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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Anjali_12

😕OMG !!!!😲What an update!!!It started so romantically & ended so scary!!!Hope Gunjan is safe..This guy does look like nice !!!Hope he doesn't do anything to her...Poor Sammy & Kids😭...Mayank should have more responsible!!!Please continue soon..Can't wait to read more.....

thankss anjalii apii..😛...ummmmmmm........yeh tu mera next udpatee he bataee ga😉 .....hope for the bestt....😃......i try to update soon..😆...thankss😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Awsm updt di.
fantastic,superb.
plz jldi cnt krdena.
luv u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
hey awesome part
cannot wait for the next part
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
edited my rp on pg 11
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
yaar ye kaun bakwaas aadmi hai yaar.....
achha bhi hoga toh bhi gunjan ko dekhke niyat phisal jaayegi..hamari gunjan hai hi itni sexy..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

yaar ye kaun bakwaas aadmi hai yaar.....

achha bhi hoga toh bhi gunjan ko dekhke niyat phisal jaayegi..hamari gunjan hai hi itni sexy..........

hahhaahha....letsssssss seeeeeeeeee kon bqwas admii haii😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

omgggggggggggggg

fab part n scary 2...........

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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

omgggggggggggggg

fab part n scary 2...........

gud to see ur commment thankss😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Part 4
S:chashmsh..tm tekh ho na?khahn ho ?
G.samrat mein tekh hn tm tekh ho na adi aditi?
S:tmhare awaz itni kamp rahe tm tekh ho na btao chashmsh khahn ho tm mein abhe ata
G.samrat mein tekh hn....n she toldz him all...n in mid lght gets of..n. before they continuez cel again get off..
S.dam it..he throw phone away in anger.adi aditi got afraid....samrat relzd..he kneed down n both of them hugs n cried..samrat was unable to do anythng...he silently 2 criezz... He make up himslf son out of his fearz n emotionzz ..
bin terey kya hai jeena...
S.adi aditi...they broke hug..chalo tearz saf karo r ja k change karo gely kapron mein sardi lag jaye ge...
A.mom
S.wo tekh hain..
Ad.wo kb aein ge?
mere dil ki raani tum....
samrat lookz at door imagine gunjan there welcoming them 4 a hug smilng but it was just imagnation.a tear fel 4m his eyez
S.bohat jald.jasy he yeh tofan thamey ga na tab ok jao change kar k ao jaldi..kidz noded.samrat signld maid to help them n also ask to serve diner..
Cut to gunjan.
G.oh god...she was afraid due to darknes.she saw that guy lightng candlezz...that guy oferd her a shawll..as saw her shverng..gunjan was obligd to him..
G.thanks...
Guy.neil...Neil oberie..gunjan gave a faint smile n he 2 smilez back.
N.baat ho gae?
G.han par cut gya phr se
N.merey cel sy try kar lein,he offerd but its havng signal problem....
N.sory signal nahn a rahe
G.its ok mein ny bata dya tha samrat ko
N.acha mein apk lea cofee lata hon
G.nahn itz ok i m f9.....apko phely meri waja sy itni taklef uthane par rahe hai.
N.oh nahn kuch nahn hota wasey bhe musibt mein to har kise k kaam ana chahye
G.thankz.ap k soch bohat ache hai
Neil smild
N.ap behto mein abhe coffee ka kehta hon....
Gunjan smild a bit.as he left she get lost in thoughts of samrat n kidz.
Plz god samrat r adi aditi k hifazt karna...plz god yeh tufan jaldi sy tham jaey mjhe samrat k pas jana hai wo bohat pareshan ho raha ga pata nahn kuch khaya bhe ho ga ya nahn.adi aditi bhe kb sy bhokey hon gey..tearz falz
meri khushiyon ka mausamOn dining table..
S.chalo adi mun kholo khana kha lo
Ad.nahn mom sy khana hai.
S.hey prince mery hath sy kha lo na mom aein ge tu unk hath sy kha lena,he shakd head in no n runz upstairz.
S.prince..adi..aditya baat tu sunoo..but he was faster..n samrat heard closing of door n closd eyez tear fell..
mere khwaabon ki taaviz
aditi was too at the edge of cryng but she didnt lose heart.she cant see her dad upset.she made him kneed down by shaking leg..n wipe his tearz.samrat stared at her W*H love n kised her tiny handz....
A.mein bhae ko bula k late hon ap woried mat ho mom a jaein ge na?
He noded n hugz her.she left..
mere sapanon ki tasveer
samrat movez outside..neil gave gunjan the cofe she mumblz thankz n movez to window wrapng the shawl around n starez outside. raining still..he rembrz moment with gunjan.their masti with adi aditi..their closeness,romance,hugz kisess...he rembrz how much she was afraid of thundrstormz...she rembrez how much she tightly used to hugz him... Both mumblez miss u n prayd 4 each other......
bin tere kaisi aas
Aditi-aditya
A.bhae
Ad.di mom k pas jana hai...he hugs her
A.bhae ro mat na mom a jaein ge na wo thora trouble mein hain na
Ad.wo tekh hon ge na
A.han bhae chalo khana kha lo dad woried hain na mom k waja sy wo hmare waja sy bhe hongey agar hm khana nahn khaein gey or phr dad bhe nahn khaein gey na
Ad.mama ny bhe kuch nahn khaya ho ga na
A.pata nahn.acha chalo na bhae dad akely hain na hmey unk 7 hona chahye
Ad.ok chalo.
woh jeet ho ya haar
they wipe tearz n came down saw samrat in rain geting wet lost in thoughtz tearz flowng heart prayng 4 her dearly wife...
Ad.dad barish mein behgg rahe hain di mom mana karte hain na dad ko flue ho jaey ga.
A.han tm aesa karo dad ko andar le k ao mein towel r dad k kprey late hon.
Ad.ap kasy lao ge di wo wardrobe to thora high hai na mein bhe apk 7 chalta hon ok
A.ok.
tere sang hai sab kuchh
adi aditi silently goes to sajan room they open wardrobe by standing on stole by aditi while aditya hold onto it.they came down W*H a towel whch was larger in lenght then their heightz. N samrats nght trouser shirt handlng W*H dificulty...they put them on sofa n then pulz samrat in.
tu na ho toh bekaar
n samrat was touchd n surprisd by their act.he could see their love n care just lyk his wife...
A.dad ap change kar lo thand lag jae ge ap bemar ho jao gey mom bhe gusa hon ge na wo jb aein ge.wo aein ge na?samrat hugz both of them,wipe their tearz n noded..adi aditi make his hairz dry W*H towel.he was lovng their gesture wshng gunjan to be there as they always enjy their lovly caring gesturez together..
bin tere kya hai jeena .........
adi gave him clothes n he smilez a bit n goes to change..
suni khaali raaten
he came out after changng n saw gunjanz pic lift it creasez hugs it,kises it,mumblez sory..love u...
He came down try to search out for adi aditi n at last find them in prayng corner....kneed down in front of idol...he was touchd n moves silently there too...adi aditi unaware of him.
ruthi feeki baaten
A.plz bhagwan je hmare mom ko wapis behj do i promise hum unko kbhe akely nahn chorein gey
Ad.mom ko satein gey bhe nahn
A.mein kdh sara home work kar lon ge.dad sy bhe nahn karwaon ge
Ad.mein bina tang kea dodh pe lon ga
A.jo mom dey ge chup kar k kha lon ge khaney ko bura bhe nahn bolon ge
Ad.mein raat ko jaldi so jaon ga tang bhe nahn karon ga mom.
A.plz hmare mom ko wapis behj do hm mom k begair akely hain.
Ad.dad mom k begair nahn reh saktey plz hmare mom hmko wapis luta do..
A.hm mom sy bohat pyar kartey plz hmare mom ko jaldi sy behj do....thrice had tearz
har aahat pe chaaukun
he feels like she is at back he turns but it was his imagination.......tears fall
samrat starez at the idol...
S.(in heart)plz mere chashmsh ko wapis behj do mein apni chashmsh k begair nahn reh sakta mere galti k saja usko mat de jea ga plzzz i promise nxt tym mein chashmsh ko akela nahn choron ga plz plz meri chashmsh ko kuch na honey dye jea ga..plz plz..
tujhko harsu dekhu
Adi aditi relze n lokd at samrat n samrat too look at them n they put headz in his lap n he kept on creasing their hairz n they kept on prayng in heartz...n dnt knw when get sleep..
tujhko hardam sochu
Gunjan was interptd in her thought.
N.gunjan..she lokd at him..ap phr sy ro rahe hain..plz roein mat tofan thamney he wala hai..
tujhko har pal chahuG.mjhey ghar jana hai mjhe samrat adi aditi k pas jana hai
N.adi aditi?
G.mera beta aur beti.he was rather surprisd.....
G.mjhey bus jana hai.she put that cup of cofe 4m whch she hadnt take a single sip on table n movez out of the house
tere bin toh jeevan mera hai intezaar
.neil was shockd at her action.he folwd her.
N.arey gunjan sunye tu abhe barish pori trah nahn ruke
G.mjhey nahn pata plz mjhey merey ghar chor ao plz..she almst begged.....she just want to be in samratz arm...
N.acha tekh hai aye mein apko chor ata hon.they setld in car n neil drivez car..he was v careful as roadz were slipery n treez too falen on road.
bin tere kya hai jeena
.gunjan was sobing prayng............scne divided in twoo where one gunjan sobingg...while second samrat staring at adi aditi n prayiingggg cryinggg
tere saath jiye jo pal.....
kuchh unse nahi badhkar
tere khaatir saans main loon
teri khaatir jeeta hoon
marne ki tamanna bhi
tere saath main rakhta hoon
tu hai jeene ki wajah
kar mera aitbaar
bin tere kya hai jeena
It was 6 am in morning when they reachd shergilz mansion.gunjan in wet dirty clothes...her unbrushd hairz..red eyezzz..she entrd in their heaven n cald out loudly samrat adi aditi..she searchd them in roomz n saw food uneaten on dining hall.her heart pinchd at last saw them in prayng corner her eyes get filled with tearz......
Reham o karam ho jaaye dobara
Reham o karam ho jaane do ishaara
Reham o karam ho jaaye dobara
Reham o karam ho jaane do khudara
..her husbnd was sleping in siting position havng back with wall adi aditiz head in lap......she movez to them..kneed down..move hand in his hairzz n placd head on his shoulder tearz fell...samrat s heart beating get faster...a strange sensation..he open eyez n find her.he immediatly held her hand.
S.chash...due to a fear that might it not be his imagination.....bothz eyez meet n seeing each other they lived again..........their heart beat back..imediatly gunjan hugs tightly he too hugz back even more tightly..n both cryng.
G.i am sory samrat..in her sobs...he broke hug cuped her face..move his hand again n again on her face in her hairz kising her 4head asuring himslf kisez her handzz.....
S.tm tekh ho na chashmsh tmhey kuch huwa to nahn..
G.samrat mein tekh hn.held hiz handz kises them
S.mein bohat dar gya tha i am sor..gunjan stopd him..
G.samrat meri galti hai mein ny tmhare baat nahn mani na..ise lea mjhey saja mile,she placd head on his chest...i am sory samrat i promise mein ab tmhare har baat mano ge zid bhe nahn karon ge..par plz mjhey akela mat chorna...he broke hug cupd her face kises her 4head
S.i m sory chashmsh i am sory i promise kbhe bhe aenda mein tmhey chor k nahn jaon ga i m sory plz apny samrat ko maf kar do....he held his earz..gunjan smilz W*H tearz n he too..n she too held her earz
G.apni chashmsh ko maf kar do plz wo aenda kbhe zid nahn karey ga..both smilz n hugs..gunjan lookd at adi aditi n creasz their hairz.they wake up as sensing her touch n seeing her their eyez get wetttt n hugz her imediatly n gunjan too hugz them back........
Ad.mom ap khahn chali gae the?hm itna dar gaye the..dad itna pareshan the..ap hmsy naraz the?she shakd head in negatve..phr kuin chor k gae the apney adi ko mein apsy nahn bolta he make face crossd armz around his chest..sajan aditi smilez W*H tearz.gunjan made him look at her n held earz
G.sory mama sy galti ho gae paka wo aenda chor k nahn jaein ge...sory..mama ko maf kar do.
Ad.ap apna mstake dubra to repeat nahn karo ge na ?phr sy to nahn choro ge na.she shakd in no
G.kbhe nahn
Ad.god promise
G.god promise..ab to gusa nahn ho mama sy?
Aditya hugs her
Ad.nahn apka adi apsy gusa ho sakta hai kbhe kya..gunjan smilez..phr sy na jana mom..samrat aditi too smilez n samrat creasez his hairz....
S.agar apk mom phr sy jae ge to hm mom sy naraz ho jaein gey r apk mom ko punshment bhe dein gey tekh hai.aditya moves to his lap
Ad.tekh hai.
Gunjan make a face
G.plz nahn mjsy naraj nahn ho gey plzz.samrat adi aditi smilez aditi hugs gunjan
G.mere princess!!
A.mom we miss u a lot..gunjan broke hug wipe her tearz
G.hey princeessz thori na roti hain sory mein phr sy nahn jaon ge paka promise..she hugz gunjan n noded...after a lot of promisez manfoyng.thankz to god.soriez..hugs...they get up..n gunjan saw neil standing sajan exchange glances.samrat signld adi aditi to go to their room to get fresh n sajan moves to neil.......
G.sory..wo..
N.itz ok mein chalta hon wo bus mein..
G.nahn rukein ap samrat sy tu miltey jaein..(turing to samrat)samrat yahe hain mr....gunjan forgot actualy she hadnt lsten his name W*H attention as more egrosd in samrats thought.samrat smilez as read her mind that she hadnt rembr his name..as knws his chashmsh couldnt even think about any1 else.except her samrat.
N.neil oberi
G.sory han mr.neil. jinho ny meri help k aur mjhey yahan tak chorney aye...
Samrat smilez n take a step 4ward n forward his hand...
S.samrat..samrat shergill.....
N.nyc to meet u.
S. Thanks a lot 4 doing ths great favour
N.hey itz ok musibt mein tu har koe madad karta hai r mein ny kuch bhe nahn kya
S.nahn tm nahn jantey k tm ny meri amant ko wapis sahe salamt hmarey pass pohancha kar kitna bara ehsan kya hai..
N.hey nahn ehsan kasa?yeh to mera farz tha..mein chalta hon.
S.nahn asey kasey?neil tm nahn jantey tm ny kya kia r tm na smjh saktey ho k chashmsh hmarey lea kya hai..iska jawb to hm kdh bhe nahn jantey...r i dont knw mein tmhey thanks kasey bolon.
N.nahn no need of thankzz.both smild..mein chalta hon.
S.hey neil why not u join us on breakfastt?kuin chashmsh?we wl feel pleasure.
G.han is trah hm apko thankz bhe bol paein gey..sajan smild at each other.at last on their extreme requestd he joind them..
S.chashmsh tm change kar ao..she noded n left....neil ao..they both setld in hall n chatted lightly......
S.aik mint neil mein abhe aya
N.sure.sayng it he left.while neil get lost in the beauty of heaven.........
Samrat enterd in room n find out gunjan in a perch saree wet hairz..he was lost im her.she blushd seeing him.samrat walks to her..both get closer.samrat put armz around her waist n she encircld his neck..n both kissed each other passionatly expresing love,fear,care,sory,pain,hapinezz.after a long pasionate kiss they stopd 4 breathng..n starez in each other conveying their felingzz
S.i love u chashmsh...
G.i love u 2 samrat...
Precpe:sajanz momentzz
What wil hapen nxt in sajaanz life?wil they had to face the dificultiez again or not?wil ths incidnt have gud or bad effectz on their heavnly lyf?so neil had entrd in sajanz lyf wl he be postve or negatve charcter?
Stay tune to magical journey of sajan
Do share ur views,
Do pres lyk buton or post coment...
Impateintly w8ng 4 repliez
soory for mistakess..........
Love u
Meri
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg omg meriii
u did fabulas job dar..
loved the part...
totally rocking...
just just mind blasting...
when i read last part i was really eager to read next part
bt really thnks a ton for update it....
really u showed evry emotions very well....
loved the bond of Aditi n Aditya.............n sajan..........

sajan rocks....
Adi n aditi rocks....

loveu meri...


do cont asap...

Love
'Radhi...
Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago

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