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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
Okay, so since most of you voted for long updates every week, me nd Maheen have decided to go with this option only.



We'll update every week with a long part.. Thanks alot everyone for helping us sort this out 🤗
Edited by -Hoor- - 14 years ago
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OMGGGGG .........................
FIRST part is howwww loved how u started it and all the characters
how they are linked alll awesomeeeeee and how they are all diff frm each other naaa too gooood👍🏼
yaar i sooooo can imagine ittttt its wow🤗
just soooo feels like im watching ittttt Hooor
i soooo wishhh someone makes a dramas on these guysss it would beeeee 😍😍😍😍
part 2 was wowwwwwwwwwwww
lol manav loved it when he said market main bohot wanted hain😆
cant w8t for ArMan&TaAnu too meeettt 😍
part 3 wow awesome yaar this is woww
lol 🤣 Manav with the mirror
and singing is just awesomeeeee😆
and loved when Taani came in and said
Bhai, agar tumhara public display of self obsession khatam ho gaya 😆
i sooooo looove ittt😃 what an meetinng😍
By God Cant w8t for your next partttt
your just justtttt sooo soooooo AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
KEEP UP THE ROCKING WRITINGGGGG🤗
TAKECARE
LOVEYOU🤗
SOFIA
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Edited by -Sofia- - 14 years ago
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Part 4
The split second the plate of rasgullah came out of the kitchen, Harshad, although feeling extremely bored, became alert and started inhaling the gratifying smell of the rasgullah. He looked like he had been awaken after long hours of sleep as he immediately pulled the long sleeves of his black sherwani, licked his lips and then grabbed the whole plate from the waiter, causing the waiter to be amused. On the other hand, Taani was standing idle, in the middle of the hall when a juvenile kid, about 4 to 5 year old came to her and pulled her lehenga.

Taani (turned around with an annoyed expression on her face): "Kaun hai? Ab mujhe kuch bhi'" (looks around but no one is there)

Kid: "Aunty, Aunty, coke do na?? please, woh waiter bol raha hai ke main bohot chota hoon black drink peenay ke liye.." (makes a puppy dog face)

Taani (looks down and laughs): "Beta woh coke nahi hai, woh aapke peeni ki cheez nahi hai' wait I'll get u a softdrink."

When Harshad gulped two rasgullahs together in his mouth, he saw Taani giving the kid a drink.

Harshad: "Waah! Main ya toh andha ho gaya hoon ya toh mujhe dejavu ho raha hai, aaj kal kuch zyada hi social service karne wale log nazar aa rahe hain." (rolls his eyes)

The moment Taani starts to leave, she sees harshad literally ogling at her and gets irritated.

Harshad: "Ek second (raises his eyebrow), yeh toh woh kachray wali larki hai.. Umm, I mean jis ne kachra uthaya tha woh'."

Harshad thought, 'she is beautiful, wow, lambe lambe baal, bari bari aankhein'. Wait, W*H am I thinking!? Ek socialite par itna time, please HK'

Harshad: "Im the man, larkiyaan mere paas aati hain" (he was eating while talking to himself)

Ankita: "aye, tere paas kuch aur karne ko nahi jo tu pagalon ki tarha apne aap se baat kar raha hai woh bhi apni bestfriend ki engagement ke din?" (stares at him)

Harshad (becomes vigilant immediately): "huh? Tujhe bakwaas ke ilava kuch bolne ko nahi aata, kya? Mere peechay naha dho kar parh gayi ho, I know you don't have a life of urself lekin still, GET A LIFE!" (sticks his tongue out)

Ankita: "Acha, chal chal zyada bhao mat kha' Ja kar apne liye ek drink le aa, teri favourite wali last bottle parhi hai' khatam ho gai na toh tu faaltu main rona shuru ho jaye ga.."

Harshad (starts to go to the kitchen): "Aur haan, main rota nahin hoon'"

Taani was in the kitchen trying to get herself a drink. Even if the waiters were present, she just needed another chance of exploring the place. She had poured the drink in her glass and was moving backwards when abruptly Harshad entered and she stepped on his foot. If the closeness between them could be measured on a scale from 1 to 10, they scored 9. Immediately, Taani twirled around, making her long silky hair hit Harshad's face' Harshad was about to retaliate but was enchanted by the close view of this beauty. Taani did not exactly notice boys, but who could ignore the tall, masculine, cinnamon balsam fragranced body standing so close to her. At first, she was awe-struck by his ocean like profound eyes but then her mind urged her to break the intense gaze. While on the other hand, Harshad's reaction was extremely peculiar. He just couldn't stop looking at her.

Harshad thought: 'abey yaar aankhein itni dair khulay rakhe ga toh aansoon nikal aaye gai'. Wait a sec, mere dimag se bakhi body tak ke signals kya weak ho gaye hai ya main paralyze ho gaya hoon, why cant I remove my eyes from her?!.'

Harshad saw that there was a strand of her hair on her glowing face, he thought of tucking it in her ear. The instance his finger made a contact with her skin, taani's heart skipped a beat and she instantly retreated. Taani, feeling awkward was staring at the floor while Harshad still gazed at her.

Kid: "Uncle, uncle itni bari aankhein karo gai toh bahir nikal aayein gi, aunty phir darr jaye gi!" (innocently)

Harshad: "Huh?? (looks here and there) Oh, nahi nahi main toh bas, umm, drink lene aya tha'" (bites his tongue)

Taani realizes that Harshad is the same person who was staring at her previously, so with an expression of agitation on her face, she turns on her heels and lifts her foot to walk back to her family when

Harshad (urgently): "Tum kahan ja rahi ho?.... oopss"

Taani (raises her eyebrows): "Excuse me? Do I even know you? Aur waise bhi i don't talk to those jo har waqt mujhe stalkers ki tarha stare karte hain."

Kid: "oooohhh, uncle ki bezati ho gayi'"

Harshad(when Taani leaves): "Abey chup.. bache ho bache hi raho'(sticks his tongue out) (talking to himself) Socialite main attitude bhi hai, waah! Lekin maine kyun kiya jo maine abhi kia? Arghh, I don't make any sense'."

Kid: "samaan bandh lo uncle'" (smiles)

Harshad: "huh?"

Kid: "Yeh aapse nahi patney wali'" (grins)

After numerous minutes of waiting, finally the queen of this evening arrived. As she descended the stairs with Ankita and a few others, she drew a large amount of stares towards her. The pair of eyes which twinkled the most, were of Mayank. As soon as he heard the squeals of the girls saying the 'dulhan' has arrived, he at once, pulled his head up to look at Nupur. He inwardly criticized so much time being spent on getting ready but afterall it was worth it.

'Wow she looked so beautiful in that blue/silver lehenga, a true dulhan. How could he of all, deserve such a wonderful, sweet and caring partner.' He thought

Manav(with his elbow on Mayank's shoulder): "Bhai, dil main itni tareef karne ka koi faida nahi hai, nupz ke saamne toh bas aap'.(his eyes widen) bezubaan ho jate ho'" (laughs) "Aur trust me, bhai, aap itne bhi bure nahi ho' I mean haan Nupz type larki mujhe milni chahiye thi lekin well, kuch nahi hota unka aapki life main aane se aapki boring life thori si toh fun ho jaye gi."

Mayank: "Nupur tumhari bhabhi hai, tameez se baat karo'"

Manav: "Aapko chirane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon main which includes flirting with my dear bhabhi!" (winks)

Nupur was looking severely stunning when she was in the middle of the staircase. As she was now clearly visible because of the lights, Manav's jaw dropped and he was astonished.

Manav: "God! Bhabhi kitni hawt lag rahi hain'. !" (blinks his eyes continuously)

Mayank tilted his head to have a look at Manav's expression which was of amazement. He couldn't help but get a little protective about Nupur as each and every bachelor in this hall, was gawking at her. Mayank immediately put his hand on Manav's eyes to stop him from eyeing his lady even if manav was his younger bro. Before Mayank could act, Manav whooshed past him to Nupur.

Manav: "Wow bhabhi! You look stunning!"

Nupur was side staring Mayank. He looked handsome in his blue sherwani which perfectly matched her own dress. Through her eyes, nupur asked him how she looked to which he gave his best smile indicating her that she looked superb.

Manav: "Bhabhi, kya hua??" (waves his hand in front of her face)

Nupur: "Um, kuch nahi. Thank u soo much Manav."

Manav: "always my pleasure." (bows down in a dramatic way when nupur's mother takes nupur to meet mayank's relatives)

When he straightens up, Ankita is standing in front of him, folding her arms.

Manav: "Chheeee. Kisko dekh liya, Anarkali ko dekhne ke baad kaneez ko dekh kar mujhe toh almost heart attack hi aa gaya." (clasps his hands together)

Ankita: "Dekho, mujhe tumse larne main koi interest'" (interrupted)

Manav: "Dikhao (scrutinizes her from head to toe)?! Hai! Tumhe. Mujhse. Larne. Main. Bilkul. Interest. Hai.!, aakhir tumhare aas paas zyada goodlooking larke toh ghoomtay nahi hon gai. Woh toh meri buri kismat hai ke main apna precious time tumse baat karne par zaaya kar raha hoon' "

All the close relatives of Mayank and Nupur had congregated on the stage where the engagement ceremony was to take place. Mayank and Nupur both were sitting on the chairs and waiting for their close ones to join them. Manav and Ankita both stepped on the stair to the stage, the same time.

Manav: "First you, my lady." (smiles)

Ankita: "Nahi nahi pehle aap jaye apni jaga lijiye."

Manav: "Ladies, first. I insist."

Ankita gave a nod of disapproval. She rethought about it and wanted to grab the seat next to nupur so she stepped in first but unfortunately Manav also stepped on the 3rd stair which caused Ankita to loose balance and hit the ground. At once, she led out a cry of fear but then she realized that a strong arm had saved her from the embarrassing fall. Manav had instantly grabbed Ankita's petite waist and a passionate eye lock took place between them. Manav appreciated the deep curls, dark brown eyes which the lady in his arms possessed. He was enthralled by her, she was so laraka but still so innocent. He smiled inwardly at her clumsiness. 'God, she looks so cute when she blushes' he thought.

Ankita conversely was traumatized by her own actions. She continuously stared at him, even if he was the biggest jerk she had ever met, he was, as a matter-of-fact, good looking. When Manav realized that he was staring at Ankita, he immediately dropped her on the staircase, with a smug on his face. Unfortunately for Manav, Harshad saw this and scurried towards them.

Harshad (flaring up): W*H? How dare you touch her? Tumhari itni himmat ke tum iske paas aaye!"

Ankita, still on the floor was witnessing this scene with pure enjoyment as Manav was about to get some retaliation, finally.

Manav: "Tu itna bechain kyun ho raha hai? Teri girlfriend hai kya??" (with a hint of curiosity on his face)

Harshad: "Jo bhi hai! Tujhse matlab? Yeh meri life ki bohot important insaan hai! Chalo Ankita(helps her stand up), aise jangle logon se baat nahi kiya karo.." (starts to leave)

Manav: "Oyei, tu ho ga janglee!" thinks 'Huh? Iska kya matlab ho sakta hai'kya yeh iski'iski, girlfriend hai?'

Taani (comes towards him while HarAnki get seated on the stage.): "Kya hua bhai? Itna gussa?" (worried)

Manav (places his arm on both her shoulders): "Kuch nahi yaar' Woh larka dekh rahi hai,(eyes to harshad) usne dimaag kharab kar dia hai. Faaltu ki chik pik karta rehta hai!"

As they got seated, Harshad's eyes drifted from Mayank/Nupur to Manav and Taani who were now literally purring in each other's ears.

Taani: "I swear!! Mujhe bhi us waqt ghoor raha tha. Kitna bara weirdo hai'" (gives a disapproving look to Harshad who was now feeling uncomfortable)

Manav was not paying attention to what Taani was saying as he was confused whether Ankita was Harshad's girlfriend or not. No, it looked more of like they both were lovers or so. This thought caused a little irritation in the pit of his stomach.

Harshad thought 'abey! Maine chhua toh kaise sharam se peechay ho gayi aur ab dekho, apne lover ke saath kya kya harkatein kar rahi hai' Is kaminay ko pata nahi kaise achi achi, shareef gharane ki larkiyan mil jati hain?!'

Nupur' mother: "Chalo, ab ring ceremony karni hai. Waise bhi bohot late ho gaya hai. Mere Chandigarh wale rishtadaaron ko aaj raat ko yahan se niklna hai'." (grabs the box of ring and gives it to Nupur)

Manav was standing on the right hand side of Mayank whereas Taani was behind Manav. On mayank's left side, his mother was passing him the ring. Nupur was surrounded by her best friends, Harshad and Ankita, while her parents were behind them. Funnily, Manav did not know that Harshad and Ankita were siblings and Harshad was oblivious that Taani was Mayank/Manav's sister.

Mayank held a solitaire ring in his hand waiting for Nupur to bring her hand forward. Manav was making funny faces to Ankita who did the same. This got Nupur a little distracted due to which she was shifting her view from Manav to Ankita, trying to understand the situation. Mayank, a little irritated by the fact that Nupur was being inattentive in her own engagement, when her about-to-be husband was standing with a ring, grasped Nupur's warm hand and brought it forward. This sent electric currents throughout Nupur's body. Extremely dramatic, but she was happy that Mayank had atleast held her hand.

Nupur was amazed by the selection of the ring, it was elegant yet beautiful and the best part about it was that it looked perfect on her fragile, long finger. Nupur's cheeks went red like a tomato when Mayank winked at her. 'Hayee! Kya dimple hai'' She thought. She couldn't help but smile at her new feelings for him even if it all started as a crush. Mayank had detected how shy she became due to which he held her hand tighter. When the rings were exchanged between the beautiful couple, the photo session took place. Many unfamiliar faces greeted the couple and took some pics with them. Finally, when most of the people departed from the venue, the close relatives got their turn.

The photographer first invited Mayank Nupur to get a snap of them.

Photographer: " Um, thora aur paas."

Nupur(gulps in an adequate amount of air. ): "Ab jaldi kare na, aur bhi logon ke saath photos leni hain." (gives a shy smile)

They both were, for the first time standing so close to each other. In the picture, none of them were looking at the camera, but instead, were staring at each other. Next, the three musketeers were to have their picture. Harshad sat on a stool in the middle, Nupur was kissing him on one of his cheek while Ankita kissed him on the other. Harshad was literally glowing like a tube light, with all the attention to himself. Their picture came out really cute. After that the photographer called the youngsters to get a snap. Mayank and Nupur were sitting on a chair while Manav and Ankita were on their knees in front of them. Harshad was standing behind Mayank and Taani because of being late, shared the seat with Nupur. They all were saying cheese just when

Manav: "Cheese khao gi toh phatt jao gi. Waise hi itni bhaari ho!" (murmurs)

Photographer: "Ji aap log baatein mat kare' Now smile!"

Ankita was sticking out her tongue to Manav who made stupid faces to her in the picture.

Photographer: "Ab baari hai larko ki.."

The moment Harshad starts to come towards Mayank,

Manav: "Tu kyun aa raha hai' bola na larkon ki baari, choti ronay wali bachiyon ki nahi'." (gives a sly smile while Harshad ignores his comment)

Their picture also came out fine, Mayank, Harshad and Manav, all 3 of them were looking decent.

Manav: "Main hi best lag raha hoon ga. After all pappu ke saamne toh koi dhondu bhi chale ga, tou main tou Tom Cruise hoon'."

Harshad: "Dekh tu apni itni tareef kare ga na toh yeh ghar ki divarein tak behri ho jaye gi."

Mayank: "haha, nice one Harshad. Acha chalo ab ek din ke liye itna kaafi hai waise bhi im really tired."

Nupur: "Ek second! Mere Manav ko kis ne side track kia, huh? Harshad, tu ab jaane bhi de na'. Becharay ne kuch bhi toh nahi kia'(touches Manav's face while he makes a puppy dog face)

Harshad: "Nupur tu ise jaante nahi hai yeh bohot bara nautanki hai'. Khair choro main immature logon se baat nahi karta."

Manav: "Thank you ronay wale uncle!" (grins)

Ankita was very tired so she left and Taani had dozed off on the sofa. Harshad watches her for a second before taking a large gulp of his drink: straight scotch. It burns a little on its way down but he welcomes the distraction it brings from his increasingly erratic feelings.

Nupur was glad that the ceremony was over as she was tired like hell. Her feet ached like she had been walking since a long time. Plus, she was tired of greeting each and every member of her and Mayank's family. She had greeted Mayank's mother, a good bye, and then she rushed to her room. Nupur's parents, mayank's mother and Mayank himself were sitting in the lounge and chatting.

Mayank's mother: "Beta Mayank, bohot raat ho gayi hai, jao ja kar Manav ko bula lao. Taani toh thak kar hall main hi soh gai hai."

Mayank: "Ji maa."

Mayank had scanned the hall, kitchen, drawing room and even the garden until he realized that obviously Manav would be with his newly engaged fianc. He went upstairs to Nupur's room where he saw Manav leaning onto her door, talking to her.

Manav: "Bhabhi, pleaseee na! Please chalo na!! mujhe aapko apna kamra dikhana hai.. Mere paas world ka best movie collection. Please aap kal aa jao, sirf thori dair ke liye hi sahi.."

Nupur: "Manav, aaj hi toh meri tumhare bhaiyya se sagai hui hai, kal nahi kisi aur din'"

Manav: "Nahiii Basanti. Kal kare so aaj kar, aaj kare toh abhi. Nupur bhabhi, mera koi true friend bhi nahi hai jise main apni secrets bata paon'.(in a childish tone) Please?" (makes a puppy dog face)

Nupur(finally defeated): "Acha bhaee sahi hai. Kal sham 6 baje, college ke baad."

Manav: "Yayyyy!!" (dancing and accidently bumps into Mayank who was now standing behind him) "Oooops." (and then he quickly leaves)

Mayank: "Woh, thank u uski baat maanne ke liye."

Nupur: "Thank u kis baat ka? Mera dost hai, us ke liye nahi karun gi toh kiske liye karun gi.(smiles) Btw Mayank aaj tum bohot ache lag rahe thai'"

'Im not the one who was looking good, you were looking beautiful' he thought.

Nupur (while trying to remove her necklace): "Kuch kaha kya?"

Mayank: "Umm, nahi ,I mean haan, I mean, Good night Nupur." (about to leave)

Nupur: "Arghh!"

Mayank peaks inside her room and sees that her chain is stuck on her net dupatta due to which she cannot take it off.

Mayank(without thinking): "Help?"

'mayank beta, chal neechay ja maa intezaar kar rahi ho gi'. Koi zarurat nahi hai koi stupid si mistake karke apna bana banaya impression kharab karne ki. Chal peechay khisak.' He thought

But unfortunately his heart had some other plans'

Nupur: "Haan woh, chain atak gai hai, please dupatte se alag kar do na, waise bhi mere andar ab koi aur cheez karne ki himmat nahi.." (yawns)

He slowly walks to her, she was standing in front of the mirror. His hands were literally trembling when he placed her long, straight, brown hair on her shoulder. Nupur, at last understanding the situation at hand, became flushed and clumsy. The moment Mayank's warm breath caressed Nupur's delicate neck, she had goose bumps. She slightly tilted her head to look at Mayank who was already staring at her. She was lost in the moment when both of them looked at the mirror. It showed two beings that were looking perfect with each other.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Note: Sorry for being late in updating, guys. Actually i was ill at the beginning of this week, nd then Maheen got ill so yeah 😆 Hope you guys like this part 😳



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Edited by -Hoor- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh God! I can't stop laughing at that cheeky kid! 🤣 🤣. Haiiiiii jealous Harshad 😍 😍 😍

Taani bhi na! She doesn't need to be so rude! 🤔. Yeh Harshad to ainvayi, ainvayi, ainvayi lutgayaaaa 🤣 🤣.

But I love Ankita and Harshad's nok jhoks 😆. Too cute!

Hoorie meriii and Maheen 🤗 amazing work, really 😉.

You've both got me hooked and wanting more! 😍 😆

Can't wait for more! Wanna see how Taani eventually falls for Harshad 😍 (how can she not!! 🤔 😆
Edited by Lubz.TaAnu - 14 years ago
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#96
hahahaha
AMAZING
i love it.......
u two make an awesome writtin pair......
thnx 4 the PM =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sofia-

OMGGGGG .........................

FIRST part is howwww loved how u started it and all the characters
how they are linked alll awesomeeeeee and how they are all diff frm each other naaa too gooood👍🏼
yaar i sooooo can imagine ittttt its wow🤗
just soooo feels like im watching ittttt Hooor
i soooo wishhh someone makes a dramas on these guysss it would beeeee 😍

part 2 was wowwwwwwwwwwww
lol manav loved it when he said market main bohot wanted hain😆
cant w8t for ArMan&TaAnu too meeettt 😍
part 3 wow awesome yaar this is woww
lol 🤣 Manav with the mirror
and singing is just awesomeeeee😆
and loved when Taani came in and said
Bhai, agar tumhara public display of self obsession khatam ho gaya 😆
i sooooo looove ittt😃 what an meetinng😍
By God Cant w8t for your next partttt
your just justtttt sooo soooooo AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
KEEP UP THE ROCKING WRITINGGGGG🤗


TAKECARE
LOVEYOU🤗
SOFIA
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Haina? If something like this happens, we two will pakka pakka faint 🤣🤪🤪
Aww muaah Sofii 🤗 Am so glad u liked it 😃

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Originally posted by: Lubz.TaAnu

Oh God! I can't stop laughing at that cheeky kid! 🤣 🤣. Haiiiiii jealous Harshad 😍 😍 😍

Taani bhi na! She doesn't need to be so rude! 🤔. Yeh Harshad to ainvayi, ainvayi, ainvayi lutgayaaaa 🤣 🤣.

But I love Ankita and Harshad's nok jhoks 😆. Too cute!

Hoorie meriii and Maheen 🤗 amazing work, really 😉.

You've both got me hooked and wanting more! 😍 😆

Can't wait for more! Wanna see how Taani eventually falls for Harshad 😍 (how can she not!! 🤔 😆



The kid's idea was entirely Maheen's 🤣 Just imagine all this happening 😍😍🤣
Haha haan HK tou lut gaya (jaise hum bhi lut gaye the tuesday ko 🤣☺️)

Aww thanks a ton for liking it, Lubzie 🤗 Nd yes, how can taani not fall for Harshad 😆😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwwww so sweet of manav to hold ankita from falling but then he is so naughty too for just dropping her😳 i can't wait for more of their nok jhoks😛. they both sound so adorable fighting with each other and showing faces and we got see manav's little concern for ankita😍😍 hayyeeee i can totally imagine both in their roles. if it was for real show, they would have been so good.😍😍

loved the scenes between harshad and ankita. i love their fights but aww we got to see harshad's protective side towards ankita as his sister.😳 so sweet of him😃. and his and taani scenes are funny. poor harshad is totally latto over taani but taani is not paying any attention to him at all😔 hopefully soon she will.

mayank and nupur's relationships are sweet and shy compare to other both quite a contrast to their actual character on the show and totally loving this devar babhi relationship👍🏼

hoor and @angel lover awesome post..i want more now 😉ur story is so catchy and loved the way u describe every scene😃👍🏼plz write another one fast can't wait for it😳
Edited by CuteCherry - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey thanks for the pm
had caught up with this ff yesterday
and so good to read the next part today itself
really fabulous part
all the couples are cute
loved mayur last scene

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[NOCOPY] P U R I T Y O F S O U L S T E A S E R "bungle ke piche teri beri ke niche aha re aha....kanta laga!!!" The song was too loud in the...

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Posted by: SillySoni

2 years ago

Sarang | AarYa FF - Chapter 28 page 24 - 27/1/25 Sarang | AarYa FF - Chapter 28 page 24 - 27/1/25

Hi guys, thanks for loving Dolent!! Here is my new story. As the title suggests this ff is about love and affection 💖 Soon I'll post the first...

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