 yrs old n was going to join d same college as me.I had made some frnds of my own bt nvr let it effect our frndship in any way.Then one day a guy named KARAN who was hot n full of attitude joined our college n was her classmate n slowly become her frnd.
I always told her tht he was arrogent bt she told me tht he was really vry sweet n frndly n had helped her many times in class whn MAAN was busy.As I was mostly busy in my studies of FINAL YEAR so slowly she n KARAN started becoming best frnds n she started spending more time with him n nt with me.I had started feeling jealous of KARAN as I MAAN SINGH KHURANA used to luv her frm whn i started to knw d meaning of luv.
As I was jealous of KARAN on her 18th bday party i proposed her-
"WHN I WAS ALONE,
U CAME INTO MY LIFE FILLED IT WITH LUV N HAPPINESS,
WHN MOM USED TO SCOLD ME,
U ALWAYS TRIED TO SAVE ME FRM HER SCOLDINGS,
WHN DAD DIDNT GIVE ME ENOUGH MONEY TO SPEND,
U USED TO GIVE ME UR POCKET MONEY,
WHN EVER I WAS HAPPY,
U WERE D FIRST PERSON I USED TO SHARE IT WITH,
EVEN WHN I WAS SAD,
U WERE D ONE WHO HELPED ME GET OVER IT,
U WERE MY BEST FRND,
N ALWAYS WILL B,
UR D ONE WHO REMEMBERS,
THT I DNT LIKE FOOD WHICH IS SPICY,
UR D ONE WHO ON SUNDAY,
PREPARES MY FAV LUNCH FOR ME,
I WISH U WILL DO THT FOR ME ALL MY LIFE,
BT AS A WIFE N NT AS A BEST FRND,
I LUV U SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH,
WILL U MARRY ME?????"
GEET stared at MAAN with a shocked face n said " DAD was it really u .You proposed her soooooo romantically "

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HER REPLY
P.S.- IM NT SO GUD AT WRITING POEMS SO TRIED WRITING IT HOPE U LIKE IT


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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
loved the proposal part of maan..........................
wait geet calling maan dad................wats the name of the gal he proposed................
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
wow maan proposed her ??????????
waiting 4 her reply hope she told yes
thnx 4 pm
waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
dad????????????????????????????
geet calling maan her dad??????????????????????????????????????????😲
could u pz continue it soon............................... i mean really soon........................................................
thn who is his wife?????????????

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