SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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sona rai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

lovely part waiting for next yaar😃

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Durga

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

awsome one yarr ..loved it ,,,waiting for the next part

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

part 3 was superb..well written
looking forward to see how will u carry the story😊

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manisha shibloll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

nice update...........

does maan remember with whom he was that night?

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

I just now read the 3 parts...very interesting...now I'm curious to know whats in store for both of them.How's Maan going to recognize her and accept her?Pls do continue soon....

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chubzy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

heyya!!!! nice concept plzzz add me

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Cutee999

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

nice update
plz add me also in ur pm list.

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ambbiha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

how come maan didnt remember her

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: doosheeka
nice update...........

does maan remember with whom he was that night?

No.. he was also drunk that night remember...

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

how come maan didnt remember her[/Quote]

Hmm.. itna logical hota toh story kaise develop hoti.. 😭

Maan was also drunk that night.. that's why he doesn't remember clearly.. but as story develops.. you will see his side of story and also how he recollects.. Have patience..dear

Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago