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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan
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omg omg meriii
u did fabulas job dar..
loved the part...
totally rocking...
just just mind blasting...
when i read last part i was really eager to read next part
bt really thnks a ton for update it....
really u showed evry emotions very well....
loved the bond of Aditi n Aditya.............n sajan..........

sajan rocks....
Adi n aditi rocks....

loveu meri...

do cont asap...

Love
'Radhi...

hey radhiii loved to seee ur such an awesome commentt........thank u so muchh......m gald u lyked the updatee...............thankss for such sweeeeeet commment😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Anjali_12
🤗Merii It was a fantastic update!!!!👏The way you wrote each persons feeling & emotions were amazing😃....Aditi & Adi really very cute!!!😭Really felt how kids when their mother is not with them & they don't know if she is safe!!!Sammy's condition was really heartbreaking!!🥺Its really hard for a husband to go through such a situation were he doesn't have any control 7 worried abt his wifes safely & well being!!Gunjan 's condition was heartbreaking too💔😭!!!Being alone with a stranger & missing her kids & husband & all bcse of her mistake..You portrayed all this so beautifully with out losing its essence..Neil 's entry still looks suspicious!!!😕The precap was scary & confusing..😕😲Please continue soon..

thanks a lot anjalii api for such an encoruagingg commenttt.......thank u soo muchh for lyking the updatee.............wil continue soon surellyyyyy.....thank u sooooo mushhhhhhhhhh

huggs

love u

meri

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Silhoutte92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE👏KEEP PM ME

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

heyyyy meerii

lovely update
u portrayed d emotions vryyy well..i hope evrythng remains well in sajans life
althgh i doubt dat wid neil's entry
thnx 4 d pm
n
cont soooooooooon

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Sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Simply superb Merii !!!! fantastic....loved it ....cont soon dear n thnx for the PM n sorry for late reply thoda busy thi .....

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-CreativeSoul-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

awsome mindblowing update

seriously loved it

the song sequence was so touching

adi aditi were so cute

i felt so sad for all of rthem

continue soon

love

tanzeel

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RICHA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

edited my rp on pg 15

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kritika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

really fab update...
thanks for the pm....
do cont soon....

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445892

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

hey gusys thanks a lot foorr ur appreciating comments loved to the coree..thank uu sooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhh guysss...heres the next udpate hope u lyked it..plz drop few lines for surellyy

Part 5
Adi aditi came down after geting fresh n saw neil in hall.....they both goes to him...
Kidz:namastey uncle.they took his blessings..he was shockd to see so much obiedent kidz.he hadnt saw kidz lyk that weather any1 who knows sajan can not be shockd..it was all the teachings of their parentz...
N.apka naam aditi aur apka adi....ryt?
Ad.aditya shergill...adi to mom dad bulatey hain.
A.aditi shergill..neil felz strange proud as they felt lucky to be called shergilzz.....
N:hmm..
A.uncle thankz ap hmare mom ko wapis chorney aye ap bohat achey ho.
Ad.han mom dad kehtey hain jo apk help kartey hain mushkil wqt mein wo bohat achey hotey hain aur apney hmare mom k help k isly dheer sara thanks.....
N.my pleasure ap dono bhe bohat cute ho..
S.hey adi aditi kya chal raha han?samrat sits n adi aditi was in his armz..neil uncle ko tang kar rahe ho??han??samrat said trickling in adiz stomach......n their laughz ecohez in shergill mansion.
Ad.stop dad stop plzz.samrats stopd ..
S.so neil yeh hmara prince hai aditya.
Ad.aditya shergl dad
S.yup yup sory..aditiya shergl aur yeh hmare pyari si angel aur princess aditi..
A.aditi shergill
S.yup aditi shergill......
N.bohat cute hain..
S.thanks so neil....just then gunjan enterz.she was wearing a beautiful white saree in which she was looking more beautiful n pure.....samrat was lost in her..gunjan blushd seeing his gaze n his eyez admiring her..neil followd his gaze n was amazd..had he seen more beautiful girl than her?
Gunjan walks to them hadnt seen neil gaze or expresionz
G.nashta laga dya hai aa jaoo..samrat smilez at her n she too
S.chalo neil..adi aditi..
N.ya sure.,..
They walks to the dining room...n settled.,gunjan servd them...breakfast had everythng whch could be in breakfast..sherglz continue their brakefast with usual masti n shugal....n neil was spechless seing the ideal n soo perfect family.......after breakfst n coffee..neil took leave n sherglz once again thankd him n he left..
Now in sajanz room...gunjan was siting in mid on bed while samratz head was in her lap n was helding one hand too n adi helding other hand puting head in her lap too while aditi 4m back having arm around neck.....every1 sharing how much they miss gunjan?..n gunjan were feeling bad..she promisd not to do that mistake again.....
G.adi aditi ap log home work kar lo phr hm sham mein ghomney chalein gey hm okk
Kidz.okk..they left..gunjan starez at samrat n movez hand in his hairzz...she knows how much he had been afraid when she was away 4m him n how much he had missd her n felt lonly without her..samrat open eyes n lok at her n find her eyez filed with tearz....samrat get up and made her head touch his chest n she too hugs him n some tearz came out of her eyez n get absorb in his shirt..
S.chashmsh..he said slowly departing her 4m himslf wiping her tearz n shakd head in no kissed her 4head made her lye down in his armzz.......she too becum closer to him..helding her handz...
G.samrat i m so...samrat placd finger on her lipz.
S.shhh...i know mistake huwe hai tmsy bhe thori se aur zyada sari meri.
G.nahn tmharae kase zyada sari?
S.tmhey le k mein gya tha to wapis bhe sath lana chahye tha na dosro k bharosey pe nahn chorna chahye tha
G..samrat asey to mat bolo wo dosrye nahn hmarey dost the.
S.asey dosti nibhatey hain...?
G.samrat mstake mera hai unhey kuin dosh dye rahe ho.?bhae ny to mana kiya tha par zid to mein kar rahe the na..
S.par usey phr bhe tmhara dheyan rakhna chahye tha.
G..samrat itni sari carz thein aur bachey kya kam damag khatey hain jo aik mera bhe wo dheyan rakhtey??
S.mein ny usy bola tha k tmhara bhe rakhey khayl
G.samrat bhae k koe mstake nahn hai ok..
S.i dnt knw agar tmhey kuch ho jata to....samrats grip on her unknowingly get tight n fear was visble in his eyez...
Gunjan quickly becum closer to him n cupd his face....
G.samrat...samrat held her handz n his eyez filled with tearzzz..
S.chashmsh mein bohat dar gya tha agar tmhey kuch ho jata?mera kya hota?adi aditi?chashmsh mein tmharey begair mar ..gunjan hugs him tightly..chashmsh phr sy mjhsey dur mat jana..
G.kbhe nahn samrat kbhe nahn...mein tmhare begar bohat akeli ho gae the...mjhey tmharey bina bohat dar lag raha tha...andhera..aur wo thundrstormz....he broke hug cupd her face wipng her tearz W*H thumb..mein ny tmhare hug bohat miss k,..
S.mein ny bhe chashmsh...i knw tmhey kitna dar lagta hai andherey sy.....aur tm hmesha thundrstrmz sy dar jate ho r mjhe hug karte ho...i knw chashmsh...tm ny mjsy bhe zyada sufer kya..merey 7 adi aditi to the..but tm tm to akeli the na....gunjan hugs him...
G.mera samrat mery 7 tha har lamha har pal har dam..mere sansoo mein..mere dhakanon mein.....
S.chashmsh i wl be always W*H u...hmesha tmharey sath.
G.mein bhe..both hugs each other.after few minz broke hug n samrat made her lye...
S.tm so jao chashmsh...tm sari raat nahn soe ho ge na..gunjan placd head on his chest..
G.tmharey seney pe sar na rakhon jb tak to nend kb ate hai..samrat smilez n embrce her in armz,n kissed her hairz.
S.i love u chashmsh
G.i love u too samrat

N they slept....
After a weekkkk...
Ad.dad plz help karo na..
S.no.
A.plz na dad help kar do na..
S.mein kuin karo help...kudhe karo jo karna hai.....
A.dad ap apni princess ko na bolo gey?
Ad.aur prince ko?
S.i hate emotional blackmailing...chaloo..
Kidz:ya we lve u dad u r the best
S.yeh makhan lagana band karo aur jaldi chalo is sy phely kkk...they saw gunjan cming 4m front..
S.tm log pechey sy jao i m cming
Kidz.okk hum car mein apka w8 kartey hain..they left.gunjan saw him.
G.samrat
S.yes chashmsh.
G.tm yahan pe asey kuin kharey ho??
S.wo..tmhara he w8 kar raha tha chashmsh.
G.mera w8?kuin?samrat pulz her near by putting armz around her waist n nuzlez in his neck.....
S.tmhare yaad a rahe the islea..gunjan blushd get freed herslf..n turned.
G.jhotey..samrat smilez..n held her hand 4m back....n puld her back..held her tightly by waist n nuzlez in her hairz...n removd her hairz n kissed her ear lobe..n whsperz
S.jhota kuin?gunjan blushd n he made her turnd in his armz n she placd armz on his chest n whsperz after kising his cheek....
G.tmhare rag rag sy wakif hon...both smild.samrat put her hairz at the back of ear...n creases her cheekz
S.hmarey prince aur princes chahtey hain k mein unk sath chalon...
G.khahn?
S.dnt knw..mjhey bhe nahn btaya...wo car mein bhar w8 kar rahe hain..jaon mein?
Gunjan smilez n noded..
S.u wl be fine na?his voice havng ful care n cocern 4 her
G.han samrat ghar pe he to hon....
S.nahn wo bus asey he tm bhe chalo adi adti to asey he...
G.nahn samrat jb unho ny tmhare 7 janey ko bola hai to koe baat ho ge na wo mjsy gusa ya naraz...samrat lookd at her whoz colur was now pale n were woried.he quickly cupd her face.
S.chashmsh..r u mad?.adi aditi tmsy naraz hon gey?aesa kbhe huwa hai kya??tearz came out of her eyez..samrat wipez them ...w8 mein abhe adi aditi ko bula k lata hon....gunjan stoped him.
G.samrat nahn mein tekh hon.wo mjhey bus asey laga k wo gusa hain?
S.kya huwa?chashmsh tel me na kya huwa?kuch bola adi aditi ny?
G.nahn wo bus sbhey sye weird behave kar rahe hain...sbhe nashtey k tym bhe unho ny tmhare hath sy khaya..sbha hug aur kiss bhe kudh kya..aur jb kehlny ko bola to kha k home work karna hai..dodh bhe nahn pya mjsy..aur....samrat saw pain of ignorance.his heart pinchd.he cant see his wife hurt..samrat quickly hugs her.she needz it badly.she was the mother who noticez every act of her child n were sensitve,caring,loving about her child unable to see them angry W*H herslf could go to any extent to love her child ...samrat creasez her back..
S.chashmsh.itz not lyk that..he broke hug n wipez her tearz...chashmsh they never becum angry W*H u..they love u.itz must be some misundrstandng dont wory i wl sort out it.okk dont wory everythng wl be fine.i promisd u....she noded n wipe her tearz..as knws it wl hurt him n he 2 wl be woried whch she cant say....
G.tm jao mein tekh hon adi aditi w8 kar rahe hon gey.he noded.n turnz to go when gunjan held his hand.......
G.tm adi aditi pe gusy mat hona aur na adi aditi sy gusey..he noded slghtly.gunjan presd his arm..promise.he noded..samrat tmhey meri kasam..samrat make a face.he cupd her face.
S.but they hurt u n i cant bear if any1 hurts u.gunjan held his hand
G.samrat they r kidz.our kidz n leave it i was over-reactng
S.no u are not.they dont suposed to behave with u lyk ths...
G.samrat!leave it!itz getting late.....they must be w8ng..gunjan kisd his 4head..dont wory.i m f9..i m hapy my hubby understandz me so much..love u..take care..samrat smilez n hugs her kisng her 4head too
S.love u 2 jaan.take care.n dont think it again ok.we wl be back soon.i wl cal u.she noded n samrat leavez.she smilez as saw their family pic kises it
Love u my prince n princes.sory if ur mom had made u angry.i wl make up it 4 us.ur mom lovez u a lot...
Precape:dont want to tel w8 4 it.
Why gunjan felt lyk that?what wl now samrat react n behave W*H adi aditi?why their kidz behavd strangely?what wl hapen nxt?how wl gunjan make up?where adi aditi wants to go W*Hout gunjan?
Wait 4 the nxt update.
Do coment if u consider it of worth
Thankz
Love u
Meri

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KuchBhiMatBol

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Posted: 14 years ago

#110

yes i m d one res 'EDITED' AWESME UPDATE YRR LOVED N Y D HELL NEIL IS MESMERIZED SEEING GUNJAN HATE HIM N M SURE ADI N ADITI R PLANNING A SURPRISE FR GUNJAN I M DAMN SURE NYWAYS SWEETY REALLY MIND BLOWING UPDATE LOVED IT

Edited by sweetsurabhi94 - 14 years ago