SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Continue soon.

Its going great😊

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

nice update ..

cant wait for maan's reactions when he recognizes Geet ...

continue soon hun!

love

Sana

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Again a nice one....now I'm sure Maan will find out abt Geet soon....but how come Rohit found out abt Geet?

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

both parts super awesome cant wait Maan find out about Geet more more more more more plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
sorry i'm too greedy because damn good writer

pls cont soonnnnnnnn

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: goldenball

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You missed it... go thorugh Maan's intro once again.. (1st para).. its from Office people POV.. so no need to believe all what they say..

Hmm...yeah. But I coupled Geet's observation about them smiling at each other...so did not see it differently.

@Part 5....Maan may not recognize her ...but he is being inadvertently drawn to her. Not only during the "oh-so-romantic" rain sequence...but even when she was being hugged by Romeo in canteen. Its the pull that he feels towards her that made stop and stare.

Btw....beautiful rain sequence. Not the run of the mill girl-dancing-in-rain...but a romantic sequence with more deeper connect. Really loved it.👍🏼

Edited by jazzerette - 14 years ago

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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

amazing....i wonder y rohit has come n wat is he gonna do now?????

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: simi91
both parts super awesome cant wait Maan find out about Geet more more more more more plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
sorry i'm too greedy because damn good writer

pls cont soonnnnnnnn

Thanks // I completed 2nd part also today.. as next 2 days being weekends.. i won't get time to write anything....😭.. I am also very eager to bring them nearer..soon.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: zahra15
amazing....i wonder y rohit has come n wat is he gonna do now?????

Suspense.. dear.. have patience...he has a role to play that's why he is back.. but actually surprisingly when I introduced him in 1st episode.. i never thought he will become important character later.

I am very happy to see all of your curosity.

Thanks.

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

great update...........maan is trying hard to remember her...

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Hmm...yeah. But I coupled Geet's observation about them smiling at each other...so did not see it differently.

Yes that mystery I have to build..otherwise how I can keep you hooked.. 😛

@Part 5....Maan may not recognize her ...but he is being inadvertently drawn to her. Not only during the "oh-so-romantic" rain sequence...but even when sh was being hugged by Romeo in canteen. Its the pull that he feels towards her that made stop and stare.

Yes

Btw....beautiful rain sequence. Not the rum of the mill girl-dancing-in-rain...but a romantic sequence with more deeper connect. Really loved it.👍🏼

Thanks..